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By : LadyLaran
  • From ANON - on January 12, 2017

    Please don't abandon this!


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  • From ANON - on July 07, 2016

    I am loveing this story, the way you've written the characters is awesome and so far I'm really enjoying the plot. I really like I really like the part about kakashi's clan and how he adopts the boy that was awesome XD. I also think kakashi's and iruka's relationship is adorable :) 


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  • From ANON - MissAnna on April 24, 2016
    I love the names sunshine and moonbeam so sweet. itachi should have one too.
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  • From smint45 on April 22, 2016
    That was a great new chapter although short^^ I really liked Kakashis insecurities and how Iruka helped him^^ Thanks a lot for the chapter and hope to see you soon!!!
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  • From ANON - ff on April 09, 2016
    i love your writing.
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  • From ANON - Amanda on November 25, 2015
    Great story cant wait to read chapter 12 and Iruka and Kakashis first date.
    Oh a littlw idea for you when they start to get more seriius n their relationship you could have one of the younger two interrupt by having a nightmare or something. ;)

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  • From ANON - rose on September 29, 2015
    please update soon please thank you
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  • From smint45 on May 09, 2015
    Oh this chapter was great!!!! Sorry that it took me so long to review but I nedded to get reaquainted with your story^^ I still love it!!! I really like the cahnges both uchias show after the ritual especially sasuke^^ He is cute^^ And I really like how their training prosesses^^ Can#t wait for the date and the time skips after that^^ I'm really interessted how our sweet Hatake children will turn out after a few years^^ See you again soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Annie on April 04, 2015
    Hello! I'm reviewing on the first chapter but I have read what's written so far. I'll keep this simple. First, I'm sorry to hear you are having health problems (or at least we're at the time). I hope all will work out for you. Second, I wanted you to know I am sensitive to the fact that this is just fanfiction and real life is always more important. With that being said, the third on the list is me begging for you to please please please continue with this story. I love everything about it. I can't wait to see how Naruto's abilities grow, what happens with Itachi and Sasuke and what you plan to do to bring Neji and Naruto together (though I have my own theories about who they're thrown together). The pace of the story is fast but that is just as it should be. Konoha was flying by the seat of it's pants after the kyuubi attack and were sent reeling by the uchiha massacre. In short, I don't think the pace is inappropriate. If I saw any grammar or sentence structure errors they were of no hinderance to the story at all. I've been saying the following comment a lot in reviews lately but it is especially true for your story. I feel like I've picked up a published book when I read your story and I'm hoping real life will ease for you so can continue to write this story that obviously took a lot of thought to create. This story is wonderful and I hope to see it updated as soon as may be. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Sam on January 23, 2015
    Luv this story plzzzzzzz continue it.
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  • From lara5170 on July 09, 2014
    I just found this & I enjoyed reading it very much. I hope it will be continued. I don't know how old this story is, when it was posted last or if it's still being written. But, I hope there will be more to come.
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  • From ANON - reader on April 28, 2014
    i really like this story...i hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - smint45 on April 21, 2014
    Thnak you soooo much for the update^^ I'M SO HAPPY!!!! I love what you did with the changes^^ And I'm happy that we will see some KakaXIruka in this story^^ I hope that you are feeling better soon!!! See you again!!!!
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  • From ANON - smint45 on April 20, 2014
    I just reread this story after you posted your new one^^I really love this story!!! And I'm really sad to see no updates for such a long time. I hope that you will pick this story back up in addition to your new story!!!!!
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  • From ShadowAngel on July 06, 2013
    I honestly didn't expect the inclusion of the Uchiha brothers in this way, but I enjoy the new spin. I enjoy this story as a whole to be honest with you. As a fellow writer, I hate when I'm asked to write longer chapters for several reason, but the length of the chapters is my lone grip. Please do continue the good work. I look forward to the next chapter.
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