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Reviews for For the Love of His Son

By : lexjamandme
  • From charmpit on December 17, 2007
    Alright! More updates! And fast, no less!

    The plot thickens...
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  • From Jelp on December 17, 2007
    Yes, Itachi must die. I'm glad you understand this. lol Poor Naruto. And speaking of Naruto, I don't know if you read the manga or not, but the most recent chapter revealed it was Jiraiya who gave Naruto his name, and it was indeed inspired by ramen. :-) Excellent chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one! ~ Jelp
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  • From spoon10488 on December 17, 2007
    Duh, Duh, Duh! Poor sasuke and naru-chan. Well at least it's all out in the open now. Wow dramatic and angst chapter, with little sweetness thrown in at the end.
    Can't wait to read more!
    =)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2007
    Man, that was eye opening. So, that's what happened. That's just awful. Awaiting the next chapter!!
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  • From solitare1 on December 17, 2007
    Boy, I bet Baa-chan feels like a heel now...Poor Naru-chan, he has been through so much in his short little life. Hope he can bounce back from this.
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  • From inumoon3 on December 17, 2007
    Man...I'm happy Naruto finally told Sasuke! But poor Naru-chan! Orochimaru is one sick freak! As for Tsunade and Jirarya they better help protect Naruto!!! But anyway I hope to read more soon!
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  • From mls on December 17, 2007
    Love this story!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!
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  • From sethian on December 17, 2007
    I loved this chapter !!!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on December 17, 2007
    Thank you for the new chapter!!! Poor Naruto!!! I'm glad he finally told Sasuke what his brother and Orochimaru did and that Sasuke gave Naruto the support and care he needed. I guess Tsunade and Jiraiya will stay to help protect Naruto?
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  • From vanessaclarke on December 17, 2007
    Oh come now darlin'. It's not as bad as all that. You haven't really confused anyone too much. Any plot holes you think you may have left are totally minor. Besides which, that's what the edit option is for. You can go back and fix anything you like. I know I'd read the whole thing over again after an editing. Heck I might read it over anyway. It's a good story. I certainly hope you don't give up writing. You wouldn't deprive us all of another good story would you? (puppy eyes)
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  • From monrque on December 17, 2007
    each chapter has gotten better i love it just keep up the good work.
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  • From KoibitoFemme on December 17, 2007
    Ok you anyone that rants at you for plot holes is an ass. Ok yea there is a plot hole but you can cover it up. How about Orochimaru put a very strong henge on the boy when Jiraiya would come to visit. And when he did meet Naruto the boy reminded him so much of the chibi that he decided to teach him a trick. Something like that it works. But please don't stop writing. I love this story and I can't wait to find out why the boy threw up. Did getting hit do that or is something wrong with Ryuu like colic or something? Update soon please!
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  • From nawatia on December 16, 2007
    Oh, My, Goodness...I have been mesmerized by this story!!! There are occasional word choice errors, but those only stand out because the rest of the story is written so well, and can be caught by reading with a fresh eye. Such lovely characterizations, and cliffies that have me coming back for more!!! If you have a email notification list for new chapters, please put me on it!
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  • From DragonsDancers on December 15, 2007
    hurry hurry cant wait till the next ch
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  • From Wingedmerkat on December 15, 2007
    I love this story! #1 fav for Naruto! The little Dragon is soooooooo cute!
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