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Reviews for Mission Iruka

By : SumiHatake
  • From ANON - Nelly on July 28, 2008
    YOur story is just hilarious. I love how the story developed. That was a beautiful ending. Is this the ending or do you plan to write more on this story. It's a wonderful story. Great job.
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  • From ANON - lightning on July 27, 2008
    hilarious i'm so glad i decide to read this
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  • From naracest on July 08, 2008
    This was one of the best stories i've ever read! Wow. I loved how long you made me wait for them to get together, the way they slowly grew closer and iruka's little wet dream about kakashi made me blush deeper than i've blushed since i read my first yaoi story. Amazing work! really, wow. I'm going to add this to my list of stories to read again and again.
    Cheers
    meg
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on June 14, 2008
    Oooooooh that was just great. It was funny and fluffy. I loved the ending too
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  • From ANON - G on January 17, 2008
    OMG CUTE ending! Love it!
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  • From Mintoz on January 13, 2008
    Really cute story!
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  • From ANON - sorahi on December 27, 2007
    Thank you for filling in the blanks!!! Now I will be able to sleep! ^_^
    I love the Christmas story, too and can't wait for the sequel.

    sorahi
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  • From ANON - sorahi on December 26, 2007
    I'm really enjoying this story, but I have a question... In the following paragraph....

    They set about stringing the wire and making sure every. It was while they were stringing the wire through the hall that Iruka discovered the reason Pakkun was so eager to get the place free of spiders. The wire snapped and Pakkun tumbled backwards right into a spider web. "Get it off me! Get it off me!" he screamed terror laced through his voice.

    What is supposed to be after "making sure every"? every what? Sorry, to trouble you, but I know it will stick in my head and I'll end up dwelling on it. I probably need more distractions, lol. Thanks, sorahi
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  • From ANON - yaoistar on November 26, 2007
    OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!! That was the best Kakashi/Iruka fanfic ever!!!! You have to right more fanfics about them!!!!
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  • From DuoMaxwell on November 21, 2007
    nice story. i enjoyed it very much.
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  • From ANON - Tiffany on November 18, 2007
    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!! It was so entertaining and good! Im just so im love! XD
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  • From ANON - Anise on November 17, 2007
    I loved how you built up their relationship in this story and had them work through their feelings, and the fact it ended in yummy smut was a nice bonus! The joke Iruka came up with to play on Kakashi was too funny and a squealing Pakkun afraid of spiders was just utterly adorable and the ending was just great, poor Neji he's just so hard done by ;)
    It was a really wonderful story the humour between the two was perfect, especially between Iruka and Kakashi when they finally slept together it all came across so well, I really enjoyed reading this! ^_^
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on November 16, 2007
    Now look dear I just got off the floor and you put me back there again?! Loved it, and the Hinata's dad deserved to find them. Lol, Neji was so funny. . . "Looks like it's genetic, glad I'm only his nephew." Is this the end of the story? I hope not but you did mention a sequel so there is that to look forward to. I love how you did this story, wonderful character interactions and plot. Nicely done lemon and lots of fluff.

    littleolmee
    littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on November 16, 2007
    *gasp . . . rolls on floor laughing . . .reaches up to type . . . * Oh my KAMI!!!! *falls back to floor* Okay, that was too much and I loved every moment of it, even the time I spent rolling on the floor. Loved that you put in Naruto's peers and Iruka's old students in there and everyone's reactions. Sakura was the least bothered out of all of them! Iruka and Kakashi made Genma drop his senbon!!! So many great parts to that chapter, wonderful comedy added in there. Loved everything about it.

    littleolmee
    littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on November 16, 2007
    Well this will show AFF that they can't keep a good story down. Hee, hee can't get the other one fixed just repost it. Loved the lemon. Gee can't them two do anything without people watching and betting? It seems Iruka got over his fears towards Kakashi and Kakashi has figured out just what he feels towards Iruka . . . wonderfully done. Hmm, will we see that one jealous kounichi again? What is she going to think when the confirmation that those two are actually in a relationship and not just for sex?

    littleolmee
    littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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