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By : UbakeNeko
  • From SexyMomma on February 06, 2008
    I admit I never saw that coming...I thought it was another NaruSaku pairing and was pleasantly surprised to see it was JiraTsu. Good as always!

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  • From ANON - Feline_Skip on December 18, 2007
    (0_0) -_- (0_0) Eeeeeeeew... Ol' geezer sexx! Icky sticky! Actually, it was pretty well written but you need to work on length; you're stories are over pretty quickly. With practice, I bet they could be really lemony. Right now, they are very sweet but lack a certain amount of tartness.

    Keep going!
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  • From ANON - troublesomelovergirl on December 07, 2007
    HAHAHAHA!! ithe whole time i thought this was a narusaku fic.... wow i feel sooo stupid right now... o well love the fic hope you write more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 05, 2007
    This was so cool!! Steamy too! Go Tsunade and Jiraiya!!! I knew they would work! Thanks for writing this fic. AWESOME!
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  • From twilightwitch on December 04, 2007
    I loved it. It was perfect. Have you read the manga lately? Do you think he is going to die? Just thinking that and reading what you wrote just makes all the more great and sad. Will you continue this?
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  • From BlazinAtsuma on December 04, 2007
    Nice for amoment I was thinking you did an older Naruto and Sakura. The scene you put them into was a good one. The memories are what threw me off because Jiriya and Naruto are alike in many ways... Hope to see some more stories from you
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  • From ShimekirixnoxSeken on December 03, 2007
    Well, I agree with the TsuJir, not enough of it, but at first I thought this was NaruSaku! (Laughs while rubbing back of head in embarrassment) It was good though, while a little short! Wonder what else you'll write....
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  • From roxnroll on December 03, 2007
    Really good. For a second it sounded like team 7. Keep up the good work.
    Rox

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