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Reviews for The Truth Revealed

By : Shadowfox32459
  • From Coldstone on April 23, 2008
    Well. So far we have the Swords from Devil may cry, the Plant Weapons from Yu yu Hakusho and I think those "Tornado Fists" are also from Yu Yu Hakusho. ^^

    I'm still waiting for the Street Fighter Moves like Ha Do ken.

    Or at least Yusukes RAI GUN, which is similar to Ha do ken ^^.

    Hope you don't plan to get the old Hag from Yu yu here ^^.

    I impatiently wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Coldstone on April 22, 2008
    Say, you don't plan to give the Kyubi a human form,resembling one say 16 year old guy with red hair, do you?

    Man, turn any plant into a weapon? That sounds very well like Kurama from Yu yu Hakusho.

    I assume you took the Idea from there?

    Very interesting. I'm eager for the next one.
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  • From Coldstone on April 20, 2008
    Nice Lemon in the last chapter.

    And it is a interesting reason for the Kyubi to get nuts.

    I disliked Danzou all the time. ^^

    The chapters are a bit short, but this is compensated with the frequency new chapters arrive. So no complaining there.

    Keep up your good work.

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  • From Mangafreak on April 20, 2008
    fisrt of all, great work. i really enjoy this story. second, how about Orochimaru attacks. it would make sense considering that Sasuke is gone.
    Descendant of the shadows
    -Twisteddarkness
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on April 18, 2008
    Hey Shadowfox your lemon was pretty sweet.. LOL because lemons are usually sour but you made it just right... I hope you get time to update soon... What is going to happen next and is there a child coming for naruto and Hinata and what is going to happen between Sasuke and Sakura
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on April 11, 2008
    I like the update.. I wonder why did the Kyuubi attack Konoha myself. But I never could get a good reason for it. But I'm glad you made the reason why from Danzou who is an old bastard who needs to die anyways if you ask me... What happened to Lee and Kakashi and Might Guy... Hope you get time to update soon..
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on April 08, 2008
    So Sasuke does something he should of done from the very beginning.. He should of stayed were he belonged and not to a shit hole... If he would of stayed he would be able to do everything a bit differently then passing a three-five day test... Hope you make the next chapter just as great... Take care
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  • From marc7028 on March 08, 2008
    awesome ^^keep it going plz
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  • From Coldstone on January 31, 2008
    Very Good Update.

    But Man. You should see after the correct speech.

    Hinata's Neji NEE san, well I wouldn't think Neji was a girl, was he?

    So NI san would be correct. ^^

    Other than that? I like this chapter. Good Idea to make Hinata live with Naruto.

    I'm waiting for the next Chapter.
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  • From writersnightmare on January 27, 2008
    nice story longer chapters would be nice though
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  • From Coldstone on January 27, 2008
    Well. I see you switched to smaller chapters instead of the larger ones you began your story with.

    I have to say it is a good idea, since it is not as much work to see the chapters through for mistakes and quotations and stuff like that. Well of course it makes your readers wait impatiently for updates though ^^.

    Interesting idea with Hiashi, most people seem to hate him, which I can understand to a point, but in the series he had showed his improvement in character to his children and even Neji.

    I eager to read more of your story. It is a very good Idea and I#m curious what Naruto can really do with those Swords.

    And like I said, I would love to see a Ha Do Ken like Variant of the Rasengan. Maybe not from Naruto, since he is busy to form his Futon Rasen Shuriken, but maybe Hinata could learn something like that Hehe.

    Well, it is only a suggestion. It is your story after all. Keep up your good work.
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  • From Coldstone on January 25, 2008
    Ah well, sorry for two reviews so fast in a time.

    You mentioned you are going to use some Jutsus aka moves from other series.

    ANY chance that would include my most favorite Move?

    Well, According to my nick, I think you might get the Idea which move I am talking about.

    HA DO KEN.

    I think for my self, that the Rasengan AND the Ha DO Ken are very similar techniques. Naruto must just to fire the gathered Energy of the Rasengan to create a ranged type Jutsu.

    Maybe not like the real Ha do Ken of Ryu, maybe more like the Ko O Ken from Ryo Sakazaki of the King of Fighters series.

    Well, it is only an idea, ok, maybe mroe a wish of mine ^^.

    It is your story after all. So keep up your good work, or I have to shoot a Shinku Ha Do Ken after you. ^^
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  • From Coldstone on January 25, 2008
    Hooray. So the story finally goes on.

    Thank you very much. Great Idea to teach Hinata the Rasengan. ^^

    But I have a question. AGNI AND RUDRA????

    I think I know those swords. I hope they don't start talking. ^-

    I think you copied the names from Devil May Cry 3, am I right?

    Well. I'm waiting till you continue. I apreciate your hard work.
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  • From Mangafreak on December 24, 2007
    the new chpater was interesting, looking forward to the rest,
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  • From RavenSanctuary on December 10, 2007
    Two quick notes: decide on a tense (past or present) and stay with it, otherwise your readers could get a bit confused. Second, figure out a way to set apart the dialogue from the rest of the story. Doesn't have to be quotation marks persay, but just something different. Don't take this as a jab at you, just some constructive criticism. Best of luck!
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