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Reviews for Snake eat Fox

By : ElfenDream
  • From tash1021 on December 09, 2007
    lol i know it happen to a friend on my mine to
    poor guy
    update soon please^.^
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  • From ANON - Lydianne M. on December 06, 2007
    Oh wow!You really have got a talent for writing. I felt I was reading a book and didn't want to stop. Then came the end of chapter 3. I almost cried. Damn I want to read more :) I really like the storyline. Very original. A lot of background information about the whole snake thing, very cool. You really thought this one out. Your first chapter scared me to death!! It reminded me so much of the ring. My god, that movie and your chapter where so scary! I really hope you make this story nice and long and up date a lot. Your story is the first I have ever given such a review to. Btw: I love the fact that Naruto made that nest from pillows. I think I would have done the same. But what I don't understand is why Naruto doesn't tell his friends. Do 'the snakes' check his calls and check what he is talking about? And one last thing. You didn't really explain what Naruto had to do for that organisation. Later we found out that is was dumping Sakura (poor girl!) and start living with Itachi. But it is just a tip. It's late here so maybe I missed the part where you wrote that. Anyway: Keep going! You have so much talent, I love your idea and you really keep the reactions of the characters like they should be.
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  • From spoon10488 on December 05, 2007
    Awesome story. I just read it all now. Can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From sethian on December 05, 2007
    That fic is awesome I really like it!! It's peculiar and I love it!

    Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - Tall Tree-san on December 05, 2007
    I really don't read Itanaru stories at all, but this one caught my eye. At first I though it was Sasuke, but when I found out it was Itachi I thought what the heck and kept reading. I'm glad I did, it's great so far. Can't wait to read more, update as soon as you can :)!
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  • From Vibora on December 05, 2007
    oooh! very promising fic! ^^ i love how you made your itachi and naruto! update soon please!
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  • From tash1021 on December 04, 2007
    enjoyed it ...i LOVED IT ^.^
    i can't wait for the next update
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  • From Ashleechii on December 04, 2007
    ohhhh, this is goood. Me like.

    Also I love that last chapter size :P

    I can't wait for more!!
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  • From Ficfan3484 on December 04, 2007
    I like your story. I don't think the 3rd chapter is too long. I Look forward to reading the next chapter ^_^ Update soon please
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  • From Mort on December 03, 2007
    I'm looking forward to you continuing this- Wonderful start-
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on December 02, 2007
    poor baby. it'll all be worth it in the end... hopefully
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  • From Picspixie on December 01, 2007
    damnit u really luv ur cliffhangers grrrr, please update soon, i soooo can't wait to see that little lemon u spoke of hehe, please hurry :P
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  • From Picspixie on November 29, 2007
    Eep!! :s i take it ur a fan of the Saw movies lol, well besides the gore i liked the first chapter, can't wait to see what they want from lil naruto ,hopefully some yaoi coming up, and the only spelling mistake that annoyed me was when u tried to spell 'example' no 'c' or 's' required, please update soon :P
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  • From serenagold on November 29, 2007
    I'm always amazed by all these authors who write these fantastic little pieces, then admit that English isn't their first language. What. The. Hell. O_O

    You people have a greater understanding of the English language than most of my fellow Americans, whom I know for a fact can't string a sentence together for shit. >_
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  • From tash1021 on November 29, 2007
    really hot into leaves you wanting more it great
    i didn't like instead of cutting the story off when he read the instructions you have the lyrics to the song play (but cutting off right before he read the instructions is a great cliffy)
    but thats just me
    keep going
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