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By : archangelbloodraven
  • From jfitzgerald236 on January 27, 2008
    I hope that you will update again soon. Thanks.
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  • From firelordeg on January 26, 2008
    wow this story is fantastic please update a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2008
    congrats you have now forced me to get a membership to this archive just so that I could tell you how much I am looking forward to reading the rest of this story. If you could a short list of other works you have done on other archives would be greatly helpful. Five stars for the first chapter by the way.
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  • From DragonMan220 on January 21, 2008
    Chapter 6 was nice, I can't wait to see the parents' reactions to the team and how things go with them living together.
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  • From Anonymous7 on January 20, 2008
    Hmm. In any other fic, I'd know she'd say yes, but your fic has kept me surprised, and as you said, Hinata's going to be seeing some pros AND cons of her favorite blonde, so she may decline. Considering the things that happened (her running up to him, mumbling something, and fainting, and his little speech), I expect she'll say yes, though probably want to take things very slow. They are 12, after all. I suppose you can work on that other fic if you really need to, though I've no idea where to read it.
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  • From JasonBanks on January 19, 2008
    I'll wait. This fic is too great to just discard due to time constraints. Update as soon as you can. You have great description skills.
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  • From Jien on January 19, 2008
    I totally LOVE/HATE your Cliffhanger no Jutsu!!!!!!!!! =^.^= Update soon!!
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  • From serenagold on January 18, 2008
    I enjoyed this chapter a whole bunch... but inreponse to your author's note, why do you need to find a summons for everybody? Wasn't that something that was pretty far and few between among Ninja? Demon contracts? I don't see the need to make up a bunch of demon animal contracts for every female character in the lot. :P Maybe thats just me.


    Keep up the good work!
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  • From UzumakiIno on January 18, 2008
    Very nice. Personally, I don't give a shit what you do with Sasuke. I honestly loathe all Uchiha, but if you're not into bashing him (which in this case would detract from the story) then you shouldn't go farther than the story calls for. Other than that, keep up the good work.
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on January 18, 2008
    I'm enjoying this fic quite a bit and can't wait to see where you take it. I got the biggest kick out of all three of them prefering to sleep naked. Hinata's love of tea was a cute little bit of sweetness. I chuckled at the way Naruto got out of Ino pummeling him for his cooking remark. Naruto asking Hinata to be his girlfriend was interesting and I look forward to seeing how that develops.

    As much as I'd love to see Naruto smack Sasuke's ego around a bit and cause Ducky to re-evaluate his avenger status (because I don't see any point in bashing him if it doesn't change him for the better), I can't really think of a believable scenario. Closest I can come is either Hinata or Ino (in a non-fangirly way) ask Sasuke if he's alright after he's injured somehow since he's a fellow leaf shinobi and he, being the jerk that he is, is rather cruel to whichever girl shows the concern, prompting Naruto to punch him once, warn him to never disrespect Hinata or Ino ever again, and give a short vicious summery of Sasuke's failings. Like I said, it's not very believable.

    For summons, I like wolves for Naruto since wolves are very pack orientated and will risk their lives to defend their pack while foxes are solitary and have no reason to defend each other unless it's a vixen protecting her kits, but who says he has to have only one summon?
    For Hinata, I suggest falcons, they're quiet, sensitive but can be fierce and deadly when necessary.
    I think that Ino would do well with summoning tigers, playful, agile, patient when they need to be, and lethal.
    TenTen summoning dragons would be excellent, dragons are fierce, stubborn, and protective.
    Sakura? I'm thinking bears, like grizzly bears. They seem placid and clam but tick one off and you can kiss your butt goodbye, which I think would work well with Sakura's dual nature.
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  • From Coldstone on January 18, 2008
    Very interesting chapter.

    Well, I also think that a frog was not the right thing for Naruto.

    So a Fox would of course be more logical as a contract.

    The other Contracts:

    For Ino, I suggest a cat. I think a cat is the animal that moves the best with Inos character.

    For hinata, hmm. This is a tough one. But maybe a hermelin or a racoon.

    Or a rabbit. Yeah, I think a rabbit would be an interesting Idea.

    Or i had an contract idea based on the Sushin legend.

    Hmm. Sakura... May I suggest a dragon?

    Why? because I think it would fit her. She will gain monstrous strength through Tsunades training. And her character would fit, so I think at least.

    Ten Ten

    This is a tough one again, since there is not too much known about her. May be a hawk?

    We will wait patiently for the next chapter.
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  • From serenagold on January 14, 2008
    this chapter ends with an upbeat "yay!"



    keep up the good work!
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  • From Coldstone on January 13, 2008
    I have a question though.

    Since Naruto is under Kurenais Hands now, what about Jiraiya?

    After all, Jiraiya is Nartuos Step father if you see it correctly. (Actually, he is responsible that Naruto has gained his name). Will he still learn the Rasengan? Afterall it is my favorite Jutsu of him, and it would be sad if he would not learn that.

    Since Minato and Kushina named him after one of Jiraiyas Book Characters (Not from the Icha icha Series, believe it or not, Jiriaya wrote serious stories before that) I think that Jiraiya should take a vital role in your stroy too.

    Hopefully, I did not put too many spoilers here.
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  • From Anonymous7 on January 13, 2008
    Ah, yes, just wanted to add that I agree there's really no reason for Sasuke and Naruto to fight, or at least not yet. If Sasuke still abandons the village for power, then I could understand Naruto fighting him as a traitor, but there's really no need for them to be rivals; with Naruto wanting to be the strongest ninja in all the Elemental countries, there's much stronger people for him to compete with.
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  • From Anonymous7 on January 13, 2008
    That rationale for the way the teams are formed makes a great deal of sense, and while I too questioned the setup in earlier chapters, I now find myself agreeing with your way of doing it. I also liked Naruto's reasoning for calling the Third "old man," and the Third's reason for having them live together. Similarly, I'm looking forward to Team 10's shopping trip tomorrow; it's good to see that Naruto understands his clothes make no sense for a ninja, and that Ino's starting to warm up to him. Yes, I'm upset this one was so short, but that's just got me looking forward to chapter 6!
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