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Reviews for Slow dancing in a burning room

By : knize16
  • From susanna on December 01, 2007
    Like it! And now they are going home... Can't wait for news about Sasuke.
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  • From Mignonne422 on December 01, 2007
    I really and absolutely adored this chapter.

    It was so beautiful. I love that little girl to pieces! You have made her the most perfect blend of her parents, both in looks and personality. Though she certainly tends towards her Uchiha side. Lol. She's heartrending, especially when she's sitting by the window singing.

    And Naruto...I just love your Naruto! He's so perfectly him and IC and I'm awed. Really, its just wonderful. I can't wait to read more. Your Kyuubi is so awesome. Loving the interaction b/t the three of them soo soo much!

    I'm so excited for your next update!
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  • From Deandraquin on December 01, 2007
    I love the story. I really feel for Haruhi (and Naruto). I hope her wish comes true (cause that would be the ultimate happy ending). *squeels at the thought*

    I really like your writing and I can't wait for the next up dat ;)
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  • From MidnightsKeeper on December 01, 2007
    i rarely ever read mpreg. there's only one other that i do read, and i read a hell of a lot of fics. this i decided to check out because i like your title. i'm glad i did. it's very good and i really really really hope you'll update soon. kudos to you for me liking this. i'm extremely picky. ;)
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  • From susanna on November 17, 2007
    Yeah, I like it. Naruto and his daughter are great - it's nice to see how he does his best to be a good father to her, and as it seems, she does not exploit the fact that he adores her, but is a loving girl as well.

    I have some questions however: Is he living in the Wave Country? Did he get his child there? And is Inari's mother really called Tsunami? (After the disaster around Christmas some years ago?)
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 10, 2007
    Great first chapter!! Please continue!!!
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  • From chinohana on November 10, 2007
    am droppin a review, and am wantin to see what happens. haruhi is cute! good oc; it is rare to find a good pc.
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  • From LadyWolf on November 10, 2007
    Can't wait to read more!!!!
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  • From LadyWolf on November 10, 2007
    Can't wait to read more!!!!
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  • From spoon10488 on November 09, 2007
    very cool can't wait to read more.
    =)
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  • From inumoon3 on November 09, 2007
    Aw their daughter is too cute! Update soon, I want to know why Sasuke hasn't found his family yet!!!!
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  • From akume on November 09, 2007
    I loved it. I could find no fault in your writing. So expect to read another chapter soon.
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  • From crazychemgeek on November 09, 2007
    Nice start - I like it so far. Can't wait to see what happens once Sasuke shows up. And poor Naruto having to raise Haruhi by himself, will the Konoha Shinobi discover him as well? So sad that he had to give up his dream of being Hokage to become a missing-nin :(
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  • From Picspixie on November 09, 2007
    wow, very well written, very detailed and i can't wait to read more
    but i just wanted to point out that kakashi didn't go into the water with his mask on, he wrapped a towel around the bottom part of this face and i think on top of his head lol
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  • From DragonsDancers on November 09, 2007
    very interesting i hope you update soon
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