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Reviews for My Favorite Mistake

By : riddlestar
  • From serenagold on February 26, 2008
    I kinda really liked this last chapter a lot. =^^=

    Naruto has long since bypassed denial and, in quite an appropriately named chapter, has accepted his fate and is trying to do something about it. I loved the "morning after" cuddling and, as usual, love the unresistible neck bites. Sasuke is still in the denial stage. I wonder what his thoughts will be when he sees the bite marks.. hell, next chapter we got some Tsunande moderated confrontation coming up, and we all know what kind of manipulative trickery she's most fond of... hehe, it promises to be an exciting chapter! :D


    Keep up the good work. You keep writing and I'll keep reviewing. ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2008
    (I review as I read.)
    Chapter 1: To the A/N: Actually, that was a pretty decent summary in my opinion. It leaves a nice bit of mystery.
    I really like the line in the second paragraph beginning with, “One of the things he despised [. . .]” Nicely phrased, and it makes sense. Actually, that whole paragraph is good. . . . Likin’ it, likin’ it, nice writing. . . . He’s one hell of a grouch in this. :) . . . . Ooh, good one: “They all resided [. . .]” Really good one. =) . . . . “mus-” what? . . . . Um, so far I think Naruto’s a little too . . . cutesy, I guess. . . . Umm, yeah, you’ve got some good characterization for Sasuke in this story, but it’s making Naruto seem a little superficial. õ_o . . . . Interesting idea: Sasuke gets absorbed in his own thoughts, reacts to them, and then takes it out on someone else. And that’s why some people would be all like, “What’s his problem? Oh, he’s always pissy.” ^^ . . . . Why would Lee on Sakura’s team bother her? She likes him as a good friend, and he’s not that pushy when it comes to his crush. Or maybe it’s just for the sake of the story . . . (*shrugs*) Oh well, forget it. (*sweat*) . . . . Hmm, that was weird, Naruto just turning away without saying goodbye.
    Oh, okay, that explains it. ^_^ . . . . Red-light district? It’s serious enough to need that? Wow. . . . Heh. Are those the same women that Sasuke passed? Nice bit in that paragraph about how nervous Naruto gets when he sees huddles. . . . Half-erection? He’s that heated and it’s only half?? O_O Jeez. . . . “He mentally ran through [. . .] first time.” That sounds kinda mean, but I doubt that’s what he’s thinking. Is it a requirement? . . . . Nice description of Sasuke’s entrance. I wonder what he’s doing there, though.
    I’m interested.
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  • From elementalmoon on February 26, 2008
    I liked it! Great job! Hopefully we'll see more soon! Until then :D
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  • From ladywolfTerri on February 26, 2008
    *lol* great chapter!! Poor Sasuke, talk about being on the confusing end of things!!.. and Poor Naruto! Having to deal with confronting him so soon!.. hmm, though I can't wait to find out how he reacted to the hickeys... XD.. that should be a riot!! Hope you can update soon!!
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  • From jbjewel on February 26, 2008
    Tsunade at her most delicious evil. Pretty please. This should be good.
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  • From ANON - sasuke_lover on February 26, 2008
    *blink*...I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!!! WOOOOOOOWWWWW>>> UPDATE SOON GIRL!
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  • From ANON - sam on February 26, 2008
    just found this..and i am a fan. *bows*
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  • From ANON - Meg on February 26, 2008
    wow, a quicker update than i expected. lol. nice long chapter. update soon.
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  • From ANON - Meg on February 26, 2008
    wow, a quicker update than i expected. lol. nice long chapter. update soon.
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  • From ladywolfTerri on February 13, 2008
    Glad to see the update!!... hmm.. wonder what Sasuke will do when he sees his neck??.. that will be amusing.. XD

    Please update soon!!!
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  • From basilika on February 13, 2008
    it's really good! i'd love to read some more. anyway, if you need a beta, i'd do that. ;)
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  • From digiditz on February 13, 2008
    It may have been short but I enjoyed it none the less. I was very happy that Naruto did not complete advantage of Sasuke even though the opportunity was there. I'm hoping that he will be able to convince Sasuke to be a willing participant in their little mating ritual.
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  • From ANON - PureEbil on February 13, 2008
    Excellent! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From Dragon7 on February 13, 2008
    I Love it chapter 5 was great and I know chapter 6 will be even better so update soon.

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  • From nekochannya on February 12, 2008
    well if she has not reviewed any chapter and you are on your own... then I see no problem with it.. it was really good..nyah! ^>^ So keep at it. I can help if you want, though not a lot 'cause I promised to beta for another person already. If you have too many problems or you get stuck or nobody else offers, then mail me, ne? just know that I am studying for my master's... nyah!
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