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Reviews for The Crimson Angel

By : 198027
  • From Rymika on January 13, 2008
    Oh, this story is just the best! In other words I love it! Oh, how I wish that Naruto and Sasuke could just get married and have children in the real story. But you twist of things sure is good, so POST SOON OR I GO MAD!!! or something like that. ^_^
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  • From Gwyllion on January 13, 2008
    Just want to let you know how much I enjoyed reading this fic. It was absolutely sweet, heartwarming, angsty and so sad at the same time. It was an adventure and I didn't want it to stop. I'm glad you're still continuing this fic. The approach for this fic is quite different and a bit unique, with them being angels and all. But my favorite part was the MPREG! I have a secret love for fics that have that, and yours made me squee. Once again, thank you for sharing this wonderful fic. I love it SO very much. Please do keep up the awesome work! Will wait patiently for more future posts. :D

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  • From nawatia on January 13, 2008
    Whew! That Naruto, he is as fertile as a turtle!!!! Great chapter!
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  • From monrque on January 12, 2008
    i am so glad the you updated i love story.

    Please let them stay (the kids need others to be around)

    thanks for making my night
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on January 12, 2008
    aww naru-chan is preggy again congrats and hiashi damn him damn him to the pits of hell him and that smug look *bleh*. ok so hurry and update so i can review again and tell u how much i adore this fic and u as a writer ^_^
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  • From ANON - animelover on January 12, 2008
    yea, sakura and hiashi are GONE and about time too! sorry i'm a little behind in the reading and just got caught up today. awesome! they're going to kiss konoha goodbye, so the question remains is hiashi going to go for revenge?
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  • From koorimesbabygurl on December 28, 2007
    about time the wench got wat she deserved and ooohhohh i cant believe she killed their baby. poor naru first postpardum and now this our blonde ninja cant take no more pain well at least not right now. sasuke u better take care of him ^_^. cant wait to read more and ur doing a good job dont let nobody tell u wrong. its ur story, ur writing style and they can F*ck off. keep doing u ^_^
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  • From oohshiny on December 26, 2007
    THANK YOU!!!! FINALLY!!!! OMG, SAKURA FINALLY DIED, THAT BITCH!!! *sigh* w/e. shes dead now. BUT SHE KILLED THE NEXT BEBBIE!!! DX

    ....have a cookie =D http://photo.bldesign.org/photos/misc/cookie.jpg
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  • From madyamisam on December 26, 2007
    *bows and kowtows* THANK YOU, not just for killing that annoyance and putting an end to the monotony but to use her to forward the plot. I'm still surprised that Sakura had lasted this long and the times I've rolled my eyes saying 'Here we go again' but hey, no more complaints now. I love the angsty plot twist of the death of Naruto being pregnant again then having the miscarriage. I'm all for angsty stuff. Now that the annoyance is out of the way I hope to see what more and more complicated obstacles start to unfold for our unfortunate couple and maybe a little fluff about the wedding too. :D Ok, I know I'm nitpicking but considering that this is Adultfanfiction and we're all 'supposed' to be adults on this site or at least expecting smutt, it's not really necessary to put in authors notes stating that the lemon is coming and when the lemon ends. I used to do that when I first started writing fanfiction and that's always been because I was nervous but when I did stop putting author notes in the middle of the chapter, I got a lot of encouraging reviews for my smutt writing. :D Anyway, I'll stop here for now so I don't go off into a tangent and write another essay. I hope to see an update from you soon though take care. ;) Madyamisam
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2007
    Sasuke did do the right thing. Sakura killed their child for goodness sake. Tsunade was too leniet with her punishment. Life imprisonment? Oh yeah, that's punishment fitting the crime, NOT! Please continue!
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  • From LadyRonin on December 21, 2007
    i wish sasuke would have tortued her the first time he went to visit and not because i hate sakura but because she killed their baby, any parent would do that. i so love this story and i hope that youhave a nice christmas and look forward to the update (it will be like a christmas present).
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  • From ANON - Kick the can. on December 21, 2007
    Hahaha fuck that!! BASH HER MORE! It's awesome. Seriously... Sakura is totally, secretly like that. If Sasuke ever knocks up Naruto. Like woah!! Watch out.
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  • From KuroShinigami on December 21, 2007
    I'm not real fond of Sakura to start with however I think that her fan-girlism would drive her over the edge when she found sasuke to be gay, specially since with 'inner sakura' she doesn't seem exactly stable in the first place. also I think that it should be completely your decision as it's called creative licence. this is your story not anyone elses and no one should tell you, or attempt to tell you, how to write it.

    Reaper
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  • From Deandraquin on December 21, 2007
    Can't you send Sakura to Suna or something to get rid of her???? I personally don't mind the bashing. It's fanfic after all and I think all fanfics are written in the perspective of the writer. So if you want to keep up bashing Sakura that's your choice. I still think the story is GREAT!!! So my personal opinion: KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!
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  • From ANON - fluffy_cloud on December 21, 2007
    honestly, i don't care whatever happens to sakura since every story i read mostly got her bashed as spoiled brat, pink leecher etc ^^ . ookaayy, maybe i'm getting veeryy used of that situation. i also read one which she killed herself because she couldn't accept the facts that she couldn't get sasuke. so, if you feel that you treated sakura very badly and felt guilty, maybe can get her lost her memory or something if you don't want to end her character.

    cheers ^^
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