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Reviews for Slow dancing in a burning room

By : knize16
  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2007
    So Naruto and Sasuke finally meet again? What happens now? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From Minjin on December 29, 2007
    *_* Write write write *pinches your cheek* *pokes you*

    You are so talented!!!! I love you for writing such a story and especially the way you describe the emotions =D its just so fantastic and real. You have an unique writing style and i love how you write all characters. Awwww and Haruhi is very cute~~~~

    This story is one of my favourites now~~Update soon please
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  • From sethian on December 29, 2007
    Awesome! Keep up the good work! I love the way you make your characters act and I really think Naruto's a good father! Write more I enjoy reading your story a lot :o)
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  • From nawatia on December 28, 2007
    Wow! Wonderful story so far! It drew me right in!!!
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  • From LadyLaran on December 28, 2007
    GAHHH!!! Leaving it like that...meanie!!!
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  • From lexjamandme on December 28, 2007
    Nooooo... finally, confrontation! I love it. I can't wait. Will Sasuke be fooled. Boy, if he is he should rethink the whole going after his brother thing. If he can sense his dobe then really... Can't wait! Until the next.
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  • From maggiekebs on December 28, 2007
    I am loving your story, it's so well written! Hope the next update is not too far off.
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  • From solitare1 on December 28, 2007
    OMG! This story is going to be awesome! Please more I need more.
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  • From susanna on December 28, 2007
    Liked it as usual. Haruhi is really cute, and a genius in the bargain. And Sasuke with Karin and Suigetsu getting on his nerves, so much that they cause him a headache. :-D And the boys meet without Haruhi being present, which is perhaps best. (The crucial point in all mpreg Sasunaru stories: How does Sasuke react?)

    What I like most about this story are the interactions between Naruto and his daughter.

    I hope you can take some tiny criticism: It is understandable that the girl wants to know as much as she can about Sasuke and that she wants to connect to him. Actually this is one of the points that make your story so wonderful. Sewing the Uchiha crest on her things was a very believable thing to do. But making her intuitively wear the things Sasuke wore during the first season of "Naruto" is perhaps a bit overdone, at least to my personal taste... And I don't see Naruto or Jiraya allowing her to show the crest openly in Konoha. After all, Sasuke would first have to acknowledge her.

    I hope it's okay that I said this. I really like your stories (both of them) and they are among the few that I regularly check for updates.
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  • From Sinslayer on December 14, 2007
    i like the story so far....please continue with it ^__*
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  • From serenagold on December 13, 2007
    Oh my god. This story is so adorable. Really. Its very touching.

    Keep up the good work! ^^
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  • From nm1716 on December 02, 2007
    I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From DragonsDancers on December 01, 2007
    i really hope you write the next ch soon
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  • From bluegenjutsu on December 01, 2007
    Great story!! Love Haruhi! She's a great cross between Naruto and Sasuke. I sure hope the little girl gets her wish! :)
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  • From Mordraugsereg on December 01, 2007
    This is a really well written story and I love all the detail that is put into it. Great job and I hope to see more chapters in the future.
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