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By : exo88

From Koji on January 15, 2008
feshbfbdsjbfkndfkslfjvkdsgvdbnx - *result of too much sugar for breakfast and an amazing fic*

Yah, but anywayz...*squeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!* Shika got his cast off!! And Chou-Chou gets to keep it!! AND KIBA GETS ANOTHER MENTION!!!

"Shika, my man!!" - lol'd at that so loudly!! I love how Kiba talks in this fic!! Well, I love the way he does most of the time, but you get it perfectly!!

I don't have the time to leave a 37687879whatever word review (it freaked me and honoured me that you counted *insert onomatopoeia for gigglez* and also that you wanna print the ficlet...though I think that scared me...damn girl, you're all about the not-obsessage, ain't ya?)

Maybe, if you update reallyreallyreally soon I can start up on my whole *leave a longer one than last time* contest I'm having with myself at the moment. I am currently winning, you'll be glad to hear (just ignore the size of this one)

I wanna quote mooooooooooooooore!! But I'm late, and still not ready at ALL so I gots to get my leave on.

Loooooooooooooooooved this chapter (even though I say it all the time, but it's twoo)

Update soon and I'll give you love. Lots and lots of not-obsessive NaruSasu love...maaaaaaybe...

xxx
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From LadyRonin on January 15, 2008
i will be laughing for days about the snake poo. i can't wait for something unexpected to happen so i can just walk up to someone and say i say snake poo to someone else. this was a funny chapter especially with kabuto shutting karin up with the needles. i guess the dance is going to be the place where sasuke and naruto 'come out". that would be sweet. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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From KoibitoFemme on January 14, 2008
*points an accusing finger* YOOOOUUUU!!! I know what you're doing throwing all those inanimate intimate innuendos whats up with them climbing on the table to eat lunch huh HUH And that sick fetish Chouji has with that cast?!?! You betta not be planning a ChoujixArmCast lemon or worse the other way around @.@ ewww *covers her mouth and runs to the bathroom* And don't even THINK about putting this on me I didn't tell you to molest those wooden furniture pieces that was ALL you!!! You were pervy before I even reviewed the first time I will not go down with this wrap! You pervy greedy monkey.
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From ShikaChouFan4Life on January 12, 2008
Heh heh...Chouji and crayons...I loved it. All I can say about this is it was another good chapter. It's good to see Naruto and Sasuke worked out their problems.
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From Koji on January 11, 2008
WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN WOMAN?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!twelve

Jesus...I was checking so often just incase I missed it.

But my GOD!!! These last two totally made up for it! I'm still laughing my ass off at the whole 'Mr. Nara' thing.

LMFAO - "I bought Chouji some new crayons..." - I almost died, seriously. I fucking love their interactions!! It all seems totally pointless, just like the stupid little conversations normal BBFs have, and it's fucking adorable!! You'd better loce your Shika up before I come over there and rape him. I wish mine was like yours...

If we don't have that party I'mma 'splode, honestly. Yay! And the daisies are coming too!! We're like a couple of hooligans, with all our not-obsessing and flora.

I MISSED YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!! Lol, I almost wrote mush there.

I MISSED YOU SOOOOOOO MUSH!!

Gawd...liek, omigosh...I dunno...but yeah, I did totally miss you. The Naru/Sasu argument was so dramatic! And reaslistic too, with Naru all storming out and drowing his sorrows.

Lol @ Kiba : "Wazzup!" - I want him in my bed along with Shika.

Oh! Before I forget, I MAY or may not have dedicated the latest chappie of Fetish to someone who MAY or may not be yourself...it's a possibility...perhaps you should find out...Hmm...we should get Shika and Chouji on the case since they make such a kick ass team. 'case-by-case' - LAWL!!!

I'm attempting to make this the longest one so far...but I dunno how it's doing, we'll see.

"He looks good." *SLAP* "Damn good!" - I rolled over in hysterics at that, litterally! Lol! And "You roll arould like a freaking ball." - had me almost crying too. Jesus woman, you know exactly how to write immense cracky hilarious dialogue!! LEND ME YOUR POWERS, I DEMAND THAT YOU DO!!

"Who says I'm paying?"
"My cast does."

Right, I'm just totally just quoting and spoiling now. Do I give a damn? Think about it.

Gah! I can't think of what else to say apart from the usual I'M IN LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!eight And Shika, and Kiba, and Chouji to an extent, and exodusess, and this story, and pie, and daisies, and exodusess, and stuff, and yeah...

God damnit, we're awesome.

xxxxxx - you get more than usual since I missed ya and I'm commenting for two XD
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From KoibitoFemme on January 11, 2008
WHAT THE HELL?! I feel targeted. This is WAR indeed. I am gonna start fucking with ya now. Make me a scape goat will ya I'll show you. That argument between Naruto and Sasuke was kinda GAY LOL and coming from me (since I am yuri) is something to say. Now what LOL. And um so Chouji is a disclaimer/artist/secretary? LOL cool. Like the chapter anyways. Hey whats up with the morning sickness hmmmm? I await your retort monkey girl LOL
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From LadyRonin on January 10, 2008
this is really cool story and i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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From KoibitoFemme on January 09, 2008
GAH! You're gonna do WHAT? Wait a minute! Wood Gone Wild what the HELL thats just so so WRONG. Its bad enough my own readers blame me for being a perv now you wanna make me your scape goat. I will find you and picket your bedroom dammit. Um for some reason I was thinking Shika and Chouji were about to shag. I don't think I could handle a girlfriend like Temari. GEESH! shes scary. Cute I think I am gonna make a sign that says THE *** is sleeping. Not gonna post my real name. I think I have stalkers. .> Well as always I will be waiting since you left a DAMN CLIFFHANGER IN YOUR WAKE!!!! I WILL FIGHT YOU TO THE END ON THIS WOOD TOPIC. You sick monkey LOL
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From ShikaChouFan4Life on January 09, 2008
Yay!!! Another chapter!!!! At first, this one had me going "Poor Naru" because of his situation, but then...BAM...a slap in the face with one of your oh-so-funny ShikaChou scenes. (Literally for Shika) lol I LOVED the scene at the bar...anything that even slightly bashes Ino is perfection to me. It is kinda funny how my two favorite characters are on the same team as my least favorite. Update soon, I'll be waiting. ^_^
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From Althea on December 31, 2007
I LOVE this story! It has my three favorite characters in it (Sas/Nar/Shika)! I really like how you have written the characters in the story as well, you've portrayed them perfectly! Awesome job, keep writing!
~Misery
(could you e-mail me when you up-date? wpjn_sanderson@hotmail.com)
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From LadyWolf on December 16, 2007
Sorry I don't think i've reviewed before....Gomen!! I just like to read all the way through and then review. If it's a fic that I just can't stop reading I acutally forget....!!!

I love this, Sasuke-kun is so cute, as Naruto would say ;o) I love how you get Gaara in there (I LOVE HIM!!!) and Shikamaru smart ass is freakin' Shikamaru *shrugs shoulders* enough said ...

Keepin' comin'!!!!

Can't wait until the next chappie!!!!
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From ShikaChouFan4Life on December 16, 2007
lol Best chapter yet. I knew I would love this one just from the chapter title, and yay, it had all 3 of my favorite characters in it. Gaara is first with Shika and Chouji tied for second. I don't know how you do it, but the way you write Shika is completely in character. Oh, nice job on the lemon...it was really hot, but the part that got me was when Shika asked Chouji if he wanted a hug. I just about fell out of my chair laughing. XD
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From Vibora on December 16, 2007
aww! that ending was so cute! ^^
yeah, sorry, my reviews tend to be short >.
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From Koji on December 15, 2007
OMFG!!!!!!

I did this weird gurgle-snort-squeal noise when I saw the title, seriously!! And I danced a bit too when it was loading...I'M SOOOO HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!

Thank you soooooo much!!! Shika is so awesome that he deserves his own, like...world!! Or something...

I was kinda 'mmeerghh...' at Temari's first appearance, 'cause I don't like her in the actual Anime, but I like your Temari. In the Anime, there's all these undertones of Shika/Temari going on but IT'S NOT TRUE!! He's in love with me!! And Kiba...

But you got that fact that they're just straight forward friends perfectly. Lol...I love how she's such a bitch to him. And Gaara!! The description of him hugging (or, well...embracing is a much more Gaara word for it, as you said) made me fangirl all over the place. I was, like, screeching (quietly) and it made my heart dance around.

I don't fucking care how much space I take up this time.

And yayz!! Let's 'not' obssess together!! *Not-obssessing party* We can have sake and ramen and dango and Sasu/Naru + Kiba/Shika goodness all night long...

My my, that was rather smexual, don't you think? SMEX PWNS...I feel psycho...

Ahh yes! And you added some smut in there, too! Clever girl, you just made me the happiest person eeeeveeeer!!!

This review is getting ridiculous in length...

Like I care!! You deserve it! All my inane, pointless, Shikafied ramblings!!

SHIKAFIED I SAY!!

Kay, I'm going to bed now...lol, I'm an idiot...

Thank you so much, honestly. I feel indebted suddenly...I may just have to write you something...hmm...

xxx
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From LadyMarsmallow on December 14, 2007
the title of chapter 13 made me giggle...

i love this story!!! X3 wanna know what happens next.... ^^;

and OMG shika should become a marriage counselor... XD
can't wait for the next chapter!
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