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Reviews for May It Be

By : LadyLaran
  • From ANON - just a reader on December 15, 2007
    I have been reading the story and I like it. Its not a Sasuke/Naruto pairing but that does not take away from the story. I believe a writer's job is to draw the readers into their world. While one may respect the fandom and work within it, you as the writer should create something you believe in. Thus far, I've been following the story and I like it. The last chapter was interesting. I'm waiting to see how Iruka and Kakashi's relationship as caretakers and roommates develops. This story is appealing in that it proposes to give Naruto something he has not experienced at the outset a loving and caring home and foundation. So I'll be here reading. I can't promise to always review, b/c well truthfully I'm sometimes a little selfish. I want to receive w/o having to give anything back. But I'll try. Thanks for the update.


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  • From dragoncisco on December 15, 2007
    I very much am enjoying this story. The power struggle was interesting and I am looking forward to the ritual. I hope you will develop a backstory for the Hatake clan. Thanks for the story.
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  • From dirtygirl42 on December 15, 2007
    Thanks for posting and updating so quickly! I'm really enjoying this story - the plot is so fascinating that I don't even miss the smut lol. Seriously though, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story as you show a new take on Naruto's childhood and his relationships with his father figures. Great work.
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on December 15, 2007
    i love this story!!! It's so sweet and i don't know if you had it from the beginning but i have never read and liked a Neji/Naru before so i'm curious to see how this turns out. I have high hopes for this excellent story. keep it up!

    Loving this story,

    Lokivsanubis
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  • From solitare1 on December 14, 2007
    I am at a loss for words....the way you have this story going, is magical. It's the way I think the story of Naruto should have been in real life. Bravo!
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  • From Jien on December 14, 2007
    So cool, you go and take your time making this fic smooth. please update when possible.
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  • From serenagold on December 14, 2007
    Great chapter, really sweet. ^^

    In response to your A/N:

    I wouldn't worry about having to come up with a Sasuke/Naruto pairing for a story like this. It probably wouldn't make any sense. On of the main reasons for Naruto's obsession with Sasuke (prior to even becoming team mates and friends with him) was that Sasuke didn't have any parents either. After Sasuke's family was killed by Itachi, Naruto felt sort of a special bond with him; Sasuke being I suppose the only other ninja in the academy with no other family. However, Sasuke wants nothing to do with Naruto, plus is not only popular but excels at everything Naruto fails at, so Naruto's desire for friendship flips over to jealousy, resentment, hate and rivalry. Thus the love/hate Naruto/Sasuke is born! In this story, you've given Naruto a family and a support system. Because of this, Naruto wouldn't feel the same connection with Sasuke that he does in the manga. Of course, this is your story, so you can do with it what ever you please, but choosing to pair up Naruto with Neji as indicated in your summary makes for an interesting development that I look forward to reading. I can't wait to see where you go with this!

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From FairyNiamh on December 13, 2007
    I like what I have read so far. ^_^ I am looking forward to the next update.

    To help you with your blue screen of death and doom I suggest you use google documents. ^_^ This way if your comp dies (like mine did) your stories are safe and sound. Ja Ne.
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  • From Kagenoshi on December 07, 2007
    This is a great story! Heh, I'm kinda taking a break out of my own writing just to read this! I love NejiNaru and KakaIru!! Just as much as GaaNaru! Can't wait to see what you have planned for the rest of the story! Well, Ja ne!
    ~Kami~
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  • From inumoon3 on December 06, 2007
    Update soon!!! Hopefully Iruka's title will be mommy! hehe
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  • From ANON - Tamara on November 26, 2007
    I like how you making this story out to be...that part when Yondiame(sp?) was dying i nearly brought me to tear, that part was especially well written.

    The main reason why i started to read this story was because i saw "neji/naru"; that's a rare pairing not too many people write about...sofar your story is really interesting, i'm really looking forward to the next chapter! :)


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  • From tash1021 on November 26, 2007
    oh i love it
    a little sadden that its not sasuke and naruto but i still like it
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - KyuubiTamer on November 26, 2007
    Awesome way in introducing Iruka as a parental figure alonside Kakashi as well as a solution to the whole 'taking care of the baby' ordeal. Keep the chapters rolling!
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  • From dragoncisco on November 24, 2007
    This story is really good and I am looking forward to future installments. I appreaciate how fast you updated and want to thank you for that.
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  • From ANON - animelover on November 24, 2007
    oh this is sooo neat! thanx 4 sharing this story ... and i can't wait to see where you go with it. what naru pairing will there be, if any?
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