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Reviews for Vixens & Kitsune

By : archangelbloodraven
  • From UzumakiIno on March 07, 2008
    Very good, if very chilling. Keep up the good work.
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  • From REM1985 on March 07, 2008
    Very good work. I have to say that I wish the chapter had been longer and maybe had something more to it than the dreams and oath, but it was still well done. Keep up the good work and please make longer chapters if the muse will allow it.
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  • From Altiair on February 27, 2008
    awesome
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  • From onegaisenpai on February 24, 2008
    I really like your story it is very well writen and i can not wait until the next chapter keep it up ^^
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  • From jfitzgerald236 on February 22, 2008
    Please update again soon. Thanks.
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  • From UzumakiIno on February 18, 2008
    Very good. Ino has a snappy (and enjoyable) attitude. Can't wait to see how her mother reacts when/if she finally meets Naruto; same with Hiashi. Keep it coming.
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  • From Coldstone on February 15, 2008
    Sorry:

    Before I forget it.

    Sorry for some of the mistakes I make sometimes. I'm from Germany, so English is not my mother language.
    But I hope it is understandable enough for you.
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  • From Coldstone on February 15, 2008
    To wheathermangohanssj4

    Well, here I think you are wrong.

    In my opinion the summons have nothing to do with Family training or something like that. That is a thing I totally disliked in the anime. In my opinion, the summons someone can get should be based on someones personality.

    Hinata for example sure is shy, that is one reason I suggested a rabbit earlier. But if you look about it, a Wolf fits her also well. Hinata's one and only problem was a lack of self confidence. I think this will be somewhat corrected in this story. Hell, it has even started allready. Naruto seeks to improve that.
    Like I said wolves are the most social creatures I know. A wolf pack hold together no matter what. Also wolves are EXTREMELY protective about there offspring. I also think Hinata would do that also for her children.

    Also you have to see Japanese mythology in the context. Especially the ones concerning foxes (Kitsune).

    So that is also a point, why a Fox makes the better choice for Naruto, not only that he actually is the host for one.

    Ino on the other hand is a stubborn person who could also get easily annoyed. But is also a playful one. A personallity that fits a cat in my opinion. (My girlfriend has one, so I know of what I speak).

    To Archangel Bloodraven

    I am grateful for your story, because you are actually planning you thing, and not make it into an unlogical orgy.

    I think a good storyline is far more important than "action" (Well, in both in or out of the bed ^^ ). I'm eager to read more of this. But don't rush things. Take your time if you need to, so that we can see the best you can do.

    Domo arigatou gozaimasu for your very hard work.
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  • From Coldstone on February 15, 2008
    Interesting. And it is good you made clear your thoughts of who will in and out of the harem.

    For the Summons:

    Naruto-Foxes (unoriginal? Too bad)

    Totally agreed. I also thought toads were... not right somehow.

    Hinata: Wolves

    Interesting choice. But I think it is a quite good one. Wolves are social cratures, and I think Hinata fits that deffinition most than anyone.

    Ino: Phoenix, possibly expanding to include birds of prey.

    Birds???? I don't really think that fits Ino's personality. Ino is in my opinion more like a cat. Playful, but can be also extremely stubborn.

    Tenten: Dragons (No Bahamut Zero will not be the boss. What do you think this is, Final Fantasy?)

    Here I think you made the right choice again. And I also think it would be wise to make the point clear, that they will be ASIAN dragons. So no western style ones like Bahamut. (If you also play Magic the gathering, maybe the five dragons from the champions of Kamigawa Expansion may give you some Ideas. Kokusho, Yosei, Ryusei, Keiga and Jugan).

    Sakura: Slugs (She will become Tsunade’s apprentice.

    Hmm. Well, that one is true. She is Tsunades apprentice, and in the fight against Sasori, we saw that she has inherited her Tsunades personallity as well. So slugs seem to be appropiate for her.


    Well, after all you are the author of course. See my suggestions only as a little advice.

    It is your story in the end. But I really think you should rethink your choice for Ino somewhat.
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  • From JasonBanks on February 15, 2008
    Excellent chapter! I loved how the humor at the end wrapped up the whole story nicely. This was definitely worth the wait. Update again soon!!!
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  • From Gnosismaster on February 15, 2008
    What do you mean that 'some inevitably will over the timeskip'? Are you talking about the older members?

    I'm glad that you kept Sakura in and I hope that she stays in and doesn't go hopping after Assuke later.

    My e-mail is hidan117@yahoo.com.
    Please answer my questions about it.
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  • From wheathermangohanssj4 on February 15, 2008
    I have to say I DO NOT approve of Hinata's and Ino's summons's, the Wolves are too close to the dog summon of Kakashi, and someone from a clan who's Jutsu's are based on the mind shouldn't really have a summon, I know you are trying to get them from being too involved with their clan's way's but you shouldn't just destroy a families way just because you can.

    But I have to say I like the Harem Roster.


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  • From firelordeg on February 15, 2008
    wow thanks for the chapter im glad to see that you are taking your story so seriously keep up the fantastic writing and please update again a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows
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  • From Xainae on January 31, 2008
    I'll be happy when you get back to this story - it's shaping up to be quite a lark!
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  • From LadyKind on January 30, 2008
    yay I love the story sooo far!!! Keep it coming *snickers*
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