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Reviews for When in Venice

By : Adi
  • From ANON - Myra on November 27, 2007
    *raises both hands*
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on November 27, 2007
    *raises hand spasmatically* Me me me!!! Haha no jk. This fic sounds great so far!!! I would love love love to read more!!! I love all of your fics!! NaruSasu rules forever! Anyway, I anticipate another chapter!!
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  • From Mignonne422 on November 27, 2007
    Love it times a zillion!!!
    Showing you some well deserved loving here too!

    Like Hina said, your Naruto Sai interaction is priceless. Love it! the anatomy line just kills me. Hee hee.

    Ino is pretty fabulous in this too, or rather, Sasuke's pov of Ino. I laughed at the image of her sittin on the push cart at the airport on top of heaps of luggage. Just lol.


    I definitely want more!
    *raises hands and feet and grabs a friend and makes her raise hands and feet too for extra votes*
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  • From ANON - Alyssa on November 27, 2007
    -raises hand-
    Seriously, that was really good. I want another chapter! xD
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  • From ANON - hina88 on November 27, 2007
    ADI!!! *glomps* you finished the first part!!!

    I loved all the Naruto Sai interaction it was brilliant!!! I loved that even though there's a clearly a serious note in it you don't loose your flashes of humour. I still think the way you weave them in and out is really skillfully done and I think there's more detail in this one than in your other works which is making me see everything a lot more vividly so that's one of my favourite things about this fic too.

    I love how what they're doing parallell each other's actions and journey as well, it had me waiting for that point where they would eventually meet in the same place and when they did and Naruto caught Sasuke watching him I got goosebumps.

    So...

    I want the next one >..> no really. I want the next one.

    Hina xXxx
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  • From Telpei on November 27, 2007
    *raises hand eagerly*
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  • From ANON - Wish on November 27, 2007
    *throws self at you*
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  • From Cavalleria on November 27, 2007
    I really really like this. Like you said, it is different from your usual style but IMHO I think it's one of your best pieces to date. The flow and the descriptions were excellant, just enough to make you *feel* the characters and their surroundings. I could tell since I was completly surprised when the chapter ended. Thanks for posting this, can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Ada on November 27, 2007
    MOAR plz! ^_____^
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on November 27, 2007
    I RAISE MY HAND! I RAISE MY HAND! Wow this story DEFINITELY caught my attention. It's so well written and original too. It has some humour moments, which I do enjoy. And the cliffhanger at the end killed me and brought me back to life at the same time. I love it ! I can already tell you have me hooked, line and sinker. Please, please update as soon as you can.
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  • From Zestica on November 27, 2007
    -raises both hands an a neighbors for extra luck-
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  • From maggiekebs on November 27, 2007
    Raising both arms!! Do feet count?
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  • From ANON - purplelev on November 27, 2007
    more please.
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  • From Kimra on November 27, 2007
    I raise my hand in request for more. You've only just begun the 'meeting' I can't wait to see what you write!
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  • From ANON - Dragon on November 27, 2007
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!

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