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Reviews for Mel

By : animeluney
  • From EatMypickle on November 25, 2007
    I didn't think I would like it at all, but strangely after the first few paragraphs I got more interested and when I finally got to the end I had to blink a few times. Very... gruesome, I never want to imagine Shika in a situation like that and as disturbing as it was I wish there had been more. I hope your Gore mood is sated and I can't wait to read what you come up with next.
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  • From theduckmaster on November 23, 2007
    wow...o.O that is a very interesting story thats for damn sure...well first off how can you be so cruel to your fav character!!! dear god i feel so bad for poor shikamaru!!! i almost want to cry...poor poor Shika...ok im dun. well my fav line in the story i would have to say would be teh actually theme which is "laughter and pain are never far apart" bc tis such an awesome line. ok so my fav part would have to be where Sasuke is going to kill Orochimaru but then you also read what Oro is thinking while this is going on :3 that was funny(i also liked how you used what Sasuke actually says in teh manga for this part.) woo done!

    OK! time for teh ending message! if you have yet to review any of Ner's stories plz do now! i havent bc i now Ner in offline so i have already reviewed them in person. so do so now go now and review! tis not that hard so comeon! get to it ^^
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