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Reviews for Of Love and Laughter

By : chilepie
  • From NekoIzumi on December 16, 2008
    Please reconsider continuing this aweinspiring story! I was at the edge of my seat from the first letter of chapter one to the last letter of chapter three and I would love to read more. Its amazingly written and flows smoothly. Others should read this to see what a top notch fanfiction looks like. And the fact that you had Sasuke getting slapped just made my day... Great job! >.
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  • From ANON - CkA on August 17, 2008
    Delightful fluffy goodness - thank you~!
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  • From ANON - animelover on May 01, 2008
    i'm sorry if it sounded like i WANTED you to end this fac after 3 chappies ... by all means, please continue if your muse directs you! ;-) but if you were to end it, it would still be a masterpiece.
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  • From ANON - animelover on May 01, 2008
    OMG that was so cool! it's like you tied up loose ends we didnt' even know were there! (leeneji / sasunaru) you totally rock, and this ended perfectly.

    thank you for sharing!
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  • From nawatia on April 29, 2008
    Hi - I am taking a break from reading the fabulous desk scene because I needed to tell you that the word "prone" means the face down position, and the word "supine" means the face up position. I see this mistake frequently, and your story was just so good, I had to share that one GLARING mistake with you. Otherwise your writing is very smooth and well done. OK, I am going back to the smut...ttfn!
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  • From charmpit on April 28, 2008
    I'm wiping my eyes.

    That ceremony was beautiful. It isn't often that a same-gender wedding ceremony is written into a fanfic, but you pulled it off effortlessly. There was again that careful balance of humor, angst and WAFF.

    Do something for me. NO--do it for yourself. Finish this! It isn't finished. Commit to two more chapters. You can do it. You are an AMAZING fanfic writer. There is SO MUCH EMOTION piled into these three chapters, I just don't know how you do it! This is one of the most beautiful fanfics I have ever read, and indeed the best NejiNaru I have ever had the pleasure to read.

    All the elements are there, right down to the gifted fanfic writer. Please FINISH THIS.

    PLEASE.

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  • From charmpit on April 28, 2008
    Oh, please, you've got to finish this fic. This is one of the sweetest most heartfelt NaruNeji fics I have ever read! It's just so darn sweet! It's the perfect mix of lemon and WAFF--with two of the hottest characters in the Naruto universe! Please do not abandon this!
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  • From sweetciel on February 03, 2008
    What a find! I wasn't expecting it to be so wonderfully written. You are truly a master of your craft. Lovef it ^_^
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  • From ANON - dwabit on February 03, 2008
    very hot scenes! oh i love it!!!

    but you are soo going have to do a side story of sakura and itachi
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  • From LadyLaran on February 03, 2008
    Oh dear gods, don't tell me he bought the veil?! On the wedding day? NEJI IS GOING TO KILL HIM!!!!
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  • From charmpit on February 03, 2008
    This is beautiful. I like this AU where Itachi is a good guy and married to Sakura. I have seen a lot of ItaSaku fanfiction/fanart pairings and I am becoming more comfortable with the concept. This is also good because Sasuke is not even an afterthought in this story. Frankly, Sasuke is being overdone in the fandom (I always did like Itachi more than Sasuke). There are so many Kishimoto characters who are far more interesting and even more beautiful than Sasuke, but all hearts seem to beat for the youngest Uchiha.

    Naruto and Neji make a brilliant pairing, even as brilliant as GaaNaru and ShikaNeji. Naruto is an expert at mining the humanity of others, so it's fitting that his prize in Naruto fanfiction is the most beautiful that it can offer. And Neji is nothing if not a priceless work of art that even shames the word beautiful.
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  • From Kagenoshi on February 03, 2008
    You did a damn good job on this! NejiNaru is my favorite pairing next to GaaNaru! Are you gonna do a chapter about the ceremony? I really hope so, I would love to read more of this story...and the way Neji was with Mariko X3...Naruto and Neji should adopt, too!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2008
    Absolutely loved it...I can only imagine what was in the bag
    lol Sounds like your gonna make another chapter...*Hint* *Hint*
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  • From Twiggies on February 03, 2008
    Oh my God!

    I love this story!
    I love it when Neji's uke. xD
    And they're so sweet to each other.
    Making their fantasies true together.
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  • From gravybaby on February 03, 2008
    AAAAAWWWWWWW!!!
    This story is soooooo sweet.....AND HAWT AS HELL!!!
    Its so gooooood!!
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