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Reviews for Iruka Iruka Paradise

By : Koji
  • From mizukiruhoh on November 20, 2008
    I thought the story was good and hot. It was wicked fun. :D You could do a couple more drabbles in this universe, that I think, would be total fun. Owari. :D
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  • From exo88 on November 28, 2007
    ...never mind :D

    and haven't people read fanfics? of course jiraya writes also yaoi, he must please the readers!

    still loved the first chapter and had to cool down after it. and I wanted to give you a nice review because you always write the nicest ones for me :)
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  • From exo88 on November 28, 2007
    "No one's gonna come...except maybe Junko...I think he was approaching orgasm just as you confiscated it..." ...it took me the longest time to realize who he was talking about :D I was thinking something like "how the hell can he know that someone was having sex- ...ooooh! I get it!" and then I lol'd. seriously, woke up my roommate.

    ANYWAY, loved it! and they did stay in character. haven't read the second chapter yet, but I'm getting to it!!

    and I just loooove flustered-but-determined!Iruka. now, to that second chapter...
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  • From Kerobinson01 on November 18, 2007
    You really deserve more reviews for this, I personally thought it was hot and so fluffy, aww!
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  • From ANON - Jien on November 16, 2007
    Such a cool title!!
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on November 15, 2007
    *blinks into confusion* Since when did Jiraiya write yaoi porn? Just who is he using as inspiration? Because if it turns out he is spying on Naruto, Tsunade might have to make peeping a capital crime...Because I doubt Naruto would be thrilled if his sex life was made public...
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  • From ANON - NeonOranges on November 15, 2007
    Wow, you should write more of this, a lot more.

    Yes, that would be good.

    Now I have a nosebleed to take care of...
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