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Reviews for My Favorite Mistake

By : riddlestar
  • From Greenstages on December 07, 2007
    sounds awesome. From the reviews I wasn't so sure about his Naruto top thing. But perhaps he's not?
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  • From ANON - FeionPhylar on December 07, 2007
    Wow. I wanna see this! LoL Good start! Update.
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  • From MissMayumi on December 07, 2007
    hahah, oooh. Definetly update soon! :D
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  • From shadowsonata on December 07, 2007
    OH NO! You have got to hurry up and update! So good, so good. *drools while imagining the up and coming lemon*
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on December 07, 2007
    Oooh! I'm definitely hooked! This story sounds really interesting. What's gonna happen between Naruto and Sasuke? I can't wait to find out.
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  • From LindyStar on December 07, 2007
    This was great writing so far...I'm looking forward to the D/s, Non-con and anal, though!
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  • From ANON - kera on December 07, 2007
    This chapter was really good and peaked my interest, I would love to read more soon.
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  • From serenagold on December 07, 2007
    Woo hoo! If reading your description of this story is correct, then FINALLY someone will have written a Naruto in heat story that doesn't end with him on the bottom. >:D hehehe, I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

    As for a critique, overall I did not find the transition too confusing. At first, yeah, I though Naruto's pov was a continuation from where Sasuke's left off, but by the end it made clear and perfect sense. I also loved the fact that you kept Naruto filled with self doubt so that he couldn't possible make the assumption that people talking about someone good looking couldn't possibly be about him. It seems like the kind of internal monologue his character would have. ^^ Nice touch. Sasuke's still a jerk, but he wouldn't be in character otherwise. Keep up the good work! I look forward to chapter 2.
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  • From ANON - Meg on December 07, 2007
    NICEEEE!!! quite well written. and i am really looking fwd to the next chapter~~
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2007
    Great first chapter! Please continue!!
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  • From tash1021 on December 07, 2007
    uh oh....sasuke it coming face to face with a demon heat
    *evil smile*
    update soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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  • From Sinslayer on December 07, 2007
    the story's really interesting so far....come on...add some chaps....(~__^)
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  • From bluegenjutsu on December 07, 2007
    Very good!! You have me intrigued with this first chapter!! :)
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