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By : Hestia
  • From RyuuOokami on December 31, 2011
    I have to admit that this is actually one of very few PWPs that I actually like and find myself reading now and then *chuckle*
    The way you write Sasuke and Naruto is my favourite way. Manly, snarky, and in character. *smile* Thank you.
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  • From ANON - ... on March 18, 2009
    bit fast to move in isnt it..
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2008
    (I review as I read.)

    (*blinks*) Wow. That opening was . . . startling. It’s a little hard to picture Itachi as the punk that first paragraph portrays him as, but it’s an interesting experience. . . . I wonder why Itachi doesn’t get the beer himself. . . . Yeesh. Why did Itachi make the stakes so high? And why’s Sasuke just taking that crap? õ_o
    Sooo, does Sasuke have some sort of abusive relationship with his brother? I still don’t get why he takes it. . . . And Itachi’s apparently an alcoholic. . . . Heh. Love this fantasy Sasuke’s getting, starting with how natural the blond might be. . . . I like the details about how the whiskers went from silly to sexy in Sasuke’s mind. . . . That’s cute, Naruto’s got a bit of a soft spot for kids. . . . I kinda like the exchange between Sasuke and Naruto; the challenges they issue to each other. . . . You know, I’m kind of at a loss for words here. There’s a feeling of OOCness, but at the same time the story’s hot in a playful way. The dangerous playfulness. Though Itachi doesn’t sound like much fun to be around. Sasuke’s small sex history was interesting to read about; I can’t really picture it of him, but what the hell, it’s entertaining. . . . Heheh, I love how purpose melts into sexual distraction, then he’s brought back to the present again. And I like his little thoughts in between the hot smoochies. . . . Man, that’s a lot of toys. (This is going to destroy another part of my mind, isn’t it? Ah, well, at least this time I’m willing to smash it.) . . . . Like I said, why the HELL can’t Itachi get his own damn beer HIMSELF?? And why the HELL is Sasuke putting up with Itachi’s crap?? . . . . I like all the animal innuendos towards Naruto. . . . So did Sasuke get to spar with his brother, later, or did Itachi stiff him?

    Well. That was one of the stranger stories I’ve read. It reminds me of stuff I’d find more in the gay erotica anthologies in bookstores rather than something on AFF. Not a criticism, just an observation. It’s got that rougher quality of the published stories rather than fanfiction on the net.
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  • From ANON - a k light on July 02, 2008
    OMG!!! I am oficially a perv! But I really like it! Is there gonna be another chpater? Because I noticed they didn't use the ginger!
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  • From CinnamonStar on April 05, 2008
    Thanks for the damn hot and very well written story!!! Poor Sasu... Getting a black eye for not being able to buy Itachis favorite beer. I like your Sasuke. So much in character! My favorite sentence was: “Stay. Stay the night, stay the whole fucking weekend. Stay forever if you want.” So intense, so desperate in a way it hurts.
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  • From RyuuOokami on March 20, 2008
    That was the most hilarious piece of smex I've read in a while. And so kinky too! *perverted smile*
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  • From catchkatch on March 16, 2008
    that was F-ing hot. *fans herself*. why didn't they use the toys naruto bought? WHY, WHY? dear lordy, please make there be a sequel. double thumbs up, lol.
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  • From ANON - al on February 22, 2008
    eeeeeehhhh...? Naruto bigger than Sasuke!?... oO =___= no way! But that was good story, uke naruto is always the best~~ ;] cuuuutee...
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  • From I4eather on December 04, 2007
    oh my fuck, can I please use expletives to express my gratitude for this hotness? holy freakin god, I can't take it, must reread immediately. o.m.f.g. seriously. Hmm... normally I might name some things I liked: how about the whole freaking thing. Ah okay, the shopping, the 'do you want this cock in your ass,' the fact that Sasuke didn't know who Sakura was, etc etc etc. I like that he says 'this cock' and not 'my cock.' I dunno why. Look I gotta go reread it now, retyping your same words I read not 5 minutes ago is giving me an insane urge that I can't explain. thanks for the hotness xoxoxoxo
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  • From leanne on November 20, 2007
    Despite some of the heavier disturbing content mixed in with this barrel of hot fluff. I loved every minute of it and laughed at some of the obsurdity within it and loved the hotness of the sex.

    I don't know if you would want to continue this story but, I definitely would read it if you wrote it.

    Hot and hotter.
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  • From Kerobinson01 on November 17, 2007
    Aww so cute! I love it when the guy gets...the guy, lol And Itachi the voyeur, well we all know that he can't get any. Amazing sex, sizzling, just SCORCHING! Loved it.
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  • From sweetciel on November 14, 2007
    Absolutley stunning! You make writing complete brilliance seem easy. Have i told you how glad i am that you're back? I don't think i can say it enough. The Master has returned!!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on November 13, 2007
    most def one of my all time fav fics! the first few lines itachi said had my mouth hanging open in shock (for someone who jerks off that much you have no balls LOL) cracked me up son! I absolutely LOVE a strong willing uke naruto, its just so much hotter than whiny girly type (tho they have a place in my heart too :D) Oh and how could i forget 'TwoStroke?!' LMAO!!! Jesus i was hyperventilating i laughed so hard, i was like 'no day my yout' lol AAhh it was just all around goodness, pleasant distraction from the studying i'm SUP to be doing online. gracias!
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  • From cynaga on November 13, 2007
    Always a pleasure to read your work Hestia. This one-shot was a delight. u r the best! :D
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  • From Rosebud on November 13, 2007
    Wow, that was HOT!!!
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