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Reviews for Slow dancing in a burning room

By : knize16
  • From squirrelc on March 19, 2008
    I love the story so far
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  • From Ihadadream on February 19, 2008
    please update! This story is great! I wanna know what happens next!!! Sasuke will meet naruto after all this time, will he tell him about their daughter?? Please update!
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  • From bloodyqueen on February 13, 2008
    Hey I like your story. When I read it, it got me all happy and stuff.

    Anyway, I was just looking at your porfile and I understand.

    For me, I an also a writer but some say my grammer and spelling needs work. Anyway, If you want, I got a story named love's confession and I had to really work on it.

    But, It's fixed but they said it was crappy and junk. So, it took me forever to fix it. and I got some other stories that I am going to work on later this month. If you want, look at my profile and see for yourself.

    But, this story of yours; loved it.

    Hope you update, Thanks
    :D
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 07, 2008
    Thank you.
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  • From nyge98 on January 23, 2008
    I really like this story. I hope you write again soon
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  • From nawatia on January 19, 2008
    Great chapter. Great use of all five senses, and having naruto exploring his surroundings while he is still half asleep. Cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From lexjamandme on January 19, 2008
    Oh no! What a way to end! I loved all of Naruto's inner musings... they were great. And now Sasuke is awake. I can't wait!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 18, 2008
    What will happen next?! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ElfenDream on January 18, 2008
    oh wow.. I bend in the dust. you are really really good to write.. seriously, if you ever give out a book I`m sooo gonna buy it.
    please, please!! update soon. I read the whole thing in one go, I couldn`t put it down.. hehe. ^_^ I love the way you can convey feelings into your writing, you paint beautiful mental pictures. :)) ya ne..
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  • From spoon10488 on January 18, 2008
    That was an awesome chapter I can't wait for more. Please update soon. I love this story. Naruto isn't a wimp and I'm glad that this story shows that he can be just a strong as Sasuke or even stronger.
    =)
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  • From susanna on January 18, 2008
    Yeah! A new chapter! When is the Shrek-story going to be updated?

    I like it how slowly Naruto begins to get interested in Sasuke: How he first caresses him and looks at him and only very late kisses his neck.

    What made me wonder: It is understandable that Naruto undresses Sasuke completely, as he has to get out of his wet clothes. But why does he feel so embarassed about it? He is not yet aware that he is interested in Sasuke in a sexual way, and they are both boys. And why does he undress himself completely? Why does he not keep his underwear?

    Looking forward to what is going to come! I am sure that you will pull it off in a sensitive way, that is in a way that is not just plain pornography, reducing the partners to objects of their desire.

    susanna
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  • From Sessygirl on January 18, 2008
    Loved the chapter.

    I can understand how you feel about writing the sex scenes... I also put that part off for as long as I can... but sometimes the easy way to do it is just be vague and use metaphors and stuff... that is if you don't like getting into graphic detail. Either way I am sure everyone will like it.

    Can't wait for the next update.

    -Akiru-
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  • From bluegenjutsu on January 18, 2008
    Thanks for the new chapter and the flashback! Can't wait to see the actual smut! :D
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  • From antilogicgirl on January 18, 2008
    Very nice. I've always found that creating original characters has some very tough challenges to overcome, but you've managed it admirably. Haruhi is adorable, while still somehow being Sasuke's daughter. It is an odd combination, though it works to your advantage. I eagerly await the next chapter.

    a/j
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  • From megatron07 on January 01, 2008
    Great story looking forward to the next chapter.
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