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Reviews for For the Love of His Son

By : lexjamandme
  • From Trollmia on December 13, 2007
    I must admit that I first was sceptical to this story... but rest assured - You've convinced me enough to place you amongst my "authors-to-watch"-list... *smiles* This story have turned out good. Looooong chapters with smiles, angst, love, and ironism... Just the way I like it... You're doing good and keep on going with that!! (and for a more personal information - I don't look for grammatical errors or so - because I'm not native to the English language to begin with...) I just go on what is written and that is what's count ne? Just go on like you have and I'm good with it :D
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  • From Allys on December 11, 2007
    Well okay then... LOL, umm... that was interesting XD. Gaara + Naruto = Big BANG! LOL XD. This is still really one of the sweetest stories ever. It's like I've Judith McNaught meets Naruto. I Love it. I agree with Shika, the clones were a great idea strategically. but LOl, Sasuke is so cute when he's all concerned. And the dinner table arrangement was absolutely fantastic. It made me really happen that Naruto brought joy. It's just so IC. The tiny stolen moments are wonderful too. I just feel kinda bad for Sasuke, when he finds out how Orochimaru and Itachi abused Naruto. He's not going to take it well at all. *pats his back* Thanks so much for the update sweetie ♥
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  • From solitare1 on December 10, 2007
    Very good story. I can't wait for more because, well I just can't! (smile)
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  • From Jelp on December 10, 2007
    LOL Yes, I think Naruto and Gaara should talk before they kill each other. Oh, and your line "They hadn’t heard anything from Naruto’s clones, well except the one that had ‘poofed’ back after a rather nasty squirrel bite" had me laughing hysterically. Please update again soon! :-) ~ Jelp
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  • From inumoon3 on December 09, 2007
    Another wonderful chapter! I can't wait to read more! I think Sasu/Naru need some quality time with theirselves and their baby! I think they should have a family picnic!!! hehe Well update soon!!!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on December 09, 2007
    Thanks for the new chapter!! Good to see Gaara in the story!! I love how Naruto and Sasuke made up after their argument before. It was sweet! :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2007
    What the hell is this about? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From nekochannya on December 09, 2007
    The tension is gonna kill me! nyah!!!!!! They are at each other's throats! GREAT! LOL!!!! I love it!! More and more each day!!! Good job! keep at it!!! nyah
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  • From vanessaclarke on December 07, 2007
    Yay! A little SasuNaru action! They make such a sweet little family... (sigh)I love this story!!

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2007
    Just when things were going so well between them. But, Sasuke did make a good point. I hope tney make up. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From spoon10488 on December 06, 2007
    very cool.can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From NecroAngel13 on December 06, 2007
    LOve your storu. Absolutely love it. Keep up the amazing work. I can't wait to see what happens
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  • From bluegenjutsu on December 06, 2007
    Thanks for the long chapter!! I loved that it was almost all about Sasuke and Naruto. Naruto was mean though to Sasuke at the end, when Sasuke was just expressing his concern and caring about Naruto. But that's how Naruto is, stubborn and determined. :D Great chapter! :)
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  • From nekochannya on December 06, 2007
    That parting shot... was brilliant! Very satisfying 6th chapter, nyah! Lovely action fluffy feelings... wonderful way to portray the characters developing attraction... nyah! Happy kitten!! YAY!!! I wait anxiously to know more!!! I really do hope they dont get a hold of another clone... and thank God you didnt include a daughter on the tortured couple mix... nyah! it was terrible enough as it was... Great job!
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  • From Allys on December 06, 2007
    XD *Swims in happiness and sweetness* This chapter made me smile *Hugs u* Thanks. Now that everything's out in the open, I can't help but wonder what's going to happen. I'm really happy about the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto and how it's progressing. The scene when they were just standing there staring at each other and had to kick Kiba out was precious. I also have to thank you for getting around one of my pet peeves in there, LOL. I always wonder how people write their character's throwing up and then forget about the clean up process, and then make them kiss people o.0!! LOL, I'm so squicked by that, so I have to be silly and say Thank God Naruto washed out his mouth and Sasuke didn't stick his tongue down his throat! LOL, I know I'm silly but yeah, it kinda skeeves me out. Guess I'm the one with the vivid imagination after all. LOL, can't believe you Hitchcocked me!!! LOL, That was excellent by the way ;). Oh and I also wanted to put my 2 cents in about the mangekyou. I think that if he tries to do it the fake way that a Henge/clone/genjutsu image would help, cause I think the change in the eyes also has to do with the actual imprinted image and the trauma that goes with it. Trauma does things to people's brains, so it stands to reason that that would be part of it. I also think that Sasuke can beat Itachi without the mangekyou, and well, I guess we're about to find out. Do you read the manga?? Anyway, this is still a lovely, charming and captivating story, that I can't wait to read more of. Thanks for writing it ♥
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