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By : LadyLaran
  • From PrincessKoriandr on December 16, 2007
    What can I say? Another awesome chapter. I can't tell you how much I'm truly enjoying this story. Can't wait for more.
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  • From tash1021 on December 16, 2007
    ^.^ doggies
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  • From ANON - animelover on December 16, 2007
    wow, that was absolutely breathtaking! i wish i had an imagination like that .. to be able to come up with a ritual and describe with such fine details. you're a genius. can't wait for the update to see kakashi's history. Oh, is there going to be a time skip at some point?
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  • From dragoncisco on December 16, 2007
    I really like Iruka, and his ability to contain himself until the end of that remarkable ritual was amazing. Great ritual, and I look forward to the explanation in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on December 16, 2007
    wow. very cool story
    update
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  • From solitare1 on December 16, 2007
    Very good. And unexpected. I love the wolf ritual this is soooo cool.
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  • From ANON - ecdragon00 on December 16, 2007
    Great story, cannot wait til next chapter
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on December 16, 2007
    this fic is fricking awesome. 'nuff said. looking foward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - nlb on December 16, 2007
    This is story is really, really awesome. I loved the power play Kakashi pulled at the Council meeting, as well as the fact that he's Naruto's new dad.

    The idea of the pack adoption was great and beautifully described.

    Hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on December 16, 2007
    omg omg omg!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS FANFIC!!!!!!!!! you are such a great writing i could feel the setting of the story!!! This is so great! (can you feel my enthusiasm?)

    Oh no now Iruka is going into Mother Hen Mode Kakashi better watch out. LOL I can't wait to see what else you bring foreward after an experience like that.

    :P can't wait for more.

    Lokivsanubis
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on December 16, 2007
    Like how you have restored honor to Kakashi's family since it was lost in the manga i believe after his father's screw up then suicide. But that's not important because i love the way you work this story. Iruka got freaked out by his uniform but the design was ingenious. Baby Naruto is so lucky to have powerful parents.
    OH yeah!! i read somewhere about this really strong Hatake attack that involves white chakra, its called the Hatake Family Tanto and i guess it can be considered a blood limit since it involves white chakra only the Hatake family controls.... and its a type of chakra blade that was made famous through Kakashi's father's use of it. oh and kakashi's father was known as Konoha's White Fang. :P

    Hope the information was helpful in your story because i can't wait for it to continue. i really want to know about this ceremony of the Hatake family.

    Lokivsanubis
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  • From serenagold on December 16, 2007
    The mask concept for the Hatake clan is a clever idea. I'm interested to see where you go with it. (On a side note, if it is customary for Hatake clan members to cover their faces, this could benefit Naruto in the sense that his Kyuubi markings on his cheeks would be obstructed from view. Will it help people to forget? Not sure, but I'm looking forward to the next chapter!)

    Keep up the good work! ^^
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on December 15, 2007
    Question-are you going to cover Naruto's childhood? And who does you plan on pairing Naruto with? PLEASE don't pair him with Sakura! She's a fan-girl and treats Naruto horribly! Naruto deserves someone who will treat him decently! In fact he deserves better! I often wish Naruto had chosen some other girl to crush on, and was on a better team-with either Hinata or Shikamaru or Choji or Shino...Shikamaru only views everything as troublesome and I doubt he is one of the kids who hates Naruto...Choji showed he was willing to work with Naruto...As viewed in the rescue Sasuke arc...Shino is a complete enigma, I think he is the type to be neutral and refuse to take sides...
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  • From ANON - animelover on December 15, 2007
    awesome job! so what did you base the hatake clan traditions? this is just a really unique twist to this story and can't wait to see how it pans out. i actually chuckled to watch the council get their "just desserts" when kakashi dressed them down. YEAH BABY!!!

    thanx for sharing!
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  • From tash1021 on December 15, 2007
    AHHHH!!!!*starts pulling hair out* not a cliffy it was getting to good
    ur evil *big puppy pout* i wanted to know what the ritual was
    please up date soon
    oooh before i forget i had a very good idea for a part in your story
    but...*blushes* I'm not sure if you want to hear it
    if your interested heres my e-mail
    tash_1021@hotmail.com
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