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Reviews for For the Love of His Son

By : lexjamandme
  • From DragonsDancers on November 29, 2007
    cant wait for the next ch
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  • From nekochannya on November 29, 2007
    OMG, OMG... poor thing... LOL those expressions were priceless... nyah! It was so cute! LOL They coudnt believe their eyes! LOL... are you foreshadowing his rejection? I hope they wont treat him too bad when they know about kyuubi... from what you've stated Itachi and Orochimaru did a number on the poor kid... This story is getting so interesting... I am getting throughly hooked... I approve!!! not that you care... nyah! LOL keep at it!
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  • From Allys on November 29, 2007
    LOL, Okay so you're still killing me with the ends of chapters, but this one was just funny XD. And I have to take time out to say, that I love how you write Naruto. He's adorable and charming, and innocent, yet not at all girly, or helpless. *Glomps u* I think that's Fantastic. I'm usually an avid NaruSasu girl, but that's mainly because too many authors can't seem to make an uke Naruto that doesn't annoy the crap out of me. But I love yours. And it's so nice to have some variety. I just want to cuddle him into oblivion. And your Sasuke is fabulous as well. Still stoic and pensive, but not cruel or warped in anyway. I'm so happy. You write them so that I enjoy them both, and when new authors do that, I feel the need to praise them. Other than that the length of this chapter made me all puddly and happy. So satisfying. As for content, well honey I loved that too. I love that Naruto gets to be all mysterious and Ryuu's mum *holds heart*. I'm such a sucker for Naruto/Sasuke babies. You have no idea. And Hinata XD, I loved her input and your authors note, hehehe XD. Not to mention Choji and Ino - ♥. Shika, Kiba, I love them all. You write them wonderfully. And I Love, LOVE that Naruto still gets to be his most kick-ass and amazing self XD. *Huggles u till you beat me away with a stick* Thank you so much for the update sweetie, it so was nice to see this morning.
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  • From Kimra on November 29, 2007
    Oh poor insecure Naruto! Hugs for Naruto! Hugs hugs hugs!

    ps. love the story :P
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  • From KoibitoFemme on November 29, 2007
    I have totally fallen head over heels in love with your story. Its so cute how Naruto isn't really a dobe and how innocent he is. I love there interaction with the little 'family'. I can't wait to see what else you have planned.
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  • From Hen on November 29, 2007
    Oh no! I hope everyone's not going to start being mean to Naruto now. He's been through enough!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2007
    Oh Naruto. Never ceases to get himself into trouble. He's trying to keep is past hidden and all he's doing it show more of it like the oblivious ditz he is. I wonder how he's going to explain all thise to Sasuke? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From Jelp on November 29, 2007
    And the plot thickens! :-) Kinda weird that Naruto doesn't realize how strong he is, but it's rather comical at the same time. Keep up the good work! Yay for updates!!!! :-) ~ Jelp
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  • From NeonOranges on November 29, 2007
    Holy crap! I worship you! Worship you and the ground you walk on!

    I can't wait for more, I'm hooked.
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  • From MidnightsKeeper on November 29, 2007
    i think this is one of the best naruto au stories i've ever read. and if this is only your first...then you should definitely definitely write more. and update this chapter really soon because i can't seem to get enough of this story!
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  • From monrque on November 28, 2007
    this story very good i cannot wait to see what happens next.
    it takes a lot to get me interested in a story and with this one i had to read tell there was no more
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  • From Hen on November 26, 2007
    "Naruto turned until his cheek rested against Sasuke’s heart, his breathing evened out and Naruto fell asleep. Sasuke looked down and felt his heart clinch. This moment could be from his childhood dreams. Him sitting against the headboard of his bed, his newly named son asleep beside him while the mother of his child, exhausted, curled up in his arms and slept soundly."

    That is one great paragraph.

    I want a happy ending for Naruto! He deserves it!

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  • From SakuraKaizoku on November 26, 2007
    AWESOME JOB!!!!
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  • From Jelp on November 26, 2007
    Awww, the end of the chapter was sweet. During Sakura's childbirth scene, I totally had a mental image of Naruto just crouching there with a catcher's glove in his hand, waiting to catch little Ryuu as he popped out of Sakura. I hope you update again soon! :-) ~ Jelp
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  • From solitare1 on November 26, 2007
    This is simply great! If what I think happened to Naruto really did happen, I think there is going to be a really unusual twist later on.
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