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By : sakuyalove
  • From ANON - Anon on January 25, 2008
    (I review as I read.)
    Chapter 12: XD “He?!” XD . . . Oh, Sasuke, you jerk, not while he’s drunk. . . . Little spelling error: “Every moan was a complement.” Actually, you mean “compliment.” . . . Wow, this is steamy. (*blush*) . . . “Dreamed of him every night since?” Interesting, he made no mention of it in the previous chapters. I guess in his drunken daze, he’s only now remembering. . . . I wonder what Sakura’s going to think of all this. . . . I dunno, Sasuke. Remember, Naruto was drunk. He might get a shock in the morning and you could be very hurt.

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2008
    Chapter 11: Whoa, the Hokage is hurt that bad? Yeesh. Naruto really did a number on her, didn’t he? . . . This is funny, Sakura’s lecture. . . . I thought it was just a mark like a seal, not a jewel. . . . I love it how Ino immediately gets the guys to help her and they’re all like “Aw man, no.”
    With fame comes groupies. It’s a way of nature. . . . Temari gets giggly when drunk? Interesting. . . . Yeah, Temari, scare them off, that’s my girl. ^_^ . . . Ooh, good line: “Or you could take lessons from that Uchiha glaring so hard over there.” I like the idea of “glaring so hard.” . . . Nice line, Shikamaru: “I would like to still have a wife when I leave tonight.” I love his dryness. X) . . . Whoa, the message sure is one way to kill the mood. . . . Jeez, Sakura, go easy on her. Hinata’s nice, darnit. . . . Uh-oh. Sasuke might be more of a threat than Hinata could ever possibly be.

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2008
    Chapter 10: To the AN: Awright! We got some Yaoi ahead! :D
    “Bunshin Bakuha?” What’s that? . . . I like that scene with Team 10 and Temari. That was funny. ^^ . . . WHAHAHAAAAAT?!?! HUSBAND?!? O_O . . . Cool, I like the bit about Naruto learning the fan techniques. . . . Yeah, I can understand that. It makes sense that the marriage would make you change your village, but it is hard to picture her as a Leaf-nin. . . . Yup, never underestimate the “Uzumaki charm” (to use when all hope fails). . . . HAHAHAHA AWRIGHT I WAS WONDERING WHEN WE’D SEE THAT AGAIN!! XDDDDDD (I wonder if it’s anonymous people or if it’s people we know. ^^) . . . Oh . . . Gawd. Poor Sasuke. XDDD . . . Nice fight. I wonder if Sasuke’s going to have anything to say about that one technique in the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2008
    Chapter 9: To your AN at the beginning: I’m really REALLY sorry I haven’t been reviewing, but I was on vacation, and I had not dared to log on to AFF while I was at my relatives’ house; I doubted they would have approved.
    Hmm, I dunno if challenging the Hokage is a possible way to gain a nomination. If anything, I think it would have the opposite effect. . . . Interesting vocabulary, Naruto, since when did you speak like that? . . . Heheh, I liked that bit: “I’m really thinking of boarding up that window.” . . . Oh, whoops: “Jiraiya chuckled as he through his leg over” I think you mean “threw,” not “through.” . . . “He’s not as stupid as he likes to make people think.” I dunno. I can picture him being not as dumb as people would think, but I can’t picture him doing the stuff with the paperwork and all that. But I guess that just goes to show how narrow-minded I can be. . . . Trump card, eh? Hmmm.
    That was interesting. “The Hokage has been challenged.” “What?!” CRASH!! Nice timing. . . . Yeah, that was funny, Jiraiya. ^^. . . . Pssh. Some council of elders. More like council of idiots.

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2008
    Chapter 8: Funny bit about Ino fussing over Naruto. ^^ . . . I’d love to see how Sakura looks. . . . Boy, Naruto, I’d be just as clueless myself with all this dating stuff. I actually get awkward when the guy does it all for me. Maybe you and I should get together sometime? ^^ . . . God, Naruto’s cute when he’s happy. . . . I got to say, I’m intrigued with this story. Especially because the summary says it’s a Sasuke and Naruto fic, and there’s no hint of it going anywhere near that route. I wonder if it will end up as Sasuke and Naruto in the end. . . . I feel bad for Sasuke. I gotta say, though, he doesn’t seem to be as smart in this fic as I would expect him to be. . . . Uhm, “Tsunade-sama is a little ruff on him,” I think you mean “rough.”
    Hahaha, that was funny when Sakura said, “I knew it!” ^^ . . . Interesting. Just when the relationship is at its most intimate, there’s a spark of unease.

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 24, 2008
    (I review as I read.)
    (I haven’t been able to review lately because I was on vacation.)
    Chapter 7: I liked the “DATE! KISS!” part. . . . I don’t think Sasuke would appreciate it all that much, Naruto. But he’s probably lonely anyways. . . . Oh, what am I talking about? I really liked the paragraph beginning with “Sasuke’s long fingers.” That gave me chills. . . . Hee hee, error: “Dame Teme!” I think you mean “Damn.” XD . . . Heh, nice one, Naruto, crashing out of bed like that. X) . . . Yeah, I know, Sakura, where have you been? Naruto’s freakin’ hawt! And you hadn’t noticed?! . . . I like Sakura’s attention to Naruto here. . . . Nice bit about “They didn’t see the seething Uchiha across the street, shooting daggers with his red-tinted eyes.” . . . Just wait, Naruto, she’s setting up a surprise for you, I can tell! . . . Knew it. . . . Pssh. Sasuke’s supposed to be perceptive. Is he in a little DENIAL??? . . . Yeah, you better hurry, Sasuke.
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  • From ANON - lly on January 22, 2008
    hey your story is great i would love to know when you update
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  • From serenagold on January 22, 2008
    YAY!



    An thus, a new era of cloning began in Konohagure...
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  • From ringpop on January 22, 2008
    Great last two chapters!!!
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  • From ringpop on January 21, 2008
    I add chapters when you guys review....simple...Oh! I love this fic by the way : ]
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  • From Sessygirl on January 18, 2008
    Very Hot... although now Naruto is in a rather nasty little bind... hopefully he and Sasuke can figure out how to get out of it without anyone getting too hurt.

    Update soon.

    -Akiru-
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  • From serenagold on January 18, 2008
    hahaha YAY! They finally got together (offically)! What a way to celebrate becoming Hokage! ;)


    But yeah, what are they gonna do now? I'd like to suggest getting Sakura involved and writing some threesomes... but I doubt that not only will that not work with the story, half your fan base will probably revolt! I have no idea what you're going to do to resolve this, but I can't wait to find out! Keep up the great work! I'll be here, waiting. ^^ hehehe~
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  • From argona on January 18, 2008
    oh my god I realy love this story!a new chapter is here!!!
    I read the whole story in one day!(while I had to study for my exam^^)
    u rock!I prefer susuke as the seme but this story is soo good that I dont care.
    more pleaseeeeeeeee
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  • From spoon10488 on January 18, 2008
    What are they going to do now? duhduhduh! Oh, dear They really are in a mess now. ( a hot and sticky mess) Will Sakura find out? Will the concil?
    Awesome chapter can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From ANON - Okami-chan on January 16, 2008
    No way! Come on you need to update quickly! Awesome chapter by the way! ^_^
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