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Reviews for May It Be

By : LadyLaran
  • From NeonOranges on November 24, 2007
    I can imagine Iruka and Naruto setting up pranks together for when Kakashi is late. It's so nice to find a story where everyone who seemed to be denied of love and care finds someone they can be happy with.
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  • From PrincessKoriandr on November 24, 2007
    Awww...Iruka has now officially entered this mess. I feel sorry for anyone trying to dis Naruto now, for they shall be struck with unholy wrath! Anyhoo! Another awesome and well written chapter. You are quite the story teller. Now I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on November 24, 2007
    I like where this is going even more. you put Iruka right in the house! Yeah! now kakashi won't have to try so hard. LOL. Anyway can't wait to see how naruto acts with the other children now that he has parents or guardians or what ever he calls them. Since that was a big part of his youth in the anime and the bond that connected him with Sasuke after Itachi went all crazy and killed everyone. Oh one question, is itachi still going to be all like Yeah cool brother one minute then HAHAHAHAHA your weak Sasuke so i killed everyone but you another minute in this fanfic.

    Wow that review is long. Anyway. LOVe this story can't wait for more.

    Lokivsanubis
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  • From kati on November 23, 2007
    i am intigued and praise your high standards of writing gonna go checmk out your other works now so cya and looking forward to the next chappie! could you email me when you publish it or i fear i will lose track of the story as i dont regularly check this site! xx
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on November 23, 2007
    *whistles* SO Orochimaru sicced Kyubi on Leaf! That explains a lot! And Naruto will grow up with Kakashi as his dad? Will he be playing match-maker? If I was him, I would ask Kakashi and Iruka's friends to help out...The ones that he does trust! The Anbu seems willing to care for Naruto, at least he will be getting good medical care...Where will he eat? I cannot see any smart civilian boycotting Kakashi! The Anbu might take offense to that...
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  • From ANON - animelover on November 23, 2007
    i absolutely loooove this story! i'm curious why you had kakashi be the adopted dad rather than iruka? but that aside, you did a good job with characterization and making this seem so real. please update soon!
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  • From tash1021 on November 23, 2007
    oh wow
    kakashi a daddy...with out Iruka
    oh poor naruto-_-
    lol
    this is going to be good
    please continue soon^-^
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  • From ANON - Naye on November 23, 2007
    Now this seems very interesting indeed. I look forward to more updates very soon. Keep up the good work and thank you for the good spelling and grammar!
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on November 23, 2007
    Good start can't wait for me. So sorry about Minato every time i think of him dying i cry. :D
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  • From PrincessKoriandr on November 23, 2007
    This is an awesome first chapter! I can't wait to see more of it. One more thing on the list to look forward to.
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  • From FairyNiamh on November 23, 2007
    Very sad and very well written. Good Job, please do continue with this story. ^_^
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