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By : 198027
  • From lexjamandme on December 09, 2007
    Ahhhhh... so darn beautiful! I'm sad about Naruto not being an angel of death anymore. Does that means he's a stay home mommy? Oh, and your descriptions of Sasuke and Naruto's reactions to the babies were beautiful. Good job. Looking forward to the next.
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  • From LadyRonin on December 09, 2007
    this chapter was alright, the sap brought tears to my eyes and the thought of a beat up sasuke and a pased out sakura brought laughter to my mouth. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2007
    How cute!! I bet Sasuke's happy the kids are finally here and no more moody Naruto! Hooray!! Can't wait to read the ending!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2007
    I'm glad thse two have made up. Don't worry Sasuke, only 6 more months to go then Naruto will be back to normal. Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - animelover on December 08, 2007
    awwww, po l'il naruchan is preggers ... *sniffle* this is so cute, and he's even having cravings with mood swings. PERFECT! why can't more guys get pregnant just for the experience? LOL! The way you portray naru while he's pregnant is awesome. oh by the way, did sakura get killed off or put in an asylum so she won't threaten the baby? hmmmm ... oh well, let's see what else you got up your sleeve. ;-)
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  • From LadyRonin on December 08, 2007
    this was a nice little filler chapter. i have to say i love this story and the direction that you seem to be developing the characters personalities (preggo emotional naruto is a riot). i can't wait til the next update.
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  • From lexjamandme on December 08, 2007
    Ahhh... so cute! Gotta love an emotional Naruto. It's all the better because Sasuke is so not emotional that watching him stand there petrified is priceless. Can't wait for the next.
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  • From ANON - Rho on December 07, 2007
    Your story makes me happy in my soul. I adore the idea of them having wings and I would be honored to draw them for you if you wish. I've also noticed that as the story progresses that your writing style improves as does the amount of character development. The plot is well crafted and I look forward to reading more! Tee hee, Naru is preggers. >3
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 05, 2007
    Our little Naruto is going to be a mom, how wonderful!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From LadyRonin on December 05, 2007
    i liked this chapter. i am glad mother-hen iruka and grand-ma tsunande are on the way. i didn't think this chapter was all that angsty and if that was what you were going for then this wasn't it. but i like the way that you ended up writing this, i hope you continue in this same vein if it was unintentional. sometimes it is slick when everything isn't always so hard (although if you come up with some hardcore angst i just want to say bring it on). i can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From dragoncisco on December 04, 2007
    The Hokage is just being mean not telling Iruka. He is going to be an emotional mess by the time he gets there. Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Mrs.Itachi Uchiha(Kendra SakuNohara) on December 04, 2007
    Wow!!
    Awsome!!
    I Love It!!
    The Last Time I Read It Was About At Chapter 5!!
    You Added More Chapters!!
    I Want More Pleaz!!
    The Story's Awsome!!^^
    (I Think I Was LitaKino77 Of Whatever>.>FLOLF!!Awome!!)
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  • From lexjamandme on December 04, 2007
    Awesome, awesome, awesome. Silly summoning frogs... it's just impossible to find good help now adays.
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  • From Deandraquin on December 04, 2007
    Great chapter. I even had a few good laughs, thinking back at the time my sister was pregnant. I remember the cravings very well. Odd combinations on the most ridicules times. I feel sorry for Sasuke hi hi hi. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - vivpiv on December 03, 2007
    I think that the chapter wasn't bad at all. And don't worry you're not the only one who can't write battle scenes. I'm bad at them too. And if you say that you've got the chapters done up to 24 it means that the story won't be ending soon, which makes me happy and excited. I can't wait to see what surprises you've got under your sleeve for it. So Sasuke wants a child, huh? I have a feeling it won't be only one... But we'll see. Update when you can.
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