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Reviews for The Truth Revealed

By : Shadowfox32459
  • From nationofone on July 13, 2008
    I seem to remember reviewing this story before, but having not seen a review from me with the others I am going to assume maybe it was mine that you look at as a flame. I don't remember what I said, but if it was rude I do apologize. Despite there being elements in this that don't like and despite Hinata's extreme OOC'ness I still enjoy it. Hence why I have it bookmarked and check it every so often. Flames suck and I generally have an anti flame policy. If I broke that here again I am sorry. No I am not a big fan of Naruto basically turning into Kurama, but it isn't my story and it hasn't hindered my ability to enjoy. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Archfiend on July 12, 2008
    to tell the truth, I was a bit dissappointed at this chapter, it seemed rushed to me , as I had gained the impression before, that the tower inside of naruto`s mind would be harder to endure, and you only described two situations, making the Journey in Naruto`s mind seem relaatively easy. Nonetheless please continue with this story, and i was glad of an update.
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  • From Coldstone on June 24, 2008
    Sorry for my long absence. I was busy with my exams.

    Nice, I should have known it, that you plan to give Naruto Kuramas powers, first as you mentioned the nature of his Blood Line.
    I didn't see it coming that you give Hinata the Hadoken. But I won't complain.

    Now I wait to see what is happening with Narutos Nightmares.

    Thanks for your good work.
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  • From Archfiend on June 23, 2008
    Very nice chapter and an important as I suppose in the storyline. So everybody wonders what dangers Hinata and Jiraya will encounter, I personally cannot wait for the next chapter. Oh and I found it hiairious how Hinata treated Kyuubi.Poor Kyuubi. A carefully built up image of a demon whipped into oblivion by one sentence. Kyuubi-chan. Poor guy
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  • From marc7028 on June 17, 2008
    man u take 4 every 2 update cjapters but gj on it ^_^ and u have some spelling eorrs but other then that nice
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  • From Archfiend on June 15, 2008
    Although your story is not bad, don`t you think that naruto is not a bit too powerful, I mean killing nearly 50 Oto nins with a swing of his tail? That is a bit too unrealistic, even for the Naruto world. There are obviously still a few mysteries surrounding takamichi, so I`ll be waiting for those to be revealed. The story development was not bad, though the fight was boring. It was onesided from the start, Naruto fas far too powerful and the Oto Nins just mere cannon fodder, I`d have preferred a protrackted battle, with Naruto being pushed to his limits and nearly losing, before overcoming Orochimaru and the others fight the Sound . That was one oppurtunity where you could have done really well, but you just didn`t either because you were unable to see it or too lazy. That was really depressing
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on May 26, 2008
    Well I would like to see you use a song that will bring out the hate for Orochimaru... I think a song from Korn or System of a Down... Any band that is more of a Heavy metal feel. I think the song should be a hard hitter and should help move the readers with it... Hope to see your new chapter soon.. Josh
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  • From Archfiend on May 25, 2008
    I`m sorry for the brutal review I gave you before, but that was after reading the first chapter which still is hard to read and in need of an edit, but the other chapters are amazing ,and I`ve seen you`ve greatly improved. (question: Why does Naruto have his mothers surname and not his fathers who was the Yondaime Hokage? does anyone Know?
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  • From Archfiend on May 25, 2008
    Not a bad story, but could use an edit to clean up the grammatical errors (tenses sometimes, but especially your punctuation, which is abysmal) and the parts where either words or in some cases whole groups of words are missing from a sentence. Other than these flaws the story itself is not bad as mentioned beforehand, just sometimes very hard to read as one has to figure out the sentences which took some of the fun out yet even so if edited could be great
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  • From rxtechgirl on May 24, 2008
    I love this story. I hope you update soon.
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  • From lonewolf3317 on May 14, 2008
    MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!! this story is absolutly amazing i'm normally a patient person,but i'm waitong on the edge of my seat for you to put out the next Chap = )
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  • From tinywhispers on May 09, 2008
    If I can still vote, I would have to vote on Orochimaru attacking the village. I am really enjoying this story so far and I can't wait to read some more.
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  • From eksimenrol on May 03, 2008
    love the fic, and i say sound would want sauske back
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  • From CelticFantasy on May 02, 2008
    Hmmm, First of all, Awesome job so far with the story. You have me thuroughly involved. I personally would like to see Itachi and Kisame attack the village, maybe somehow abduct Sakura just to piss off Sasuke. It's really up to you. Good luck, and keep up the Great job.
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  • From Coldstone on April 24, 2008
    Hmm. If I'm forced to have a guess, I would say that someone of Takamichis team will be the one for Ha Do Ken. ^^

    But I will let you surprise me with that. I'm eager to the next chapter. ^^.
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