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Reviews for For the Love of His Son

By : lexjamandme
  • From ANON - Cassie on January 02, 2008
    Omg. >_
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  • From ANON - cheetah192119 on January 02, 2008
    This story is so awsome. I love it and can't wait to read more.
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  • From MidnightsKeeper on January 02, 2008
    if you thought people were going to kill you for the last cliffhanger, you ought to be really worried this time around. i bet some are going to be out for blood. i, on the other hand, just sat slack-jawed in front of my computer for a full minute in disbelief before daming you and all cliffhangers to hell. i shall continue to curse you until we get another chapter. because cliffies like that are just. plain. WRONG!

    on the plus side i am totally worshipping this story right now despite the mpreg which i usually avoid at all costs. did you sneak that mpreg warning in the summary or did i just not notice it? i am slowly being convinced you are evil. making me enjoy a mpreg story and killing me with cliffies.

    that was a long assed review.
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  • From ANON - Alicia on January 02, 2008
    OMG please dont let anybody hurt Naruto! he's pregnant for god's sake! good story by the way
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  • From nawatia on January 01, 2008
    I think you meant to use writhing (can be good, or can be bad depending on the context - in this case reeeaaallly good) instead of withering (always bad) in the context used in the beginning of this last chapter (11)

    Oh, and btw...I am pretending that the last sentence of chapter 11 does not exist.
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  • From KoibitoFemme on January 01, 2008
    You think you had torches at the proposal cliffhanger?? I'm ready to throttle you for that one. OH I hope Naruto doesn't suffer too much. OH PLEASE NO MISCARRIAGE I have enough of that with My beta's work and other dark fics. And I have to say that damn lil 3 year old Uchiha is quite entertaining. Makes me wanna grab a stick and poke him in the belly lol. Update soon.
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  • From solitare1 on January 01, 2008
    I love Sasuke's inner child...He had me dying!
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  • From LadyLaran on January 01, 2008
    GAHHHH!!! Bad bad bad!!! You left us on a cliffy!!!

    *cries*
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  • From ANON - charmpit on January 01, 2008
    I am loving this AU where Sasuke is willing to openly express his feelings for Naruto and even marries him in a formal ceremony. I can't get enough of this fic! Thanks for posting new chapters so quickly.
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  • From nekochannya on January 01, 2008
    *Takes out the torch and lights up* What!!!! you dare make him disappear now that he's pregnant with Itachi around? Orochimaru presence supresses his chakra! That alone can make him lose the baby! come on! Dont be cruel! Nyah!!!! Not another bad news!!! I deserve a bit of happiness after so many tears... and so does he!!! you are evil!!! *cries* This chapter was beautiful and full of emotions... I was anxiously awaiting the second baby... but to have him disappear... please dont let him fall in their grasp again... please... no more!! *begs* More like... >.>
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  • From Bookworm51485 on January 01, 2008
    Noooooo, Naruto. And he's pregnant and he can't fight back. And they might do something to hurt his baby and nooooooooooooooooo. You better update soon cause I want to see that Naruto's okay. Or mostly okay. Or at least alive and still pregnant. I hope they don't 'hurt' him anymore. Now that he's just started to get over it :'( Now that he's just started to get happy in his life and his new marriage. Grrrrrrrrrr I hope they get those bastards and I hope you update soon.
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  • From Kool3Ayame on January 01, 2008
    DeJa Vu. can you spell it? because i can. i know because i just spelled it. but anyway... that is exactly what i am feeling right now... but your story is the most heart-felt story that i've ever read. you can look at it, and feel the emotions. and though, i've read several stories, i rank this one in the top 10. and they were good stories, from professionals, to amateurs. i commend you.. keep up the good work.
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  • From kaimono on January 01, 2008
    Oh no. a cliffie! i hates to know what itachi will have in store for poor naruto and their unborn child...please continue updating!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on January 01, 2008
    This was such a wonderful chapter!! Until the end though!! You had to have something bad happen at the very end!! Poor Naruto!! I hope nothing happens to the baby he's carrying.
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  • From Allys on January 01, 2008
    LOL, well for all the excitement with the proposal cliffie, you definitely made up for it with the prompt delivery of a wedding XD. I loved the rush XD. The pace only added to the excitement and that's some beautifully skillful handling of Naruto's sexual situation.

    But Omg!!!!! Nooo!!! You cannot, you crazy, persuasive bastard! Gah!!! Dammit, dammit!!! LOL. Yeah, you had me going. But it was okay XD. I'm really happy you made them wait XD, and observe all the regular customs. It's so very rare to see, and would probably be a little odd in a modern setting (I'd still love it though, lol). But it was absolutely wonderful in this. I really pity anyone on the other side of an argument with you, it'd be completely unfair.

    Ahhh... you made one of the mistakes in the lemon that seems to be abundant in the fandom these days.
    You confused writhe with whither or wither.
    whither - to what state are we bound? whither are we going?
    wither - become shrunken or shriveled from age or disease.
    writhe - make continual twisting, squirming movements or contortions of the body.
    I don't usually point this out, cause usually I could care less, but you write really beautifully and a mistake as simple as that, just feels wrong.

    LMAO!!! Hinata!! "Honestly you're right that wasn't too hard" XD *dies*

    I love that he's having a baby, the "normal" way this time *snicker* normal. But I have to point out if he can't use any chakra he needs to bring back the clones.

    You're trying to kill me aren't you. This is exceedingly bad. You can't promise a baby and then drop him into a situation where he's almost 99% certain to lose it. *pulls out hair*

    Aggh!! I'm sorry this review is really disjointed, I was gonna go back and finish it/fill in the blanks, but that ending... I need time. LOL *hugs* Thank you for the update it was really good, but I'm going to go have a conniption now.
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