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By : riddlestar
  • From ANON - featherededge on April 28, 2008
    love it!!! 8D please write the next part soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 28, 2008
    Chapter 8: Are you kidding?! I’ve been waiting for updates! No way am I going to give up on this story! . . . . Ooh, “good stuff,” heheh. (*rubs hands together gleefully*) =D

    “I must protest,” lol, what a way of saying it, I love it. So formal. XD . . . . “Sasuke felt like strangling the blonde woman in front of him.” Yeah, I don’t blame you. It sounds really frustrating. . . . Heh. Love those last lines: “He would just have to get them from Naruto. First hand.” Ooh, suspense. =D
    “Speaking of which,” (*snort*). XD That’ll be Sasuke for you. ^^ . . . . Sasuke shaves? *squeee!* (I like how you slipped that in there. Normally, I wouldn’t like the idea of Sasuke needing to shave, but it sounds alright in this story.) . . . . “He was quite all right where he was, thank you.” ^_^ . . . . “Or rather, commanded.” :hearts!: . . . . Oh boy, there’s the anger I so adore. =D . . . . Great sentence: “Naruto watched his friend’s face [. . .] indifference.” Well-done. . . . I like how Naruto ran the reason through his head, and how he knows he’s caught up in it. Sometimes when a character says, “and only me,” that’s all they hear; they don’t notice how . . . odd it can sound. I like how Naruto noticed that. . . . Love all of Naruto’s perceptions on Sasuke. . . . Heh, “Sasuke was looking at him weirdly.” Yeah. And then . . . “Do you want some ramen?” XD That was so random. I wonder what made him say that. ^^

    It was cute. There are still a lot of things I’m curious about, but those’ll be answered in time (unless you give up on the fic which you better not do, *growl*). I probably would’ve liked more to this chapter, but it’s okay if you wanted to keep it updated. I await the next chapter. ^_^
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  • From serenagold on April 28, 2008
    Hehe.. I'm glad you updated.. even if it was only a snipet of the whole thing. ^^ Naruto went from being straight to accepting a male mate. Sasuke... he.... he's going to take a little more work. >:) hehehehehe


    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Meg on April 28, 2008
    After so LONG and it was so SHORT :( i was dissapointed... but at least you updated.. that means you haven't given up on this.. so thats a good thing. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - anon on April 13, 2008
    Wow, I really love this story. Thanks for not making it cliche and boring. Really loving it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From VerapwnsU on April 13, 2008
    ok, yeah, you tell me "there are more chapters on AFF" but you don't tell me that this cliffie is almost as bad as the one you left me on! gah, i'm goin to your profile and am prolly going to read most if not all your works on both sites.
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  • From ANON - tgyamibakura on April 06, 2008
    nyaaaaaaahhh! I love your story! It's always fun to read about a very disgruntled!sasuke. I really hope you update soon! I'll have to bookmark it so i don't forget. I wish aff.net had a alert system like ff.net!
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  • From ninetailedfoxx852 on March 27, 2008
    please update soon!! cant wait!! ;D
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  • From ANON - lex on March 25, 2008
    I love your story! I can't wait to read more of it!!
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  • From VRon8899 on March 25, 2008
    Gah! I kept missing these updates..I'm so glad I found u again!! XD Chapter was great..Sasuke's angst hehe...he's a better uke then Naruto in my opinion....but that could just be me hehe..Can't wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Alkalph on March 23, 2008
    Really good fic...But i don´t know how this will finish,knowing Sasuke and his pride...and seeing how Naruto is behaving(with Kyubi,of course =P)
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  • From ANON - purpler on March 11, 2008
    hey, just found this. definitely intersted. cant wait for hte smut *wink*
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  • From ladywolfTerri on March 11, 2008
    wow.. *huggles*.. I'm flattered you think so highly of me... but more importantly, onto my thoughts about your newest chapter!!!

    Great job, I actually feel bad for Sasuke.. I mean, sure he's a cold bastard, but to have to deal with massive hickey's like that... while funny as hell... still feel for him.. lol

    Now the Hokage added in a little more quality time for the two.. that's a good handful of salt for that wound.. XD

    I honestly can't wait to find out what happens next, I mean, Sasuke is going to say or do something to retaliate, right??.. hmm.. and how long can Naruto be around him without losing control???

    Please update soon, hun!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2008
    Chapter 7: Nice opening. I like the way you described Sasuke’s focus on the marks. That happens in real life; someone obsesses or focuses on something for a long time and it becomes more than what it is. . . . Whoa! There goes the mirror! O_O . . . . XD “Great, now his knuckles hurt too.” So typical. XD . . . . Sasuke’s apparently in one of those moods where every little thing pisses him off. . . . “The thought made him even more irritated.” Yeah, I would think so! All these guys marking him like he belongs to them! ^^ . . . . Hmm, that’s a good point: “He didn’t know whether he should be relieved [. . .] mercy on him.” Really good line. . . . Man, you do an excellent job with the pauses! “He had been – he stilled – helpless.” Beautiful. =) . . . . Um, a little confusion on the paragraph beginning with “However, Sasuke was still bitterly aware [. . .]” You start it off about Itachi, then the next line is back to Naruto. During the sentence, “He found himself remembering [. . .]” I thought you were talking about Itachi for a second. . . . Really good description of Sasuke’s anger waxing and waning throughout this whole scene. I love it. ^_^ . . . . Why’s the neck too tight, though? Too many bandages? ô_o
    “His bandages itched.” Clever line. . . . Ahahaha! About Tsunade: “Bitch.” About Naruto for telling him that: “Son of a bitch.” XDDDDD . . . . Um, “Even [in] his head.” Left out the “in.” ^_^; . . . . Nice dialogue. . . . Boy, I’m intrigued. I’m just as intrigued AND as suspicious as Sasuke. I can feel his emotions perfectly. . . . Ha, knew Naruto was going.

    No problem about the angst! I normally don’t like it, but “angst” didn’t come to mind when I was reading that. It wasn’t overdepressing or anything like that; they were perfectly understandable emotions. ^_^ I like this chapter a lot. The cliffhanger was mild, but that’s okay. I can’t wait to see how Sasuke’s going to react to Naruto going with him, and I wonder who the rest of his team is. I also wonder how this mission is going to go and how this is part of Tsunade’s “plan.” I sympathize with you for your tests, but please don’t leave us hanging too long! >.
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  • From ANON - Sasuke_lover on March 09, 2008
    another update... sooner this time! yay! i liked it. cant wait to see how this turns out.
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