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Reviews for Slow dancing in a burning room

By : knize16
  • From solitare1 on November 09, 2007
    Yes...this is going to be good. Just don't give me too many heart spasams on the way to making them happy together. Great start.
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  • From Sessygirl on November 09, 2007
    Please continue this. I don't usually review but I really want to see what happens next, so update soon.

    -Akiru-
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on November 09, 2007
    This is fabulous!! More soon please!!
    Slave
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  • From littleolmee on November 09, 2007
    Great start. Love the relationship you show here between Naruto and his daughter. Can't wait to see what you do with this. Keep up the good work and take care.

    littleolmee
    littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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  • From squeaker on November 09, 2007
    you are going to update right? PLEASE!
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  • From Mignonne422 on November 09, 2007
    Aiiiieeee!!!

    OMG, if you don't give me more soon I will die! DIE, I tell you!!!

    That was...I don't even have words...it was surreal.

    The beauty and depth of the emotions you portrayed so simply and yet so clearly are beyond description. You could feel every twinge of emotion the two were feeling as if it were your own. And your characterization was perfect. Naruto was very IC despite the very different background. You managed to give him the perfect mix of bubbly exuberance and inherent sweetness blended with the occasional sad passing thought that is so him. And Haruhi is so perfect. I'm dumbfounded how a four year old has such a developed Uchiha personality and yet still manages to remain child like and innocent. Kudos.

    So yeah, back to what I was saying before....MORE!!!!

    You must feed the addiction now!

    *huggles!*
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  • From Luma on November 09, 2007
    Me too~! Me too~! I vote for more as well!
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  • From Kimra on November 09, 2007
    Yay. I vote for more. :D
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  • From dragonite2388 on November 09, 2007
    wow! that's cool... please update soon..

    wonder what happened... between naruto and sasuke... hmmm.. enyweiz..

    iluvit! [^_^]
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  • From lexjamandme on November 09, 2007
    Awesome, awesome, awesome beginning! I can't wait for more. I love their daughter and the relationship she has with Naruto. It's unusual to see a Naruto being forthcoming with who the other "daddy" is. This is much, much better. I just can't see Naruto lying to his children like that. Can't wait for more.
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  • From hpn827 on November 09, 2007
    Great start. I'm definitely interested.
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