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By : riddlestar
  • From MichiTheThird on March 08, 2008
    ARGH! DOGGONE IT! Who else is going with them!? Why couldn't they just tell Sasuke what's going on with Naruto!??? *sigh*
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  • From Raholea on March 08, 2008
    i just found this one... and me likey. will keep an eye out on it. and would love to see what happens between sasuke and naruto. *evil cackles*
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on March 08, 2008
    Thank you for updating. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks
    Slave
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  • From serenagold on March 08, 2008
    Haha! Tsunade is so evil sometimes, its great. ^^ So much for "let him come to me." hehe.

    Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
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  • From basilika on March 08, 2008
    ae, you don't have to apologize! Just know - if you ever need help, I'm willing to be your beta. ~_^v No worries~! And work hard, there's a lot of people (including me, hehe) waiting for the updates!
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  • From ANON - sam_88 on March 08, 2008
    eee...more girl :D
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  • From ANON - Meg on March 08, 2008
    im so glad you updated. hahaha.. poor sasuke. one month with horny naruto.. *laugh*
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  • From ValheruYaoi on March 04, 2008
    yay !!! i want more !!! more more more more more :) lol this has me really interested >< guess it's a good thing, but wasn't really expecting it cause not many good stories are on this site. (well good in a plot kind of way.)
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  • From MichiTheThird on February 28, 2008
    GUDDAMIT NUUUUU! Nuuuuu! It was getting so good! >< Gaaaah...what's Tsunade's plan??? What's going to happen!? Please update soon!!
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  • From nekochannya on February 26, 2008
    Pray tell what is the plan Tsunade san???? I wanna know! Nyah!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2008
    Chapter 6: I like the opening scene, but um you spelled “damned” as “dammed.” . . . Aww, this scene is so cute. :heart: . . . . Heh. I’ll betcha Sasuke’s gonna wake up while Naruto’s hickeying him. ^^ . . . . Nice ending to that segment too! ^_^
    Oooh (*chuckles nervously*) Sasuke’s pissed. I love how he tells Naruto to shut up, that was cool writing. And then the insight of what happens when Sasuke loses his cool. ^_^ . . . . Hawt dayamn, you bet your ass he’s hot when he’s mad! It’s one of my favorite things about him! =D . . . . Ah well, I would feel sorry for you, Naruto, but you put him through hell last night and then got him in the SO-LAR PLEX-US. Under those circumstances, getting socked in the face is pretty mild. ô_o
    Omg, I had no idea Sasuke was going to think that way in the next scene when I wrote that sentence up there. 9_9 . . . . “Counting to ten twice and failing.” Good one. XD . . . . Oh, so he’s not a virgin? Interesting. . . . Really, Sasuke, is it any wonder that some people in town still don’t like you if that’s how you treat the people you have sex with? . . . Nice job on his denial and his musings. . . . This is really going to be a challenge for Naruto if Sasuke’s purposefully going to make it harder for him. . . . Whoa, I love the paragraph starting with, “He picked up his strewn clothes.” I always think it’s cool when the reader stops right when the character stops, because they’re thinking on the same track. =D . . . . WAITAMINUTE!! “Strewn clothes?” O.O Did he sleep naked? You didn’t mention that little detail! Oh wait. (*checks*) Oh. “Pale, broad back.” Should’ve guessed. ^_^'' . . . . Oh, that was mean, Sasuke, ripping the curtains on the way out.
    I like Naruto’s feelings in the office. Cute. ^^ . . . . Whoa, bad choice of words, Naruto: “We had a fight, he lost and blacked out, so I sort of . . . you know.” No, she doesn’t know! That kind of talk can make enemies, damn it! O_O . . . . :) This scene is cute. Tsunade’s laughing. ^^ . . . . Nice touch about his hair falling in his face. . . . Huh. Naruto had that foresight? Interesting. . . . Um, “Naruto could be so mule-is sometimes.” I think you mean “mulish.” . . . . I like Naruto’s argument. . . . Ohhh man, what an evil way to end this chapter! =D
    I liked it! I really liked it! Please don’t disappear before this fic is finished, it’s too good for that! =D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2008
    Chapter 5: Huh. This chapter has a title. I don’t think the others did. How come? . . . . Oh man, I love this line: “The teme needed to learn to stay calm and comfortable around and underneath him.” He intends to have more moments like this one in the future, doesn’t he!! ^_^ . . . . Satisfaction at seeing someone you like get hurt in the solar plexus? That freakin’ hurts! õ_o . . . . Luuuuv this scene. :heart: . . . . I wonder how high up Naruto bit him? Sasuke does have a habit of wearing high collars, after all. . . . Hmm, good question, Naruto, good question. By the way, you might want to fix your bathroom a little, especially if you plan on having Sasuke over to visit in the future.
    Interesting dream. That’d make another good picture. . . . Man, that dream was cool! And it’s hard to write cool dream scenes!
    No, it wasn’t boring at all! I liked it! And no, the characters aren’t too OOC, their IC enough! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2008
    Chapter 4: Yike! First of all, please put spaces in between paragraphs! My poor eyeeeeeeeeesssss!! H’okay, now that that’s out of my system, on with the story! ^_^
    “Eerie” is right! Did Sasuke catch him at a “bad time?” ^^ . . . . Love this creepy scene! =D . . . . LUNGE! =D
    Dude, Naruto, he’s not staying because 1) He’s not like that, and 2) You’re creeping him out. XD . . . . He’s kind of “gone,” isn’t he? . . . . Love this tension. . . . And why the hell, Naruto, would Sasuke admit defeat? He’ll fight until he falls over in a faint, you know that! . . . . Okay, I’m getting worried for Sasuke here. Lust isn’t the only thing that clouds Naruto’s brain when he gets like this, he also gets violent. And if he’s this clouded over . . . well. . . . Oh jeez, that’s scary. “Why’d you have to be stubborn and violent?” Who’s violent?? õ_õ . . . . I really like this scene. =D . . . . Heheh, Naruto’s sniffing Sasuke and Sasuke’s all like, “What the hell?” XD . . . . Love the “reasoning” in Naruto’s mind. . . . LOVE the ending to this scene! =DD
    Love Sasuke’s frustration and apprehension. . . . The mention of the whisker-marks and the moonlight alerted me as to how good a picture this makes.
    IT WAS GOOD! =DDD No, I wasn’t confused this time around! Much better!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2008
    Chapter 3: Love the line: “Well then do something! I’m going crazy here!” XD . . . . Ahahaha! “‘What?!’ both of them snapped.” XD . . . . I like how they’re going through this step-by-step to see exactly where the problem is. . . . That’s a great line: “I have feelings for you. How come I don’t feel like jumping you?” XDD . . . . Whoa, she’s engaged? How did that happen? o_o . . . . Is he even considering that he could just be taking advantage of Hinata if he went for her because of this? õ_ô . . . . I get the feeling it’s NOT going to be that easy.
    Nice opening paragraph for Sasuke. . . . (*snicker*) “Half-clothed maniac.” XD . . . . So it’s roughly a month later? Has Sakura kept cool about that little incident?
    Uneasy, eh? Curious. . . . Errr, what? “Sitting . . . what kitchen?” o_O . . . . Whoa, interesting details about the bathroom. . . . Dude, Sasuke, they’re not “just painful reminders of what you had.” If things get painful, put them away and quit moping! Jeez! . . . . Ooooh, scary cliffie! =D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 26, 2008
    Chapter 2: Hmm, extra testosterone or something? . . . . Huh? Oh, it’s back at the beginning. Um, might want to clear that up a little. When you switched perspectives, it didn’t look like it was jumping back to the beginning. I thought when Naruto saw Sasuke, it was a second time after he left him, not the first meeting that day. So it’s a little confusing. . . . Heh. “No shit, Uchiha.” XD There’s the Naruto I know! ^^ . . . . Okay, now I see why Naruto was a little exaggerated. . . . (*snicker*) Loved it when Naruto started checking out Sasuke. XD . . . . XDD “Green Lycra.” . . . . Whoa. That thought about Sasuke’s neck. This is serious, not just a need for sex. o_o . . . . “His women.” Oh my. XDD
    “With something living?” Dang. o_o . . . . And it never occurred to Naruto that Sasuke might be more interested in guys than girls? . . . . Yyyeah, that’s what I thought. Why’s Sakura all coy? ô_o . . . . (*giggle*) “He rolled the idea around in his head [. . .]” Funny image. I like that phrase. ^^ . . . . Oooh, good description, “His voice sounded rough as familiar serpentine [. . .] wince.” Really like that one. =D . . . . Oh jeez, she saw! XO . . . . Run, Naruto, runnn!! . . . . ‘Scuse my picky-bitchiness, but this scene is really good so far, I’m enjoying it a lot, but the line “He would not let the Kyuubi harm his friends” seemed just a little corny to me. (*wince*) You can hit me, I deserve it. >.< . . . . He’s really got to talk to Tsunade so he can get a grip on this; hopefully Tsunade can send a note or something to Sakura. . . . Oh man, that was rough. The villagers noticed? Poor guy.
    I think this chapter was a little better, actually.
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