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Reviews for Man-Whore And The So Not Man-Whore

By : brook13baby13
  • From reamane21 on January 12, 2009
    what happen next.
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  • From ANON - Mikayla on September 20, 2008
    HAHAHAHA sai so desvered that.lol. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on November 27, 2007
    HAHA! That what Sai gets!
    update!
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  • From ANON - Sigart on November 27, 2007
    I just thought, since I gave you a pretty bad rating, I'd do the courtesy and tell you why.

    You need someone to help you with grammar and spelling. That's the most glaring error as far as I can tell.

    Sasuke seems weird and OOC with the "inner sasuke" thing and it's a bad idea to call it 'Suke'.

    You tell everything as it is. Look your fic through and check every time that you used is, was, been, and try to replace it. Instead of saying something like "Sasuke was annoyed" you should say "Sasuke's brow furrowed, as he glared at blablah" That way you get your point across without actually saying that Sasuke was annoyed, you get me? It makes reading more interesting.

    ..Still, I wouldn't worry about that until you got your grammar and spelling under control.

    Hope I was at least somewhat of help.

    Sigart
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  • From kataru on November 26, 2007
    Hmmm. Kind of nice. Man, I luv to have those pics of Them O_O; *nosebleed*
    and you have to work on your grammar :D
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  • From ANON - KyuubiTamer on November 26, 2007
    (laughs behind a hand) How hilarious!
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  • From Puzzling on November 26, 2007
    No offense.. but it gets confusing when there's an inner sasuke and a sasuke talking X) But apart from that.. I love the story! ^^ Do update soon ^^ I really wanna know what's going to happen next.. And i wanna know what else pics the girls took ^^ I wonder.. does this mean that the girls made Sasuke rape Naruto? or vice versa? x)
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  • From KoibitoFemme on November 15, 2007
    Ooooh interesting I hope this is a happy story so far I have a smile on my face I am sure this will be a good story just please update soon. Its nice that you made Naruto wanted too I like when people want him
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  • From dragonite2388 on November 14, 2007
    wow! u got my attention! hehe

    can u udpate sooooooon.. plssssss
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