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Reviews for When in Venice

By : Adi
  • From serenagold on January 27, 2008
    Sasuke needs Naruto in this like a dying man thirsts for water. ^^

    I am enjoying this story. I like all the near misses these two have gone through before their kiss. ^^
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on January 26, 2008
    I have no idea where the story will turn next and that is what makes it sooo exctiting! Please update soon :)
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  • From VRon8899 on January 26, 2008
    -feeds- LOL....Always wanting more of this story! I will probably die from laughter if that isn't Naruto...-snickers- but if it is, still be funny >D
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  • From Mignonne422 on January 26, 2008
    ADI, THAT WAS FANTASTIC!!!

    I loved it honey! I'm so excited that Hina finally got you to update, cause I was loving this story. I loved the way you described Neji and Ino's kiss. Quality! And soo romantic *dreamy sigh* They're perfect for each other here :D And the boys reactions to each other in the airport, classic! I loved that Sasuke had a moment of panic for being unable to remember the exact shade of Naruto's eyes. lol.

    Mmmm...masked balls, Venice and two very sexy boys hiding in the dark confines of an old, abandoned building is just setting itself up for HOTNESS!! XD

    Can't wait for more!! MUAH!



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  • From charmpit on January 26, 2008
    Your stories make my recommended reading list so effortlessly, it seems.
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  • From on January 02, 2008
    You're going to update this, right? The way they met, or rather..Haven't met 'yet' was nicely done..But now the anticipation is killing me. :(
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  • From ANON - Kayo on December 27, 2007
    Ah! Where's the second/more part! I want more! ^__^ It's a good beginning, although I can't say much more about it yet. Except that the description of Sasuke and his apathy is memorable and vivid. And Sai! Ugh, Sai! But well done there, too; he feels very discordant next to Naruto. And the sentence how the world had gone on mute (or something like that) is my favorite (also very striking). *grin* Mild appreciation for the male anatomy, mmhmm. Hopefully that changes with Naruto. Anyways, this SasuNaruSasu fan is eagerly asking for More, please!
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  • From ANON - Meshlena on December 19, 2007
    Me likes!!!! ^_^ add more!! lol
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  • From ANON - kms on December 15, 2007
    I really like this! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I hope it comes out soon! This seems like it will be really great!
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  • From sasquatchsnake on December 08, 2007
    Awesome. I am in love with this fic. Consider this a marriage proposal.
    ;)
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  • From Blacrose75 on December 06, 2007
    I think this is a great start to a story. You could go many different places with this, and I'll definitely be following to see which one you choose. From a writing standpoint I didn't see any obvious grammar mistakes, spelling errors, etc. All in all it looks to be a very good start to a story.
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  • From ANON - Aura on December 06, 2007
    I wanna know what happens next!
    OMG They finally meet! Yay!
    hope you'll update soon
    I like your story;)!
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on December 06, 2007
    I think this is a great story. Only one thing is wrong, you haven't updated yet!! lol. NO really, you have a great writing style, and I can't wait for more.
    Slave
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  • From ANON - rachael on December 06, 2007
    Not FAIR!!!*wails* This is one of the few stories I've been watching for an update and then all sudden it's at the top of the list and it looks like an update, but nooo! It's not. *is bitter for a bit*

    Anyhow, it's a great story and it's just fun reading about Venice. I'm excited for Naruto and Sasuke to make contact and to see what you have planned. I like your writing style. I could probably say something else but I don't even have my glasses on yet and my eyes are getting irritated.

    Have fun writing!
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  • From gilliath on December 05, 2007
    I love it! So would like to read more:)
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