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Reviews for For the Love of His Son

By : lexjamandme
  • From Jelp on January 07, 2008
    O.O Is it over? Is this it? Can't be over. I at least want an epilogue! ::Jelp's inner three year old is ranting for more!:: :-) Excellent chapter. Good ending, if it is the end. If not - update again soon! ~ Jelp
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on January 07, 2008
    *loud joyful rebel yell* YEEEEEESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!! Oh yes yes yes yes yes yes YES! *does weird funky boogie* GOD that was amazing! I'm almost speechless with happiness. *giggles* I mean what a way to end the chapter! Naruto impales snake slime on Sasuke's sword. And oh the return of the inner 3 year old and even better he's joined by Naruto's own inner chibi!*bounces excitedly* Aaaaaand the baby is okay! Oh you so totally rock. *squeals* INCREDIBLE chapter.

    Oh yeah almost forgot, Yo Fang!*pets Fang's head* stop leering at lexjamandme like you're gonna eat her or no dust bunnies for a month. *Fang whines* I thought I'd tell you that Fang is on loan until you finish this story, then I'll need him back cause he keeps me safe from Itachi when he's in a bad mood. Course I'll see if I can find you a dragon egg so you can have your very own guard dragon.
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  • From KoibitoFemme on January 07, 2008
    I I think I love you! THANK YOU FOR NOT KILLING THE CHIBI. I hope this isn't the final chapter. You out did yourself with this chapter. I think I almost peed on myself trying to get to the end but not wanting the chapter to end. Thank you so much BRAVE-O BRAVE-O
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  • From ANON - Ivy on January 07, 2008
    This chapter was great! So much action :) I'm glad Naruto still has his baby... maybe it can be smooth sailing from here? I'm sure it'll be fantastic whatever you decide. This is one of my favorite fanfics!!!
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  • From charmpit on January 07, 2008
    OMFG I was on the edge of my seat!

    They took them out. THANK GOODNESS!

    And thank you for updating so expeditiously.

    So...what happens next?
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  • From LadyWolf on January 06, 2008
    I just love this Fic...!@!!!!! I really do hate that snake bastard!!! Can't let nobody be happy....

    I hope the baby would be ok..
    OH, I LOVE that when you had their son speak to sasuke! That was freakin' awesome!!!

    I seriously can't wait to read more!!!
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  • From ANON - Alicia on January 06, 2008
    DONT YOU DARE HURT HIM!!!!! GRRRRRR I WILL BE SO ANGRY, I WILL STOP READING...ok well maybe i cant do that cause curiosity will get the best of me but pllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaseeeeeeeeeeeee dont hurt him!!!!!
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on January 06, 2008
    AMAZING! Absolutely dramatic!

    I love this story, I could not exit my computer to stop reading it. Full of romance, angst and humour. It's stunning. Please please update soon!

    The babies are absolutely adorable and I was crying when the newborn touched Naruto's hand. So beautiful. I hope everything is alright in the end.

    I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on January 05, 2008
    I loved it!!!! every chapter better than the last, please don't kill the new or naruto!!!!or sasuke or ryuu!!! Please let them leave in the end!!!
    Can`t wait for the next chapter!!!! the most important thing I wanna say, even if there are thousands is HURRY UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Sorry I know it's not so easy to write all in one go but I love it an d can't wait for the rest!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on January 05, 2008
    I read this story in two sittings!!! It is amazingly complex, nuanced, and beautiful. Does Naruto have to loose his baby? The scence with Ryuu was genius :) I love evrything about your story- the descriptions, how you wrote all the side characters, and Sasuke/Naruto's relationship! Update soon; I can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From Imagy on January 05, 2008
    waaaaaaahhh
    poor little guy...
    D:
    but I'm so excited to see what happens next!
    bring it on, baby
    :D
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  • From bluegenjutsu on January 04, 2008
    Awww, not Sasuke and Naruto's youngest baby!!! That is so sad!! The part with baby Ryuu showing Sasuke his 12 year old self and talking to him was cute and sad. The kid's adorable!! Thanks for the new chapter!
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  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on January 04, 2008
    I don't know if you've heard the Shinedown song 45 or not but it just occured to me that it fits the most recent chapter very well. *shrugs* Just thought I share that.
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  • From Jelp on January 04, 2008
    ::cries:: Awww! That was sad. Poor Naruto. At least the baby knew - and Ryuu is awesome. Very smart taking Naruto's chakra. :-) I really hope for another update soon! I love babies. ^_^ ~ Jelp
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  • From Jelp on January 04, 2008
    O.O You are bad with cliffies! ::mutters, and you were talking about my cliffie:: Anyway, this is a review for Chapter 11 where Naruto randomly dissapears. Great chapter. Smut, angst, humor all rolled into one! I loved this part: "Looking up, he saw Naruto sitting calmly in the tree above his head, legs swinging. At that moment, the ‘Naruto’ caught in the sand turned into a chamber pot and exploded over Gaara and the nearby knights." I giggled, then realization really hit in, and went...eww...lol. Now, this probably wasn't meant to be funny, but it was because I misread it. It's the part where Naruto is talking about how many people are coming with Orochimaru. The exact line I misread was "Orochimaru, Itachi and twenty armed knights." I read it as Orochimar, Italy and twenty armed knights." So, apparently Italy is going to take the Uchiha castle! I was cracking up at myself. Thought I'd share. lol And I just liked how you ended the baby "reveal" scene. "And then, like on the proverbial Seventh Day, there was silence." That was great. :-) Good chapter. Going to go and read the next chapter - though I may not finish it all tonight. 'Tis past midnight. Thanks for the good chapter. ~ Jelp
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