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Reviews for To Love and be Loved

By : ringpop
  • From Bookworm51485 on November 18, 2007
    Well I'm glad to see an apology to Lady Kaze. I was actually enjoying this story but you turned me off so badly with the reaction you had to her cc. I've had my own really bad experiences with nasty authors and every time another one pops up it annoys me. But seeing that you have apologized, I will give you props for that. Most people would move on and pretend like nothing was wrong. So good on you.

    On another note, I will say don't be so sensitive. The best writers in the world aren't perfect, that's why they have editors. Criticism isn't meant to insult you or hurt your feelings, or to take you out of your writing, just help you to improve. The true testament to your skill as a writer would be whether you could take something and become better, while still holding on to your personal style. And that's it really.
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  • From ANON - Rosemary on November 18, 2007
    Ohhhh! My baby is stressed! *cuddles* we'll have to use some "stress relief" techniques ne? *suggestive smirk*
    I drool over the fear of the night... an excuse to sleep with you! (not that i needed one...*shifty eyes*)
    More kisses must be shared! Yummy... I must mark that body which is rightfully mine!
    So you know... i could be on at all hours soon because i just finished my exams! *dances* now only Years 11 and 12 left to go! ...then uni... damn it all!
    Yes, yes, i do realise i am a retard which notices weird things (but i'll only admit that to you, my little naru-chan)
    Bye my love!
    BTW anyone who happens to disagree with how hot I am in glasses... you suck!

    Love S'uke
    xoxoxox
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  • From masteryoshi88 on November 18, 2007
    Cute....
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  • From LadyWolf on November 18, 2007
    I usually wait until the last chapter to comment.....;o) I love this fic, they are so freakin' cute!!!!
    I can't wait until you post the next one!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2007
    How sweet! Waiting for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on November 18, 2007
    I like, I like alot. Sorry I have nothing encouraging to say about this chapter. I'm really sleepy and it's only 11:47. I'll make up for it in the next chapters review.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - DesperadoSweetie on November 18, 2007
    Ahhh that was so cute. I just love those two together.

    I am looking forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - Rosemary on November 14, 2007
    ever notice how corny the reveiw button for this is... seriously darl it says "reveiw to love and be loved" its sooo cute and such a pun... gotta love those puns...
    Anyway, MY NARU-CHAN IS SICK!! NAUGHTY NARU HOW COULD YOU LET THIS HAPPEN TO YOURSELF?!
    ...Now i have to look after you until your fever goes down... *shakes head* ... but days of watching you sleep doesn't seem too bad... *swoons*
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  • From nm1716 on November 11, 2007
    OOO, How cute. I love it and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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  • From ANON - Maddy on November 07, 2007
    I think that this story is pretty good so far, and that it can turn out to be a great story.

    Err, I'm pretty sure that what Lady Kaze was saying wasn't a flame or even close. It was constructive criticism, and when it's taken seriously, it can really help the author improve their writing skills, and what author doesn't want that, lol. When I read it, it really didn't sound like they were trying to make you change the way you write at all. I'd love to get reviews like that instead of the ones that are like 'OMG!!! update soooooon please!'.

    And the thing about the reviews, I think that Lady Kaze was just pointing out that alot of people write stories only to get alot of reviews, and that that's not what writing fanfics should be about. But since you pointed out that it was to keep a schedule, that might be cleared up now. There are lots of other ways to do that like just updating once a week, etc. But since you want to do it with the whole reviews thing, that's your decision.

    Anyway, this is not a definitely not a flame. Just my opinion as a reader of your story, you know? But if you don't want reviews like this anymore, just say not to give you constructive criticism or something.

    I look forward to your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lady Kaze on November 07, 2007
    you're very welcome for the 'minimal' comments! I'm sorry you're sensitive about the comments but they weren't meant to hurt :-D
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  • From Midnightstorm on November 07, 2007
    First off, the story is good and has potential.

    I know you're sensitive about your writing....in a way so am i. but i think some of what lady kaze said made sense and getting such a review is a compliment since the person has spent that much time reading you story and looking at it. and some of the suggestions she has made like bouncing your ideas off someone else make sense. The story does seem sort of rushed though...it's just my opinion.

    lastly it's sometimes nice to read the recommended stories just for kicks, not to change ur style of writing cos if u did change it then it wouldn't be you. to clear up this review, my 'tone' is not superior and it's pretty bland. and i do love ur story and will continue reading it wherever it goes.

    if you don't want criticism but just want reviews add a sentence that says "please give me only compliments and positive insights in your reviews" while asking for reviews because then people will know not to hurt your feelings.
    ja na
    Taka
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  • From masteryoshi88 on November 07, 2007
    Another cute chapter. Poor Naruto, getting a fever like that.

    *shameless plug* Read my new fanfic, "Your Blood Is Like Wine To Me" *end*
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 06, 2007
    *does happy update dance* thanx!
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  • From ANON - Vivi & Venny on November 06, 2007
    Vivi: Wow, haven't heard from you in awhile~!

    Venny: .....That's cuz we haven't been on the laptop, Vivi.

    Vivi:.....Shuddaup.

    Venny: Man, how did you know me and Viv like cat humanoid!Sasuke, and fox humanoid!Naruto? Been stalking us, eh? XDDD

    Vivi: Ugh~! Through the whole thing I wanted to just shake Sasuke and yell 'Fuck him you idiot! Do it, quick! Before he argues about how he wants to be Seme!'

    Venny: Chick, whoever says ANYTHING bad about your writing; tell them to go screw themselves with a metal dildo. Your stories effin' kick all kinds of arse.

    Vivi: Gawd, I missed your stories~! Did you update any of the other when we were away?

    Venny: We can always go check, hun.

    Vivi: Right, right~! So say the ending, Venny.

    Venny: I missed ya babe, your stories still give me those crazy fanboi tingles. Till next time you update, chicklet.

    Vivi: Ja~!

    ~Vivi & Venny
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