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Reviews for Finding You

By : jellybelle21
  • From Zrina on November 11, 2007
    This is a very good, very sweet story! It definitely deserves more exposure than it has had!

    A couple of suggestions on the summary that might help: I really see no need to put in there the Tort, violence, Humil, BDSM, Abuse tags since you already have up N/C. Some people might get turned off on by these tags when the story really is more about the WAFF than about the rape that occured. I would also take off the Death tag since it immediately implies that at least one of the main characters dies. The bad guy dying really doesn't count since it is expected and there are a lot of ppl out there that won't read a "Death fic." The bi tag is really unneccessary merely because although Naruto went out with Sakura, there was really nothing sexual going on.


    Anyway, just thought I would throw that out there for future reference. Also, the story is fantastic, but could have been divided up into smaller chapters. It makes it easier to read that way and will highten your exposure since it will be brought to the first page more than once, enabling more ppl to notice it.

    Again, lovely story, and I hope to read more from you in the future!!
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  • From Loupiotte on November 10, 2007
    I rarely bother to read oneshots: they're either very good, in which case I feel frustrated cause they're too short, or not worth much and it's a waste of time.
    But how glad I am that I just gave yours a shot!!!! Throw all preconceptions to the winds! You made my day with it and its lengh is not that of the "usual" oneshot. I actually realised that when I had to turn on the light cause the sun had set while I was engrossed in it...
    The previous reviewer pretty much summed up my opinion, so I won't repeat, her/his choice of words is probably better than whatever I'll come up with. Thanks!
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  • From lexjamandme on November 10, 2007
    This was the best story that I have read in a long time. The whole thing was well written, character driven and just amazing... breath-taking to read. The emotions that you conveyed between Sasuke and Naruto made my heart hurt, in a good way, I think that's the highest compliment that I can give. I'd go back and re-read it if it wasn't midnight. As it is it's definantly going on my favorites list.
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