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Reviews for A grain of truth

By : himesamadakko
  • From inumoon3 on December 09, 2007
    I think Naru should end up with Sasu-chan...even though Sasu has made mistakes he still loves his dobe!!! I think it would be better for Naru and the children if was with Sasu so I think you should make the chapters longer and add a lil abuse so that will get Naru running into Sasu arms...as much as I love Neji and Naru, I just think that this fic would end better if it was Sasu/Naru! Well that's just my suggestion! Hope to read more soon!!!
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  • From Ihadadream on December 09, 2007
    A grain of truth is really great!
    I always loved sasu/naru/neji's love triangles. Though i'm a sasu/naru fangirls , you made a great neji/naru romance!
    So that's why I would really like next chapter to be an epilogue (happy end) for neji/naru and their tribe (I don't see neji in an abusive husband's role? Though i know you can make it great) and maybe ask for a version B with naruto and sasuke together at the end? I would start version B around the time when neji finds naruto's drawing of sasuke, but naruto doesn't tear it... (you see my point? :-)
    Again you're a great author and you don't get as many reviews as you should! just add sasu/naru in your summaries, make them more explicit and less enigmatic, or maybe just allow unregistered people to review!
    You're a great (and prolific) writer so please continue!
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  • From Princessdragonsbane on December 06, 2007
    No No NO make them happy. I want more story make angst but don't have Naruto cheat.
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  • From Princessdragonsbane on December 06, 2007
    I just read chapter 4 I hope Naruto ends up with Neji and the Uchiha bastard. I'm so nervice to read the rest incase he does go with the Uchiha.
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  • From Kagenoshi on December 06, 2007
    Hopefully, I'll have chapter 4 of Family Portrait posted by Christmas! Make the next chapter the epilogue...make it happy and I'll try to post chapter four this weekend!! Please with sugar on top!
    Kami
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  • From DesperadoSweetie on December 03, 2007
    I am not sure if you are aware of this but Chapter 5 is completely missing. I really want to finish this story but it is hard to read when missing something in there.

    Can you please post Chapter 5? Thank you.
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  • From kagomegirl on December 02, 2007
    ooh i wanna see an epilogue with naru-chan having neji's babies and giving the triplets siblings. update again soon!!
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  • From inumoon3 on December 02, 2007
    Update soon!!! Man...I can't help but want Sasuke and Naru-chan back together...but then again you're the author! But can't hope to read more soon!!!
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  • From on December 02, 2007
    Great story btw, I love it. Poor naruto always seems to have something messed up happen to him but that's what makes him so lovable. I'm not sure if you've noticed but chapter five seems to be missing. I just wanted to let you know because I've been having some minor problems myself when uploading. Anyway I can't wait to read more :-)
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  • From Kagenoshi on December 02, 2007
    Hey! You can't blame me and Kurai Kisu for this plot bunny! LOL! But I'm very flattered that we had some kind of influence. I loved this story...but what happened to chapter 5? I went there and all that showed up was the disclaimer, no chapter...must be a glitch. Yay for NejiNaru...my second most loved pairing!! Good work!!

    ~Kami~
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  • From Kimra on December 02, 2007
    Oh, I read your authors note which said something like "my mum asked me if I was pregnate since I keep asking about symptoms of being pregnate" and all I can say to that is... well wait until you write a story with war and death in it. Some of the questions like "how much blood can someone loose before they die?" etc etc... now that makes the family worry!
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  • From oohshiny on December 01, 2007
    ooh, nice, i wanna see wtf is up w/ sasuke, the bitch, and why the hell he aint helpin naru-chan. *hmph* ANYWAY update soon and email me when you do update, my email is deannathx@comcast.net
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  • From KoibitoFemme on November 24, 2007
    GAH YOU BLAME ME AND MY BETA?!?! I am so hurt! * Pretends to Cry* OH PLEASE UPDATE THIS. That damn Sasuke bastard! I'm glad you are reading both our stories. Shes been trying to coax Chapter 35 out of me but its proving to be a hard process. Love this chapter and I really like how Shino is beating the hell out of Kiba's brain LOL. I can't wait to see the next installment.
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  • From Kimra on November 24, 2007
    Interesting. Would like to read more. :)
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  • From Ihadadream on November 24, 2007
    great start! please continue! I hope sasuke-bastard will come back!
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