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Reviews for Last Chance

By : sakuyalove
  • From Chria on March 16, 2008
    LOL I love this. It has a surprising happy ending. sweet.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 10, 2008
    Chapter 24: ‘Kay, thanks for the clarification. ^^
    Wuh-oh. No knocking? Bad. Hide, guys! . . . . Oh, that’s a cool shot, seeing Sasuke all cool and everything. =) . . . . Nice save, Sasuke. . . . Heh. I can so see the part when he teleports to the training ground and immediately: “YOU BASTARD!!” as on a manga page. XD . . . . “Ace in the hole.” God, that sounds cruel, true or not. . . . “Posed as his ANBU Captain.” Does Sakura not know that he is the ANBU Captain? . . . . Boy, that’s not something you see everyday, Sakura and Sasuke fighting each other like hell. . . . Okay, where did the mental images come from? That was kind of out of the blue. . . . “Trade nights.” I can’t believe Sasuke’s suggesting this so easily. . . . I wonder how Naruto’s going to feel about all this.
    I’d be scared too if two competitors fighting over me walked in banged up but smiling. Yeesh. That’s a sure signal that you’re in deep trouble. o_o . . . . Hah. Great line. “BUT I’M THE HOKAGE!!!” XDD
    Wow. Comedic ending with Naruto in trouble. Didn’t see that coming. ő_ô

    Wha?! M-Preg?! Seriously?! I’m glad there’s going to be a sequel, because there are some unanswered questions in this story. Naruto seems to have some big secret about the Kyuubi.
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  • From ValkyrieNiennaHelyanwe on March 09, 2008
    yeah! I love this story. hehe. it seemed to abruptly end there, but it was also a perfect ending. i cracked up when i read the last bit.

    as a side note, can you add a chapter to your story when you post the sequel? i sometimes miss stories when reading through, and i really dont wanna miss yours. i have firefox, and the add on Story Monitor, and your is right under there, but I dont have a ton of time to check authors out with the shear volume of fics i have saved from this site and others. Story Monitor is my fic lifesaver. *grins*
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  • From ANON - WHAT!!! on March 09, 2008
    Not only that but you didn't ever get to where Naruto admits to merging with the fox, right? i don't remember reading that the first time around.
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  • From ANON - WHAT!!! on March 08, 2008
    Worse ending ever!!! sorry really I just really don't like Sakura.
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  • From roelyrodriguez1 on March 08, 2008
    very good story can't wait for the sequel
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  • From tash1021 on March 08, 2008
    awew how cute every1 is happy^.^
    now they can for fill naruto little fantasy **evil smile**
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  • From ANON - vixenia on March 08, 2008
    XD yay i loved this! T.T there should be a sequal. >.> with sasuke pregnant... he still needs to have a child right. the council said so. WHINES!
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  • From narutovixen383 on March 08, 2008
    Awwww, I really do love this story a lot, but I am so disappointed at the ending. Honestly, Sakura does not deserve Naruto!!! *takes Naruto away and locks him up with Sasuke* There that solves all of my problems! Hahaha! However, this story was well written and I did enjoy it! Looking forward to the sequel!
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  • From ANON - noone in particular on March 08, 2008
    I seriously hoped it would end this way. I really enjoyed this story and I look forward to reading the sequel. Thanks
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  • From serenagold on March 08, 2008
    YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!

    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    I'm so excited. I love this story and the ending was great!! "You guys are gonna kill me!" Naruto is so doomed. hehheheheheh hahahahahahahha bwahhahahahahhahahahahha =^^=

    Can't wait for the sequel. Although I'm really not fond of the whole mpreg thing, I can't wait till Sakura and Sasuke find out about Naruto's hidden merger. (I wonder if it will affect the baby Sakura's carrying? As far as Naruto is aware, Sakura got pregnant before the merger was complete... He's going to be pretty shocked if the baby comes out with whiskers, fur or a tail. hehe. ) Anyway, keep up the good work! I'll be waiting.
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  • From ANON - taiin_tatsu on March 08, 2008
    i love your story the ending was fast but good please email me for the second part for the story hope to get it soon ;) thank you
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  • From snnj11220 on March 07, 2008
    Hmm so I see Sakura is as conniving as always. Naruto is going to be upset if/when he finds out she is using this supposed pregnancy to back him into marrying her. Loved the smut in this chapter and I am happy to see that Sasuke is willing to take some control over the situation as far as telling Sakura about them. Because he cares about her Naruto is too kind to tell her he doesn't want to marry her. And I hope Hiroshi gets what he has coming to him!
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  • From ladyvaltaya on March 06, 2008
    That's right, Sasu-kitty, you keep Naruto right where he belongs- in your arms. ^_^ Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 06, 2008
    Chapter 23: Err, I hate to say it, but I thought Sasuke reacted a little too quickly to Naruto’s outburst and revelation. And, uh, I thought Sasuke would want to know why instead of just . . . I dunno. I just thought he reacted to everything too fast. . . . “Twitched his neck to the left?” What was that? (*confused*) . . . . Um, you spelled “raping” as “rapping.” . . . . Also, does Naruto know the difference between sexual desire and love? . . . . Alright, I really like it when Sasuke figures out why the slowness and then turns the tables on Naruto. ^^ . . . . What I love is how unsure you make the audience of, “Is Sasuke going to screw Naruto? Or is he going to make Naruto screw him?” ^^ . . . . Pssh. That’s not love, Naruto. That’s desire. ¬_¬ . . . . Whoa. I loved it when Naruto’s eyes went red and he growled, but it went by too rushed. . . . But Sakura already knows about them; she found Sasuke’s shirt. And didn’t Naruto even reveal that to her? Does Naruto remember that he let it slip? I know he didn’t notice at the time, but maybe he remembered it later?
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