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By : ElfenDream
  • From OutlawAngel on May 08, 2008
    Damn, will Naruto find out the truth? I mean Itachi had lied to him in his face.
    I would let Itachi suffer for making Naruto lose Sakura and his friends, I mean, obsessed much?
    I can't beleive Itachi would lie to Naruto when he has feelings for him. And Sasuke...let him suffer to.
    'Cause even though his brother warned him of not telling Naruto, he should have told him.
    LET ITACHI AND SASUKE SUFFER GREATLY FOR THEIR WRONG DOING WITH NARUTO.
    Let Naruto make them suffer, and Naruto should go into hiding and find secret power (the Kyuubi)
    Itachi has do apoligize to Naruto, because he can't live without him, but please let the UCHIHA'S SUFFER!!! THEY DESERVE TO FEEL THE PAIN NARUTO HAD FELT WHEN HE LOST SAKURA!!!

    You can do it!!!
    You work is superb!!!
    PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!

    YA NE ^_^
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  • From snnj11220 on May 04, 2008
    You know I first read this chapter on the day that you posted it but I wasn't sure how I felt about so I decided to wait and comment, I am not sure if that is a good thing or bad thing.

    So I like the fact that Naruto got to relieve some of his anger by beating up Itachi but I am upset at the fact that Itachi is still lying to him. I would at least expected him to be honest. And then they are like its all about Naruto's suffering right now, but yet they are the ones that caused it. Itachi wants to make Naruto immortal, against his will I might add but Itachi doesn't deserve him, he supposedly loves him but yet is constantly manipulating him. He is a really selfish person. Sasuke, Sasuke, Sasuke... hmm I really hope that when this story ends it ends on a ItaNaru note, for real I really don't think Sasuke should be getting any sex or loving from Naruto especially being that he hates him. I think for that reason, at least in my opinion the whole ItaNaruSasu thing has gotten wierd, its not the same anymore. Before it was just hot but now its like everytime there is a smex scene with Naruto and Sasuke involved I keep on thinking about how much he hates Naruto. Although the one thing that I was really happy with about this chapter was the fact Sasuke's plan to separate them didn't work. But he's immortal so I guess we can't kill him off, too bad! And lol, you must really hate Naruto, its like you wake up in the morning going I think I am going to make Naruto suffer again in my next chapter. Just joking! But really Naruto just can't seem to get a break with you, which oddly enough seems pretty amusing.

    On a happier note is Kiba coming back, I missed him. I swear they should have kicked Sasuke out for a housemate and brung in Kiba, definitely would have been some good times then. Oh and thanks for reminding me when mentioning how harsh Sakura's death was I totally forgot about Lee, poor Lee I am so sorry I actually like you as a character. So aah.... r.i.p I guess.
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  • From ninetailedfoxx852 on May 03, 2008
    gah!! itachi is such a butthead! i really want naruto to find out it was him but then again i dont!!! GAH!! this story makes me mad but i absolutely LOVE it!! please update soon-- i cant wait to see what happens!!! X3
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  • From ANON - dyessie on May 03, 2008
    oouuucchhh..!! T_T
    sasuke.. waaaahhh.. you're so mean. stupid naruto you should go with sakura and lee but if you do that the story will end and i wont be able to read sasuke again.. arrggss.. angsty sasuke. i hope he can be truly happy with someone and get over itachi? how about sai sasori or gaara? hahaha you choose sasuke. Ü all of the above? good! haha im getting desperate. thank you for updating Ü i really love this fic
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  • From alleycat88 on May 03, 2008
    Poor sakura and lee. Man this fic is trul dark at heart neh? You write it so excellently! ^.^ Please more!
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  • From ANON - Chiv on May 02, 2008
    Kudos for the Sakura erradication ^^.... Itachi is gaining (humanity?) concience? LOL however he won't win any foxyfoxy heart anytime soon... although partially is foxyfoxy himself at fault too he shouldn't have called the bitch.... but who cares she's now gone... You know I thought he'd gone suicidal Like in he got to the apartement (in silence) went to the shower, shaved himself clean, dressed himself nicely, went to the kitchen, ate a piece of pie, took out his cellphone, told Kiba good bye... and jumped out of the window while Itachi watching him with a huge quetion mark LOL this however was somewhat good (srry I'm a bit biased right now T^T)
    but it seems NARUTO'S SUFFERING WON'T END... I mean Itachi might be gaining a tad bit of humanity... but seriously he's lacking common sense. If Naruto is converted into an Inmortal right now he'll only finish breaking him... even if Naru has somewhat developed a kind of Stockolm Syndrome.

    On a side note Sasuke must die... I mean no matter how nice and hot the sex scenes with him are... his angsty emo-ness is ticking me off ^^U
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  • From mrk33 on May 02, 2008
    I see the solution smex the little fox senseless into a false
    sense of security. Brilliant Itachi, just brilliant, and
    Sasuke how blind can you be. Smart Naruto you confessed one
    in your favor, now Itachi is going to work to make you happy,
    and has for Sasuke I see his life becoming more miserable
    since Itachi will make his Koi immortal, and make him happy.
    For that reason alone Sasuke will have issues. Looking forward
    to the next chappie............
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  • From ANON - animelover on May 01, 2008
    well, ok the lemon was cool, ok really really HAAWWWT!, but i'm glad naru still feels some guilt. i mean, yeah itachi's getting attached but darn it! he still killed naru's friends and could again!

    alright, one last vent, could naru get a little revenge somewhere? pleeeeeease? i mean, there's gotta be some way for him to push itachi's buttons and open his eyes, then everyone can live happily ever after! ;-) hahahahaha! i think this story is pretty dang cool, keep up the good work!
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  • From mls on May 01, 2008
    loved it!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 01, 2008
    Good chapter.
    Very complex relationship(s) that you have going here. Excellent!
    update!
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  • From sweetciel on May 01, 2008
    Awww...poor naru-chan :( At least he got some smut out of it. Personally, i'm happy that she's dead. She didn't deserve naru anyhow. *starts looking through wedding gowns*
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  • From ValkyrieNiennaHelyanwe on April 23, 2008
    im kind of staring blankly at the screen and trying to figure out what to say about that chapter. sasuke was kind of an ass. but it was understandable, and not really all that bad until the snake part. and really, i cant fault him for that totally cause he was following the rules. naruto really shouldnt have called her, the moron. sasuke though, didnt have to take as much satisfaction in hurting naruto as he did. i should feel bad for sakura, but i cant. i do feel bad for lee though.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 23, 2008
    Jesus Christ... intense
    Awesome chapter. Can't wait for more!
    update
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  • From sweetciel on April 23, 2008
    I liked it very much! I think Kankuro has it in him to be that evil. I mean...even Konohamaru is evil enough to be in the snakes. Great chap. Hopefully Sakura is gone for good now,
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  • From ninetailedfoxx852 on April 23, 2008
    poor sakura-- usually id welcome this sort of torture to sakura- but im feeling a little compassion for her-- not really sure why though---- hopefully naruto will be alright please update soon!! i really love this story!!
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