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By : sakuyalove
  • From evillblackcat on January 06, 2008
    yay, I can't wait for sasu/naru lemon....update soon!
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  • From littleolmee on January 06, 2008
    Great last couple of chapters. You did well on the fight scene and loved how Sasuke reacted to it all. The hospital scene was great too. I could just see the two of them lying in beds beside one another and Naruto egging her on. I'd hate to go drinking with Naruto, that clone technique would really screw with your mind while drinking. Sakura really has her hands full with Naruto, he doesn't notice anyone's interest. Can't wait for the Sasuke/Naruto developments. Thanks for the quick updates, your doing wonderful with this story. Keep up the great work. Take care.

    littleolmee
    littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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  • From ringpop on January 06, 2008
    WOOO!
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  • From Allys on January 06, 2008
    Shikamaru is my god!! LOL XD. That was cute and funny ;). General answers are fine, update soon please :).
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  • From FairyNiamh on January 06, 2008
    Cute update, demo... HUZZAH for the lemony goodness that is to come! I am really looking forward to that. Keep up the good work, ja ne.
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  • From Dreamfool on January 04, 2008
    I was kinda hoping for Tsunada to put up a better fight. Then again, that make out technique, only a lesbian wouldn't be effected by that. Even some of them. Hopefully Naruto will get his rightful place as Hokage. However, I wouldn't put it past at least one counsel to try something.
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  • From Allys on January 04, 2008
    That was really cool XD. I loved that you actually gave him new techniques and that he's been learning and co-operating with everyone XD. I L'dMAO when Sasuke knocked Konohamaru out XD *snicker*. And hey I'm really happy he showed up *hugs* Keep up the good work and I hope you update again soon XD.
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  • From ANON - j.s on January 04, 2008
    damn its friday...update soon
    im love da fight scene...it was exciting to read!!!
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  • From Sayuri on January 04, 2008
    Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay~ been reading this story for a long time. I'm happy that Naruto beat Tsunade, but are all the villagers gonna accept him as the next Hokage? I'm so excited and I want to see more!!! And I want some SasuNaru action already =P Hope you update soon~
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on January 04, 2008
    I don't know if I've reviewed this yet, but I love the story, I think it's great, and from experience I have to tell you a lot of people (probably me included (sorry)) don't review unless there are steamy lemons. But let me assure you, your writing is great! You do a nice job of setting the tone and the fight scene was great, I especially loved Naruto using the fan. That was a stroke of genius!!! More soon?
    Slave
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  • From FairyNiamh on January 04, 2008
    Oooo, nice update! ^_^ I like how the plot is going. Please keep up the good work and I look forward to the next update. Ja ne.
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  • From serenagold on January 04, 2008
    What an exciting chapter! I loved how it all played out! Very well done and the battle sequences (one of the hardest things to write for many people here) were not only original, but highly entertaining too! I'm so impressed and overjoyed. ^^


    Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see the aftermath of this battle. Naruto defeats the Hokage without fox chakara? Pure awesome.
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  • From PrplGrl on January 04, 2008
    It's going very well.
    I'm enjoying it very much!
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  • From vinternatt on January 03, 2008
    I actually read the decrpition of this fanfic quite a few times, and was somewhat reluctant to read it because of Sakura.
    But today I just thought that I'll give it a try and I'm really impressed. Especially Naruto! His reactions are so cute and I can really imagine him acting like he does in your story. I like the way the storyline developes and I hope for Naruto to find out about Sasuke's and his own feelings.
    I just can't wait for you to continue. But I will be patient. :)
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  • From ANON - kyuubikit on January 03, 2008
    I'm usually strongly opposed to NaruSasu ((In favor of SasuNaru or Anyone/Naru)) and yet here i am reading your story 9chps later but I want more.... I'm dying to see what comes of poor Naru-chan and Sasuke,,,, and maybe just a little interested about what comes of sakura lol... please please please gimmie more
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