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Reviews for When in Venice

By : Adi
  • From sasquatchsnake on December 01, 2007
    Two hands up XD
    That's totally sweet. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From GMHR on December 01, 2007
    *raises hand* I like that Sai draws pictures of Naruto "sans penis". I feel as though I'm way more amused by that than I should be.
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  • From Allys on November 30, 2007
    OMG Adi so that was just evil!!! LOL, you cut it off right at the good stuff *tackle glomps and molest/tickles* Write more NOW!!! XD, I like how you filled in the gaps, we get a much clearer image of Sasuke as a person, and of course get to meet more of the group. I really do hope you continue this soon. I have a really good feeling about it XD, LOL, and it's in Venice *fangirls*. Sorry I took so long to review, the story got lost on my desktop, I have so many tabs open in Firefox I'm surprised the program is still running.
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  • From ChibiBerry on November 29, 2007
    Oh, please write more! It sounds so interesting right now! I want to see how naruto and Sasuke meet! Preety please continue writing!
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  • From MidnightsKeeper on November 29, 2007
    you can't end it there! that's just...just..rude! and evil. of COURSE we want more! so update right away. please? i'll cry if you don't. *gives best puppy eyes*
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  • From ANON - animelover on November 28, 2007
    YEAH BABY! me want more ... bring it on! Oh, and i love the description of the "relationship" between naru and sai; absolute riot. ;-)
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  • From ANON - stephy on November 28, 2007
    looks around* raises hand!!!!! moooore!!!
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  • From KariNeko on November 27, 2007
    *raises hand* I want more! I'm already addicted and I hope you update soon!
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  • From VRon8899 on November 27, 2007
    -raises both hands and flails- XDDD I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shadowwolf on November 27, 2007
    This is amazing! I would love more, please!!!!!
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  • From charmpit on November 27, 2007
    *raises hands*

    It's unfolding slowly. That's good. Keep it going.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on November 27, 2007
    I want more, I want more!!!!!!!! LOOK, IM RAISING MY HANDS!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on November 27, 2007
    I want more, I want more!!!!!!!! LOOK, IM RAISING MY HANDS!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shirley on November 27, 2007
    More please! I like the way you use imagery and just the way you're building the story up. Keep up the good work. :)
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  • From ladywolfTerri on November 27, 2007
    Great start!!.. but.. but.. I need more!!!..

    will be waiting for your update!!
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