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Reviews for For the Love of His Son

By : lexjamandme
  • From Demoninmysoul on October 20, 2011
    AWWWW!!!! Loved it!!! I just can't... so sweet, totally OOC, but it was great!!! I loved them, the whole story, and the kids!!! And the humor, and strong Naruto, and killing the bad guys, and blue sharingan!!!

    Thanks!
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  • From Demoninmysoul on October 18, 2011
    Okay, this is my PREreview... because while I like the story (I just started, so I won't use 'love' yet), there is just this one thing that makes me frustrated...
    Why? Oh why do they call each other 'teme' and 'dobe'? Teme means you (in an offending way), so it's not fit to use to replace someone's name in certain situations (like replacing 'him'). While 'dobe' was something like dead last, or stupid (I'm not that sure, but close enough), and Sasuke by no means has any reason to call Naruto that. (Well it is better than the other case, but still not good enough!)
    Calling Sasuke a bastard, or (more neutral) this guy would be better - I know the anime used the ones I'm upset about, and it's hard to translate, but for God's sake, if you try, you can find something suitable according to the actual story you write!!!

    Sorry about that, I read manga, and the translators repeated so often the meaning, I just can't detach it - and this also makes me prefer the names the other way (Uchiha Sasuke, not Sasuke Uchiha), because japanese use the Surname first.

    Anyway, if you already knew all this, then sorry about the rambling, but I had to write it out of myself, to be able to continue and enjoy the story!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on July 20, 2011
    Hey, I can't remember if I've reviewed this story before, so I'm gonna take a moment to say I LOVE IT!!!!! Everything about this story is amazing, every single word.

    And on that note, I wanted to see what you you thought about a sequel. Something with the Akatsuki wanting Kyuubi? And adding in some stuff with Ryuu and Kisho being a bit older, maybe in their pre-teens? It would be funny to see how Naruto and Sasuke handle their boys wanting to go on dates. ;D I think adding in more characters from Naruto, like the Akatsuki, would add some action and give us a peak into Naruto and Sasuke's lives a few years in the future. Just a thought. :D

    Bottom line: I've read and reread this story so many times, I've lost count. I absolutely adore your writing style and I sincerely hope you write more, even if it's not about this particular story.
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  • From ANON - blu kat on August 07, 2010
    That was a great read and I loved it from beginnig to end. Since it was complete, I decided to leave this one review.
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  • From ANON - annie on April 27, 2010
    omg...srsly loling while reading the parts with kiba...love your writing.. *continues with story*
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  • From UzumakiNaruto20 on March 14, 2010
    Ok, i don't know if you check your reviews on old stories but i thought i'd let you know that I really love this fic! I must have read it about 5 times already but i still love it. I also have a little request; could you please write another mpreg fic please? I would love it if you did 'cos your writing style is amazing and you somehow manage to keep Naruto and Sasuke in character, even with the craziest plots! lol thanks xXx
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  • From ANON - rage on November 01, 2009
    so utterly cute. no other way to describe that, cool idea about making the babies able to talk to there parents. GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!
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  • From fairietayle on May 23, 2009
    This might be your first story but it's as amazing as your other stories! There's so many and much emotions running around on this story that they are palpable from this side of the screen. I CRIED reading this fic. I hardly ever cry. But when you started talking about babies and both Sasuke's and especially Naruto's love for them, I was crying like a waterfall. I couldn't help it. It was just so damn touching...
    I don't know what else to say. You seem so sincire in your writing, like you have felt those feelings and experienced those happenings personally.
    I liked the plot and loved the characters. The babies were adorable! (but I have to say, if I ever have children, I might love them more when they are still a part of me than when they're actually born...) I just simply adore this fic!
    And now I'm off to read your other fics ;)
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  • From ANON - Angel on May 19, 2009
    First re-read. Just absolute love!!! LOVE!
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  • From ANON - Nyve on January 13, 2009
    Finally, just shy of 5 in the morning, I have finished this story and all I have to say it that it was fucking amazing!!!!!! I loved it!!! Thank you so much for writing this, you have officially made the list of one of my all-time favorite fanfic authors. Thank you so much for the wonderful story! I absolutely adore Sasuke's inner three year old and the chibis are so cute. An absolutely lovely story, and now if you'll excuse me, I have class in a few hours...
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  • From Leeana69 on January 07, 2009
    Okay so. :composes self:

    I'm glad I had chips with me as I read this so I could have something for all the CHEESE!! :o

    Other then that...and the Mpreg. :facepalms: It was a great fic, thanks for writing it. :D
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  • From Leeana69 on January 07, 2009
    You had to didn't you. It was a great fic, undeniably cheesy at times, but still good. And then you added Mpreg. *facepalm*

    I'll keep reading cause I want to know how this ends but still....ah basic biology, you've failed me again. XDDDDDDD

    P.S. This isn't a flame. :D
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  • From Ikippiki on November 14, 2008
    There are things you write that i just can't stop laughing or wondering about, I listed my favorites!

    -"If silence is golden, then what happened next in the Uchiha courtyard was rainbow colored pandemonium." Where did you get that it's so poetic!

    -"Who was the boy? What was he? Was that a baby? Why would the boy bring a baby? Does anyone know what happened to the last bag of chips? Okay, so not everything was “mysterious peasant boy brings small baby” orientated, but most was…. Honestly." lol

    -"Naruto couldn’t make out what they were saying, but Orochimaru smiled (Naruto would have nightmares tonight) and Itachi lead the woman out the side doors and presumably to Itachi’s bedchamber." Having nightmares because Oro smiled haha

    -"They circled each other like wild cats (don’t tell Kiba), each observing the other for weaknesses and attacking when they became clear." I love the kiba coment!

    -"‘Shit, shit… shit, shit… shit, shit, shit…’
    “Kit, is that the tune to ‘Twinkle, twinkle little Star’?”" I love how your mind works! So funny!

    -"Sasuke’s response was a darker, more menacing glare. Oh, that the Uchiha’s in the heaven could see Sasuke now. The pride they would feel." I just love all theUchiha comments!

    -"Sort of an Uchiha nonverbal communication for “discussion over, enjoy the couch.” " Well said!

    Well that was amazing, if that was your first story I can't wait to see how your writting skills will be in a few years... Way to go! Your writing skills will conquer the planet yay!
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  • From ANON - Mimi on November 03, 2008
    omg i loved this story now i have tears in my eyes awww i LOVED this story dont ever stop writing!!
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  • From ANON - dustin on October 12, 2008
    I LOVE YOU!!!!!! *sniff* that was the best story ive read in quite some time.. i can see why its on t.w.'s top ten... id say its in my top three. number two. you are an awesome writer and should be proud. you made me cry at one point and that is no easy task. i might check out anymore stories you may have, but not today. maybe later...maybe...
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