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Reviews for Slow dancing in a burning room

By : knize16
  • From EmmPeace on September 14, 2013
    Please continue this story!!!
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  • From ANON - chester on August 20, 2011
    I don't know if you will get this or if you are still writing. I just want to say that I love this story. There's something so compelling about it and it makes you want to read the next chapter and you want to know what will happen with the characters. Please don't listen to what other people write about your characters, plot line or even smut scenes. Just write what you feel. And that nonsense about seme/uke is just that. To me, they are equal partners. Please don't get discouraged and continue to write what you feel is true to you. I hope that you get this and that someday you will finish this. Till then, I will be waiting anxiously as a fan.
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  • From hisoka on December 09, 2009
    adorable just adorable.things come together slowly but together none the less things are looking up for the...uchiha family...uzumaki family? who knows all that matters is that haruhi maybe having more siblings as she wanted soon when ever sasuke comes back.well hope you can update soon its one of the better stories ive read in a long time keep it up
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  • From anapana83 on July 29, 2009
    i just read this story for the first time and i'm hooked! Pleas do continue!
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  • From ladygizarme on July 27, 2009
    Great story so far. I love Haruhi and the personality you've given her. Also, I like that Naruto has been truthful with her from the start, and that Naruto still loves Sasuke and it isn't one of those angst-because-Sasuke-was-a-dick-but-now-he-has-their-kid types. Also, it's refreshing to read an Mpreg where the seme/uke lines also manage to not be set in stone. =)

    Your writing is also wonderful. I can really feel the emotions of Haruhi, Naruto, and Sasuke. I had tears in my eyes at a couple points.

    Keep up the good work!

    ~ lg
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  • From hisoka on July 27, 2009
    good thing sasuke listend to his instincts or he would have never notice that it was naruto,soes he even know he has a daughter yet?their gonna be a happy family soon yay for togetherness.hope you can update soon
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  • From Vanillaxrain on July 27, 2009
    I really do love this story. Update soon. I'm interested to see where you take the story. You're very talented writer, and this story has me hooked. I just have one question. How are they going to explain Hairuhi to the villagers. I mean Itachi and Sasuke are the only ones. Are they just going to say this is Sasuke's daughter and they left him to Naruto? I was just a little confused on that part.

    Vanillaxrain
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  • From ZeroZoey on July 26, 2009
    Very happy you updated, it has been forever. Glad you are back and I loved the chapter. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on July 26, 2009
    Awesome!! Im sooo happy you updated!!!! I hope yopu can do it again soon!!!
    I wanna read about when haruhi was created and find out if he is gonna tell haruhi about his encounter with sasuke!
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  • From tawanawelch on July 26, 2009
    Aww i really love this story with the adorable Haruhi and even Inari.:D I like the plot too so i really cant wait to read on more.:D
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  • From Sessygirl on July 26, 2009
    I seriously had to take a second look at this fic... the title looked too familiar, and when I read the summary I knew I had read this before. It really took me a moment before I was smiling like an idiot, when I realized that this was a fic I had fallen in love with and thought would never update again. You just made me a very happy girl with this update. Yes yes... I going kiss you right now.

    This chapter was really just too cute. Plus it's always nice to see some loving between Sasuke and Naruto. Although I think the highlight for me was when Haruhi told Naruto to take a shower. xD If only she knew what her father had been doing earlier that day.

    Now I look forward to them seeing Tsunade... and seeing anyone else along the way. Makes me wonder what everyone will say when they learn that Naruto is Haruhi's father... more so, I can't wait till Naruto breaks the news to Sasuke... if he even plans too.

    Please! Please, update this as fast as you can... It really would be a shame to see this sorta die again. *hugs*

    -Akiru-
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  • From ANON - Angel on May 12, 2009
    Hi there :)

    Wow am gutted at the abruptness with which you left this esp considering the layering. Was in a flimsy mood and just rifling through hoping for something to grab my interest and from the first paragraph you did that.

    The brat three dimensional and all her own person. The relationship between Sasuke and Naruto had development. Really you spent a lot of time backgrounding this piece and it consumed me... just really hope you get back into this because you've already laid all the groundwork.

    Hope all is well with you :)

    Cheers,
    A
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  • From ANON - Chester on December 17, 2008
    Listen, I LOVE this story. And I really like where this plotline is heading. But come on, how long has it been since there has been a chapter? If you're busy or caught up with personal life, that's fine, just drop an author's note saying that. You menitoned in your own description how there are stories that you keep coming back to and check regularly in hopes that they will be updated - this is that story for me. I hope that you receive this email in good health, etc, happy holidays, and please please please write something :(
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  • From fujinakaheero on April 15, 2008
    ah! You must update.. and I want to know when Naruto gets pregnant.
    Please update soon!
    I do love this story
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  • From yume10007 on April 15, 2008
    like the story, but how get the name for it?

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