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Reviews for My Favorite Mistake

By : riddlestar
  • From Mija on May 23, 2008
    yes yes please add me to your update list if you can, I barely found this fic and I am totally hooked, I soo have to see what happens, will Naru go into heat on thier mission?? what will Sasu do?? Oh will Sasu get a bit jealous if Naru starts to look and go to whore houses to calm his need a bit??? must have more, please add me to update list, ty ty ty, huggles and smiles Mija...:-) email: Mmija711@wmconnect.com
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  • From Kimya on May 22, 2008
    Chapter 9

    Oh, this was good. It was so incredible AWKWARD!!!! OMG. But it was perfect. I don't really think you need to edit it. I really enjoyed it. I was so afraid you were going to let Naruto take the easy way out. But you didn't and I'm oh so happy. Now Sasuke has to deal with his best friend having a crush on him!!!
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  • From NAnderson on May 22, 2008
    U LIVE!!!!! YEAH!! Ive been waiting 4 this to be updated 4 so loonnnnggggg! I think the only reason it was so hard to write is because it was just meant to be this good! I hope u dont get stumped or have another hard time with the next chapter. Well go have urself a good cookie, take a break, then get ur butt back here and get back to writing!! lol.... Pretty Please????!!!!!
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  • From blueh on May 22, 2008
    Oh my. The truth is out! Yay! Wonderfully written. :D
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  • From Management on May 22, 2008
    I thought that this chapter was really good! You pulled it off awesomly. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Interactions between Sasuke and Naruto are bound to be funny.
    And you said at the end that people could sign up to the update list. I'm kind of ne on this site... So would you please eh, tell me how to do this?
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  • From ANON - sasuke_lover on May 22, 2008
    amazing. hurry up and update!
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  • From ANON - Meg on May 22, 2008
    omg.. i loved this chapter! im still in shock that im reading a fic where no smut has come yet... (no pressure, lol) but wow... you delve into the characters minds perfectly.. im in awe.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 22, 2008
    Chapter 9: Heehee, love the first lines from both of them. ^^ ♥ . . . . And then Sasuke gets pissed (I don’t blame him, poor guy). . . . I like how Naruto’s going over the whole situation from Sasuke’s POV. And I especially like the sentence: “Because anger as an emotion came to Sasuke only when he felt threatened and – Naruto frowned – afraid.” That . . . oh, I don’t know, I just love that observation. I guess it reminds me of the animal in all of us. ♥ . . . . “Almost-creases.” Good description. . . . (*snicker*) “Figured that the one day he didn’t feel like eating, Sasuke was treating him.” ^^ . . . . Well . . . this conversation is going well so far. ô_ô . . . . Hmm, I like Naruto’s dilemma here. This is a tough one. . . . (*giggle*) Sasuke just poked him with the chopsticks. (There should be a picture of that. ^^) . . . . Err, whoops: “I don’t I’ve ever seen you think so hard in my life.” I don’t what? ^^;; . . . . (*snort*) Sasuke, you asked him a question; shut up and let him answer it. 9.9 . . . . “How many more was he going to have to make?” Good line. (I’m picturing their actions very well.) . . . . (*snicker*) “Sasuke blinked and for a moment there was silence [. . .]” XD That was kind of a startling statement, Naruto. ^^ . . . . I really like this whole dialogue. . . . Ahhh, now we’re getting somewhere. The source of the timespan of the heat. Cool. ^_^ . . . . So he’s telling Sasuke the truth? Good luck, Naruto. (I don’t think lying would help at all, but . . . man, what an issue! o_o;) . . . . Hmm . . . is Sasuke really relieved or is he acting as a test? õ.ô . . . . Maybe not. õ.õ . . . . I forgot what happened with Sakura. I had to look it up again. Was it just her noticing his boner? (*snicker*) X3 . . . . Ohmy – O.O Sasuke, you have absolutely no right to say that to Naruto!! XDDD (“Will you stop pitying yourself.”) . . . . It is going in the wrong direction. . . . I like Naruto’s perception on this. Not OOC at all. =) . . . . Love the growing intensity. I’ll betcha Sasuke’s kinda scared as well as angry. . . . I really like Naruto’s explanation of the whole deal. . . . (Heh, I can kind of imagine Sasuke thinking, “Oh no, not you too, Naruto! You’re my escape from this – this magnetism that people have towards me! Ó_Ò” XDD) . . . . Uh-oh. “It was you?” (*sigh*) Yikes, it’s never good when someone makes a big jump and oversteps the truth like that. õ_o . . . . FLUSH! *_* . . . . ^_^ Now that all the tension’s gone (well, not all of it, but a good amount), Naruto’s starting to laugh a little. ^_^ . . . . Ooh, great ending sentence to that scene! =D

    Hardest chapter? Well, you did a damn good job of it. ^_^ . . . . I honestly think the chapter is fine as it is.
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  • From ANON - Moiira on May 21, 2008
    KYAAA! Love it! can't wait for the rest ^^ YAY!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2008
    That actually went well, somewhat ackward. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on May 21, 2008
    Definitely a shocker. I didn't think Naruto would confess!

    Can't wait to see where this goes. Please update soon :)
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  • From YuukoUchiha on May 21, 2008
    hehehe...
    nah! I like this chapter, why you didn't like it? .:thinks what you silly mind could be thinking:.

    yeah.. the truth, is hard ne? Sas'ke???
    but I like that Naruto actually notice it... why do I like when sasuke blushes? I think is cute ^-^

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  • From serenagold on May 21, 2008
    This chapter may have taken a long time to write... but let me tell you it was worth it! The balance between the two characters was highly touchy regarding the subject and if handled wrong it could have spelled disaster for the story at large. This conversation was the turning point for the story, and I have to say it was done expertly. You really did a fantastic job with Naruto's confession. You really have a handle on the characters and it is impressively good.


    I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work. =^^=
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  • From Jelp on May 21, 2008
    Excellent story! It definitely has a lot more plot to it than the normal, stereotypical "Naruto in heat" type of fics. The depth of emotion that triggers Naruto's attraction is a nice twist, and I personally like how you made Naruto be attracted to Sasuke AND Sakura. I think it's a lot more like canon. Of course, Naruto ending with Sasuke is always best. :-) Looking forward to the next update, and I would be thrilled to get an e-mail from you at: Jelp4@aol.com letting me know when the next update was. Thanks! ~ Jelp
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  • From nm1716 on May 21, 2008
    I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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