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Reviews for Snake eat Fox

By : ElfenDream
  • From snnj11220 on February 01, 2008
    Oh I am so sorry I didn't know that Gaara was taken by Kakashi until I read your note and checked on your profile. I haven't read your other fic yet but I put it in my to do list. I see you went ahead with the Shino/Kiba pairing anyway that is good because after reading the last chapter it was definitely my first choice for Kiba. Hmmm so Kiba is jealous that Naruto got a hot guy and so he went and threw himself of Shino, haha, lol. I am actual happy about this because within this past week I read like 3 or 4 fanfiction with Kiba protesting that he is not gay and you know what they say thou doesth protest too much. It is ironic that Shino is the one who did the thing to Sakura and Kiba fucked him. I noticed they didn't exchange numbers at the end, which means either it was a no go or you are planning on having them meet up again. Either way I hope you ship this pairing all the way.

    And Itachi is very possesive, what he did to Sakura was cruel I mean bugs eating her body wow, she is probably so fucked up now she's wishing for death, even if they didn't kill her. Something tells me that she will probably end up dead before this fic is over. Not that I am complaining by the way, as long as Itachi and Naruto are straight that is really all I care about. And speaking of them, he called him baby, while I am sure it was probably just to please him so he'd wouldn't kill Sakura I liked it nonetheless. And Naru topped Sas-kun, at first I was like what Sasuke get out of their bed and then I was like Hot! Anyways enough yapping, loved this chappie especially Kiba's slut ass and looking forward to the next one.
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  • From Qiana on January 30, 2008
    So good but more ItaNaru please
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  • From ANON - Ivy on January 29, 2008
    I love Shino/Kiba!!! It would be awesome if you did a side story focused on them... anyways your story just keeps getting better and better ^_^ I want to see pairings for all the snakes, but I guess thats greedy :-) Anyways fantastic work as always!
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  • From mls on January 29, 2008
    can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work. loved shinokiba i hope you have more of it in this story!!!!!
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on January 28, 2008
    Wow, I really liked the added chapters. I feel kinda bad for Sakura, she is being the victim even though she has no idea of the game. Poor Naruto signing his life away just to save Sakura from being eaten alibe by bugs. Also being anally fucked by 2 guys sounds kinda painfull ^_^ I wonder what else Itachi has instore for his little kitsune.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - qwerty on January 28, 2008
    shino/kiba action was hot. good chapter
    update
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  • From MasterofPie on January 28, 2008
    haha that was great!
    Wow i almost forgot about Shino and his bugs ... good thing Gaara didn't do something

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  • From MasterofPie on January 28, 2008
    mwhahaha that was great!
    Wow was not expecting Sakura, and i was wondering what the look on Kiba's face meant
    Though poor naruto ... well maybe not, he now has Itachi ^__^
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  • From ANON - Ivy on January 21, 2008
    Great chapter as usual!!!
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  • From Sessygirl on January 21, 2008
    OMG you just satisfied my ItaSasuNaru craving I have been having for long now... I just can't seem to find any good fics for that threesome, but yay I found this.

    Its so good and so hot. Plus a sadistic, evil Itachi is always a nice thing to have. Although I do feel bad for Naruto, and being the Sakura fan I am I feel kinda bad for her. Oh well as long as Naruto has those two hot ravens I Don't care.

    Anyways loved it and I really can't wait to read more. Update soon please.

    -Akiru-
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  • From Jien on January 21, 2008
    Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - bloody_rose500 on January 20, 2008
    First off I like to say wow. I have never read such a gory story in fanfic. I think ur doing an amazing job. Just when I feel like Naruto is safe and going to be happy oooo something bad happens. The last thing with a Sakura and the bugs eating her insides eeeee…oooo had me itching and scratching. I hope Sakura will be ok even if I don’t like her.
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  • From lovelessjayson on January 20, 2008
    Ok you were right on chap 6 hot hot hot...and the others hotter hotter hotter good job. I love this story thanks for posting the other chapters.
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  • From spoon10488 on January 20, 2008
    Wow, totally awesome chapter. I love it. I kind of feel sorry for Sakura, but only a little bit. I'm still angry at her for yelling at Naruto. I truly feel sorry for Naruto though. Two hot, sick, twist, ravens fucking you while their friend attacks your ex, that just well... hot but still not very nice.
    Anyway can't wait to read more.
    =)
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  • From tash1021 on January 20, 2008
    **sits on top of a mountain of blood soak tissues while holding another to her nose**
    oh wow i knew there were brothers that shared everything but....wow
    oh by the way i was think about your story and i thought of a bunch of ways that itachi and sasuke can *punish* (^.-) naruto or going agaist their orders.
    if your intrested hers my e-mail

    tash_1021@hotmail.com
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