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From ANON - fluffy_cloud on December 21, 2007
honestly, i don't care whatever happens to sakura since every story i read mostly got her bashed as spoiled brat, pink leecher etc ^^ . ookaayy, maybe i'm getting veeryy used of that situation. i also read one which she killed herself because she couldn't accept the facts that she couldn't get sasuke. so, if you feel that you treated sakura very badly and felt guilty, maybe can get her lost her memory or something if you don't want to end her character.

cheers ^^
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From zsfantasy on December 20, 2007
Personally, I don't like Sakura, so bash her all you want to!!!! Besides, this is your story, if someone doesn't like the way you are writing it, then they can go write there own! Unfortunately, you will never be able to please everyone, it just can't be done. So stick to what you want to write and the people who like it will continue to read. PS. I love your story and I hope that you don't change a darn thing about it! :)
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From LadyWolf on December 20, 2007
I say just put the pathetic girl out of her misery. She needs to move on. either leave the village for some training, maybe a connection the Hokage has and come back as a better person. Or, I hate to say it kill her off....Or find someone else for her to love.....
But regardless of all the Sakura bashing, I still love reading this story, please keep it up.
You definitely will get some bad reviews but so what? Everyone is entitled to there opinion. And if they stop reading it because of that then their lost because they are missing a good story...

Keep it going!!!!!!
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From mls on December 20, 2007
i love the stor as is!! i like that sakura is crazy!!!
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From monrque on December 20, 2007
i think that maybe you could give her some happiness. but i dont care either way
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From on December 20, 2007
In all honesty I don't hate Sakura either, she's definitly not my favorite, but I don't think that your fic is ruined because you've made her into a raging nut case. First it's your fic and I think you should do whatever you want with it. Second this is fanfiction, it don't have to be like the Manga; that's the beauty of writing fanfics. Third I personally feel that flames are stupid and pointless; if you don't like the story don't read. Great fic btw and nice fan work that was done for your story, the artist has good talent. Don't let a bad review get you down. Just keep doing what your doing; many people are enjoying this fic.
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From LadyRonin on December 20, 2007
heck no torture sakura til you send those fuzzy pink strands til the end. i don't think that it interefers or in any way misses with the storyline, but it is funny as hell (everyone should always appreciate the punching bag). please continue the story the way you planned because so far i have really enjoyed it.
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From nawatia on December 20, 2007
Hmmmm....Sakura...The chick is INSANE. I was wondering why she wasn't locked up and was kind of waiting for her to go the ninja version of postal on Naruto. Her character is kind of pitiful, but hey - it is your story! You are the god of your little alternate universe. There is no reason to threaten not to read the story, just express oppinions gracefully, and find something else to read. The writing of the story belongs to the author, we readers are along for the ride.
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From madyamisam on December 20, 2007
Don't mean to sound mean but I think Snowcat has made a very good point. The only people that will still enjoy what you've done with Sakura's character are Sakura haters. For the rest of us the bashing has gone on long enough. Ok it was funny the first couple of times in the chapter or two but the joke is running dry. In terms of story writing, it's overdone and to be quite frank, boring because you're obviously not planning to develop Sakura's character in anyway. Since you've killed off pretty much most of the villans in the first few chapters I'd have figured when I read about Sakura and her attitude, I was wondering if you'll be making her into a real villain to complicate the relationship of our protagonists along with Naruto dealing with his depression. I hoped you would make her into a manipulative bitch that'll put some real strain into Naruto and Sasuke's relationship but after 20+ chapters of "Sasuke!" Glomp. Smack. I would be ready to call it quits on reading this story altogether. Had it not for the fact that you've made a good plot and a cool OC like Kuro and possible villain out of Hiashi. I really would have given up on reading this. It's not that I've got no sense of humour. I'm all for some lighthearted fluff and a joke now and then to break up the angst but a "running gag" does not belong in a story that raises serious issues such as rape, Post-traumatic stress and depression. Since you're asking for an opinion here it is.

Looking back on hindsight, if you had asked this question about 15 chapters previously. I'd give you the following options...
1) Develop Sakura's character and make her a really nasty, manipulative villain. i.e. she cleverly breaks Naruto and Sasuke's relationship through lies and deceit.
2) Develop Sakura's character and make her a reformed character... i.e. make her a better person by allowing her to see the error of her ways and she ends up being Naruto's best friend and confidante whenever he and Sasuke hit up a snag in their relationship.
3) Kill her

Looking at the story now after 22 chapters, you have only have one real option in my eyes if you want to redeem this story.

1) Stop character bashing (Leave that to your readers and the anti-Sakura forums) and give her some bloody character development immediately. Preferably in the next chapter or the next time you decide to write about her. You can kill her off at some other point but because she's still here after 22 chapters at this point she's an eyesore that won't go away by simply killing her but you'll end up damaging your story even more if you keep her the way she is now.

I don't mean to sound negative in this review but I only give reviews because I honestly like the story, otherwise I would not even bother wasting time typing about a piece of crap. I like the concept of the Black Angels. I love Kuro, I like to know more how Naruto's going to cope with the depression. What Hiashi may be scheming (since he certainly seems like a villain in this). The only thing that irks me is and I think is ruining an otherwise good story is your Sakura bashing. Not because I'm a Sakura fan (I don't even like her) but purely because it's pretty much the same thing over and over again. You might as well have copied and pasted a paragraph of her getting her ass kicked by Tsunade/Naruto/Sasuke/whoever from a previous chapter into your next update. Anyway these are my thoughts on this. Looking forward to reading what's gonna happen next however, I'm just going to scroll past anything that has anything to do with Sakura unless you're actually gonna be doing something different with her. Madyamisam
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From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2007
I don't care which you chose. I'm like both ideas.
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From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on December 20, 2007
Honestly I'd like to see you force a change in Sakura's attitude. I'll be the first to say that Sakura was a pathetic Sasuke-chasing blind moron in the first half of Naruto but after the time skip she did grow up and become likeable so it would be nice to see her mature in your fic as well. But if you don't think you can make her tolerable in this fic then kill her but in a way that sorta redeems her, like her defending Naruto's children from an assassin or something.
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From ANON - Hige on December 20, 2007
Lolz.. I do hate Sakura a LOT more than... more than... gah! i just hate her...

but i'll pretty much agree to ms.reviewer... not about the 'not reading the story anymore' but the sakura bashing.
If removing that part of Sakura would ruin the plot that YOU wanted for the story then please do continue... I suggest that you just lessen it a bit? Cause I must say it's hard to change the plot once you've already planned everything.

Sorry for lurking for 22 long chapters... and just reviewing now... but i'll stay with ya till the end.

Good luck with the future chapters

and keep it up! ^.^
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From lolyah on December 20, 2007
Oh for God's sake, people are people, whether weird or crazy but still people. When I was writing fics I got loads of flames about my story, some said they sucked, some said quite a lot... some were generous of saying why it sucked, some refused to even if I asked them why. That's just life.

Having no flames is having no success. Once you get flames, you get success.
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From UrbanPhoenix on December 20, 2007
First and for most, it is your story. Do as you will. I personally like the change in Sakura. Because it's a side not everyone sees in Naruto characters.

Secondly, each person has their own opinion. You can either take it to heart, or let it go over your head. Your choice.

I will continue to read either way.
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From ANON - animelover on December 19, 2007
well, you've done it again .. SMASHING GOOD JOB! i almost cried when naru fell to his death, but i think you've captured postpartum depression quite well (not that i'd know much about it). will your story continue while the twins are at the academy?

have a good holiday and hope to see you soon!

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