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By : riddlestar
  • From ANON - anonanon on July 11, 2009
    I just started reading this fic and I have to say, it's going great! I love the situation that you put Naruto in with his rut situation. Thank you for posting, please update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2009
    Uh,oh! That's not good! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From YuukoUchiha on July 11, 2009
    you know that last thing about the kid suddenly seemed suspicious

    I loved when Naruto left the place and Sasuke came closer to him... idk why (maybe 'cause I'm weird) but I really liked that part ^^
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  • From ANON - katsheswims on July 11, 2009
    Great chapter!

    At first I thought Yahko was the target walking by, but he's actually Yahkio going to the house...

    I forget why they have to kill him, but I wonder if there is a misunderstanding? Maybe not.

    I wonder where Neji is...

    I can't wait for the mission to be over so Sasuke and Naruto can really talk (and stuff...).

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From blugirlami21 on July 11, 2009
    It was good, it was a little uneventful plot wise but there was some very good advancement on the relationship front. I think Sasuke is beginning to give in to his feelings and Naruto is getting better at controlling his. I am a little worried about Neji not being reachable, he's not the type to disappear from his responsibilities in such a way. It looks like Sasuke may have to detain Yahiko before the plan has even started, everything seems a little too easy at this point, I hope that it really is as simple as it seems.
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  • From ANON - chloe on July 04, 2009
    new reader egerly awaiting more. you are a very good writer. :)
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  • From ninetailedfoxx852 on July 01, 2009
    oh man! i kinda forgot about this story- IM SORRY! but when i saw an update i was so excited! i was pretty far behind but man did it get good! loved the little smut scene you gave us-- very sexxy! ;3 i love how sasuke is the workin in the hotel-- thought it would be naruto but this is so much better! sasuke talking with people!? i knew it could only be a matter of time till he hit someone X3 that was the best!! please update soon! im back on track and yearnin for more!
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  • From Ljiljana on June 28, 2009
    I love you and I'm leaving this only to make your large numbers even bigger! XD
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  • From Sigart on May 23, 2009
    Yaaaaay! ^^ Awesome chapter. I feel so sorry for both Naruto and Sasuke they can't just figure it out, but on the other hand it makes for excellent tension!

    And Sasuke punch to Ara was perfect.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2009
    (*reading the A/N*) “Just a couple more to go.” Really?? I would’ve thought it’d have a long way to go. ____ And you’d be surprised; some OCs are pretty good if they’re done right. =)

    Chapter 13: Kama as in “Kama Sutra”? =) ____ Mmm, might want to connect “Tanaka” and “san” with a little dash in the middle. Same with “Uzumaki san” and etc. ____ Just goes to show, Sasuke, that Naruto feels like he owns you. ____ I wonder if Naruto gave her a family name for himself. ____ Well, so far she seems okay to me. ____ “It took a moment for Sasuke to get used to the site that greeted him.” Actually, in that context, it’s “sight”. ____ “Tanaka was watching his reaction closely.” Hmmm, I wonder if she’s onto him. ____ Yeah, she’s onto him, alright. ____ Wait, “Yahiko”? Is that a coincidence?? ____ Why would it be suspicious if the owner talks to the receptionist more than once? Sounds normal to me. = ____ (*snort*) Lol at the dude with pink hair and Sasuke’s thoughts about it. XD ____ This is cool seeing undercover stuff like this. And Naruto definitely wants to own Sasuke, there’s no denying it. ____ “Though, once they see you, that wont be for long.” Two things: One, you forgot the opening quotes before though, and Two, “won’t” needs the apostrophe. ____ I always love it when Sasuke thinks a woman looks pretty, even if he’s not into them. =) ____ Heh—I wonder if this woman is at all like him. ____ Hah—“Sutra”. Nice name. ____ Lol at Sasuke’s surprise at feeling a woman’s angry looks turned onto him. ^^ ____ Well, either way, this woman is a real piece of work. ____ So Konoha’s not a small town? Seems kinda little to me. ____ “He thanked god that no one he knew could see him like this.” Yet. >_>; ____ I like the new feelings Sasuke’s having. He’s not used to women glaring at him like that, nor being ordered around. This must be slightly challenging for him. The challenge to endure. ____ “Maybe Naruto should have taken this job after all.” But what would stop him from jumping the clients or staff? ____ God, smiling is so not him. Poor guy.
    I wonder how Sasuke feels about it. Last I checked, he didn’t seem too thrilled. Then again, maybe he’s changed his mind over the past two weeks. (Lol, yeah right.) ____ “Back fire” should all be one word. ____ BWAHAHAHAHA!! “Was he always going to have to be the mature one in their relationship?” XDDD If only Sasuke could hear that! ____ Boy, I hope they don’t jump some poor random guy instead. ^^; ____ I don’t get that chakra signature thing. If Sasuke could use it, he wouldn’t need Karin in the manga. ____ Interesting how Sasuke’s getting worn out by the whole business. ____ Awwww. ♥ ____ “He just couldn’t fathom why was Sasuke fighting it so hard.” Might want to switch those two words. ____ Ahhh, interesting, Naruto’s having second thoughts. ____ (*sniff*) I can just feel the frustration! Poor Naruto. Poor Sasuke. ó_ò
    Oh god, the pain! ^^; ____ “He told himself he should be used to this by now …” That doesn’t necessarily means he can take it in stride. I’ve seen the way he lashed and glowered at Ino and Sakura whenever they hit on him when he was 12. And it’s worse here, because he has to be polite. ____ NICE ONE, Sasuke! “Only when you give respect do you receive it in turn, Ara san.” >:D And Ara sounds like a wimp, since “san” is supposed to be kind of polite, too. ____ Crap. ____ No! Don’t do it! Say “To hell with you,” and quit! Tell this fatass to fuck off! Come on, Sasukeeeee! (*whines*) ____ Hahahaha, even better. Take that, jerkoff! >D ____ Oh wow. That’s a surprise. Hayate’s not kissing that guy’s ass. ô_ô ____ Unless, Hayate’s setting a trap for Sasuke. A bit of advice, though: her attitude now seems to be completely different from earlier. It’s possible for her to be a little stressed out and not so … I dunno, weepy about it. Heh—actually, she could be beating herself up in the “*grumble*grumble*” way that Sasuke does privately. I can kind of see him trying to pacify her while he’s mentally grumbling to himself about the whole thing as well. ^^ ____ Dun dun-dun-dun.

    So far, I think the chapter’s great. I think that last scene with Hayate needs just a little more work, but other than that, it’s mostly fine. =) ♥
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  • From Ljiljana on May 21, 2009
    You call this regulary? X( You know what I call it? I call it not nearly enough!

    Okay, okay, so it's not your fault you have a life and all... But I was just getting really relaxed, enjoying so how Sasuke's fist hit (stupid deserving) people on their own, and then - over. D: And there's this huge cliffhanger, too. Meany!

    Sorry. I know I'm whining. I just love the story, you know?

    =D
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  • From Munez on May 21, 2009
    God, I love this story. I'm so sad to know that it's soon over, but it's been a fun ride. Poor Naruto and his frustration. Sasuke just loves making things difficult, doesn't he?

    Bah, I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Twinkle on May 21, 2009
    Hey this is me citrine59/twinkle! Oh my god, you brought out Sasuke's character so well in this chapter...he was totally IC. He was struggling not to be too antisocial in a job where he has to please clients...you pulled it off really well! I love Sutra's personality. There's no work place without an easy going, funnny gossiper like him. AND Sasuke UZUMAKI FTW!!! I rofled so bad when they were like "ya ya, ur Sasuke Uzumaki, we know already!" But the thing is that I read the other 12 chapters like a month ago - in just one single go...haha remember i told u i skipped class to read it? I wasn't kidding. I have to go back and read the entire thing again to jog my memory about the plot. Good job with this chapter. Can't wait for the next part. Do well on ur exam!
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  • From serenagold on May 21, 2009
    ha! What timing!! ^^


    Keep up the great work!
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  • From Dragon7 on May 21, 2009
    I can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter.
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