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By : riddlestar
  • From ANON - Anon on March 19, 2009
    Chapter 12: Love how you described Sasuke’s frustration. ____ Oh, so he was being deliberate. ____ Love the rising tension. I like it how Naruto says the effect the Kyuubi’s having on himself and how Sasuke’s “hackles rise.” ♥ ____ Hmm. So much for subtlety. ____ Forget how those lips’ll look, Sasuke—imagine how they’ll feel. ;-) ____ Heh—Sasuke feels that blame has to be assigned somewhere, and now it’s turned onto him. ____ The feelings during the lemon are captivating. ____ Love the line, “But then doubt returned, dark and heavy . . .” It made me feel it. ____ Love how Sasuke’s worried about how he’s not sure what to feel. He’s worried about them surviving through . . . his possible wrong response. ____ Yeah, I can imagine that Sasuke would worry over serious decisions. He knows how to keep a mood somewhat dark. =) ♥

    It was pretty good! ^_^

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  • From serenagold on March 19, 2009
    This chapter was great!! I absolutely loved it. (The smut was good too.)

    I hope Sasuke is able to overcome his fears of intamacy. Also, how hot was it that Naruto's teeth were a bit sharper and his behavior a bit feral. >:) hehehe I loved it.

    Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Sailor Kismet on March 18, 2009
    I can't believe I missed so many updates! But then again I have a job now that keeps me out late and I've been trying to also give the computer a rest. These chapters were great. I'm so happy to find them after my long hiatus from reading Naruto fics. I love that Naruto is wearing Sasuke down! just little bit more Naruto! Please updates as soon as possible! ^_^

    Your fan,
    ~Kismet
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  • From ANON - Nami on March 17, 2009
    Read the whole thing in one fell swoop, my goodness! I love this fic! This last chapter really had me blushing a bit, and grinning. Sasuke calling Naruto 'dobe' during was very fitting and made me grin. But it really did make me just want to shake him and wish for him to give in and just let Naruto pound him through a mattress. And Sasuke is nice and complicated as he should be. And Naruto is so... amazing. I can't think of anything else to describe him that's fitting. Really, they both are. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Ljiljana on March 17, 2009
    God, I love this story! And it took me so long to read this. Sorry? Sorry? ^^'

    There's something unholy about the way you write tension between them, it's just so.freaking.good! And I love your writing style (I think it's a little bit similar to mine, actually), it's so clear and easy to follow.

    And I'm sorry the review is kinda blah, I had a really long, tiring day. I'll give you a proper one when the next chapter comes out. XD
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  • From ANON - purple-er on March 17, 2009
    Finally! now things are going to get really interesting *grin grin*
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  • From ANON - purple-er on March 17, 2009
    hey, awesome dialogue. This is really impressive,- I like the way Naruto has a believable dark side which is not the Kyuubi. *evil laugh*
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  • From ANON - purple-er on March 17, 2009
    I like the way the characters are fleshing out. Its believable, and well written.
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  • From ANON - purple-er on March 17, 2009
    hey great chapter!
    keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - Adele on March 17, 2009
    wow, im frankly really really surprised that you updated so early!! and happy!

    this chapter was good. the smut was good too. not as good as your one shot, but still good. you dont need to worry. update soon ~
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  • From hanyou on March 16, 2009
    so i just sat here and read it all, and while there are plenty of things that i would suggest correcting (especially in the first chapters before you got the beta) it wasn't enough to throw me off of this plot. it's a fun and interesting story. i like that you took the cliche of naruto's going into heat because of the fox and made it your own.

    naruto is too cute in this story. i love that he's worried about not only how it'll affect his teammates and his partners, but he's worried about still trying to be himself at the same time. and after his reaction to sasuke, he's worried more about sasuke than he his himself. how perfectly cute and in character for naruto. and sasuke, poor confused little man. i love that he's not even really sure why he's doing some of the things he's doing- either that or he's way too scared to make an admission to his actions. he's trying to be cool, and failing miserably.

    naruto's cockiness in regards to sasuke is a nice touch. it shows just how much he knows about sasuke and how much faith he has in him to trust him to take the steps without having to be forced. and i really like that he isn't being forced, it'll make it that much more intimate when they finally do take the next step in their relationship. and poor panicking sasuke at the end of chapter 12. i like that he was freaking out, that he was scared about what was happening, but lost in the pleasure of it all too. it's a nice and wonderful touch, it makes it that much more realistic and believable. plus, scared sasuke is one of my favorites.

    i like the dynamics of the relationship between the boys. it's fun and we can believe it as it progresses. they are growing together. naruto is doing everything he can to not push sasuke into a relationship, and at the same time, he's encouraging things to happen.

    i like this story a lot. i really do. i can't wait for the next update, and i really hope it's not long in coming. btw, if you need beta help, feel free to use me darling. i'm on y! with you.
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  • From LadyWolf on March 16, 2009
    I hope sasuke get's a clue....he can only be happy with Naruto.

    Post soon!!
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  • From hikarichan20 on March 16, 2009
    I enjoyed the smut - not to say I wouldnt, but I thought it was written well and appropriate for the stage their relationship is in. Full blown sex would've been woah too soon and anything less then getting naked together with all their tension would've been a let down. So I think you did a good job! Also, you do well with expressing Naruto's... -need- and urgency not for sex, but for Sasuke himself. I've always loved this story... ^___^ Can't wait for moar!
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  • From ANON - Ellie on March 16, 2009
    I'm sorry I didn't comment on more of your chapters, but I was just so interested in reading them. *__*

    You do have some pretty explicit grammar issues, (XDD), but your story's good.

    I'm dying for some more x___x

    Appease your fans! ;___;


    Hahaha

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  • From Munez on March 16, 2009
    You rule. The smut was fine, very fine. I wish they'd gone... all the way. *wriggles eyebrows*

    Can't wait to see more! God, Sasuke's such a hardheaded brat.
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