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By : ringpop
  • From sameyler on June 20, 2008
    i like it. well heres something for you ifound its so cute.

    http://i253.photobucket.com/albums/hh52/penny_k34_2/SasuNaru_Neko_Luff_by_shadowkatz.jpg
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  • From Sayuri on February 10, 2008
    =/ That sucks. I don't really know why you'd be so fussed if people came over here to read instead of there, and since there's people here who might not necessarily want to join the other place. I think you've made it more troublesome for yourself and others, and maybe you've lost some readers. *shrug*
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  • From ANON - vixenia on February 10, 2008
    O.o where are you reposting the story. please send me the link. www.maggieschoeff@msn.com
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  • From ANON - renee on February 07, 2008
    i am really liking your story. i have seen this in other storys and i was wondering if you could tell me what teme and dobe mean
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  • From ANON - Kayo on January 29, 2008
    OMG! Still confused about the rejection! And confused about the kit! But I don't care, cuz they're all so cute! Here, I'm trying to fulfill that 24 review quota, but omg! I want another update! I know, I'm greedy. It's cuz they're nekos, I can't resist. (and so full of of lovable, complicate goodness!)
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  • From ANON - taiintatsu on January 29, 2008
    hey is cute story i love it hope you can update soon i would to know if you can email me or something to be updates with your story thanks
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  • From nekochannya on January 27, 2008
    This is intriguing...kiba's hateful... and Naruto and Sasuke are so cute!!! ^.^ Wonder who's the kid...??? nyah!!!!!
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  • From NaruSasu422 on January 27, 2008
    great story cant wait for next chapter plz i beg u can we have lemon'

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  • From ANON - Damp on January 27, 2008
    Naruto stared at his friend daunted and dejected for a few seconds. "Fine." Naruto said, getting himself up off the ground and walking towards the confused little boy, hoisting him up like a log between his hip and arm. "I'll just become a host and make enough money to support the both of us by myself!" Naruto huffed, turning and walking away, the kit in his arm giggling happily.
    Sasuke's eyes glazed over at the images of a naked willing Naruto sprawled out on a bed with the sheets rumpled beneath his tan sweating body and him laying there erect, all sexy, waiting for some thick hard cock to pound him into the mattress. "Naruto…" Sasuke drooled. Wait…..someone else's thick hard cock! "NARUTO!" Sasuke ran to catch up with the fleeting teen. "Naruto!" Sasuke grabbed Naruto's elbow.


    Smart Naruto, seme's can't stand it when their property is taken from them or used by another >XD.

    -Damp
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  • From MichiTheThird on January 27, 2008
    before I start the review:

    ...*moment of silence* I feel like smacking my

    forehead all of a sudden. It wasn't until you said

    "read my other fics!" that I realized that I haven't

    read your other fics yet! :o But, it's all good cause

    now I have something to do inbetween updates!!

    x3 *absolute glee* (I'm really supposed to be

    finishing my own fic, but I can't help it once I'm

    absorbed into a story! ;o; )

    actual review:

    "I don't see a place to sit." Shikamaru managed to

    mix a yell and laziness together into the same tone,

    over the blaring music.

    -kee hee...he's multi-talented XD-

    Sasuke was shocked. That guy was about thee

    ugliest thing he'd ever seen.

    -lmao! Oh cosmos...I had a difficult time trying to

    hold back my laughter in order not to wake up

    everyone in the house.

    Somewhere in his head he thought that this wasn't

    right, that he should just let love take its

    course.....but god damn! Love's course was taking

    too damn long!

    -I'm right there with you Sasuke! ...wow, I'm

    surprised how much I like Sasuke in this fic. I

    usually always take Naruto's side! And I realized

    that just now...I'm kind of shocked.-

    Sasuke ran into the young boy and comically

    flipped over him a few times, landing face first in

    the dirt a few yards away.

    -*winces* Ooo, that's gotta hurt. Poor Sasuke,

    he's having an awful week. -

    Sasuke stared blandly at the young boy's bright

    orange shirt and white shorts. "We've got to take

    him to KitCare or something!" Sasuke continued

    to back away.

    -It's the orange shirt, isn't Sasuke!? Don't look

    down on the kid just because of his choice of

    clothing color! XD-

    "Naruto…" Sasuke drooled. Wait…..someone else's thick hard cock! "NARUTO!"

    -PFFT! Ha ha ha ha...Stay in reality, Sasuke...get that mind outta the gutter. x3 Of course, I'm one to talk...-

    Yay! Another excellent chapter! LOL! I love how that kid materialized out of nowhere, but since he's helping move the SasuNaru along, I don't care how he got there! XD Come on Sasuke...take a closer look at that kid and see what Naruto sees~
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  • From ANON - Vivi & Venny on January 26, 2008
    Vivi: Where were we? Well I had finals, and tests, and i have a contest coming up where i have to sing a solo.

    Venny: I was here, and there. Don't really remember anymore. Aww, I'm a sweetheart, ne? ^-^ -blushes- Now see what ya did? You mabe me blush. XD

    Vivi: We're your favorite pair of reviews, huh? Well your DEFIANTLY one of my fav authoress. I dunno about Venny-

    Venny: Dun even play like that. Course she's one of my favorite authoresses. Oh? You want my 'slutty little body', do ya? That's fine with me, babe! =3

    Vivi: Aye, that baby tis so cute~! ;3 I dunno if I've ever seen somebody make a baby between Sasuke, and Naru that looked like that.

    Venny: I usually love your Kiba's. But this one is a serious douche bag.

    Vivi: LMAO!! 'Naruto threw on the flashing lights and silent sirens for Sasuke to put S.M.O.H., S.W.I.F, S.W.A.T. The-Boy-Is-Miiine, WHATEVER! ' oh-oh gawd.....i ..can't.....breath!!

    Venny: Lmfao! Poor Gaara! Can never get a break because of Shukaku.

    Vivi: -stops laughing- Puh-lease. Garra has so many fucking fan girls it's not even funny. Most of them like him BECAUSE of Shukaku. Hell! I like him because of Shukaku....And he's sexy red hair, and tattoo. And-

    Venny: Okay. No time for your long ass rant. We have church tomarrow, damn it. and i WILL NOT leave you alone to read so you can spoil it for me later.

    Vivi:...Fine, ya big baby. Say the ending then.

    Venny: Later~

    ~Vivi & Venny

    P.S- Venny: Was that smile a invitation~?
    Vivi: -hits him upside the head- I said down boy!

    P.S.S: Vivi: We remembered to rate! ^-^
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  • From ANON - animelover on January 26, 2008
    yeah baby! yet another update that i can drool over. ;-) the one thing i found so funny is naru blurts out he and sasu can raise the kit, and that he always wanted to raise a kit with someone he loved; yet (unless i read it wrong) sasu seemed to miss the "with someone I love" part. i mean he just asked sasu to help raise the kit and then in a roundabout way confesses. or did i misread?

    anyway, normally is naruto that's dense but sasuke got the title in this ch. lol! keep up the good work!
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  • From MissMayumi on January 25, 2008
    ZeeZee! Wahh! I miss you! =[ you haven't been on yahoo in forever!

    Please get on soon, I hope your doing well!
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  • From lexjamandme on January 25, 2008
    So cute! I love Sasuke at the end. How funny... Naruto is GOOOOOD. ;)
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  • From ANON - Kayo on January 23, 2008
    Update! Update! I demand an update! How close are we to 20?!!! It was so cute! My favorite parts were Sasuke thinking about his/narus kits, naru and sasu talking about kits, and the flashback of becoming best friends, and the flashback of sasuke breaking up with neji and naruto being there wanting in the house, and the flashback about when they specifically became friends with benefits. The scenes are a little disjointed, and I would like more detail (just cuz I'm that kind of person...) but overall, a solid fic. Keep writing.
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